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           My favorite place has always been Mom’s house that place with family. It was a big wooden house and a big tree around house. There was a large garden behind the house. My Mom and my grandma they were like to grow herb and vegetables.There was a good weather, and fun things to do in a small city form where I lived there when I was a child. This town is an a small side city and as soon as you see it, you feel like not for from Bangkok. And also not far from the airport too. It was very special place in my heart. All of my family and relative they lived here. I spent time every summers with my Mom. I can just feel hot summer sun on my face. The weather is great ! I feel very happy and relax in my favorite place. It is just the little things that make Mom’s house so special to me.

           My Mom’s house is a place of family. When we met is always full of laughter. There are the old market in the morning and every other day in the evening near by my Mom’s house. There is small shop that open everyday, and as soon as you go in, you can see fresh produce, local craftspeople, gourmet edibles, live music, food, fun and more. I always like to go at the market every week. From here, I can go by walking. Whit a convenience and high quality, It was more convenience than I had in a big city. Sometime I can rid a bicycle. I try to make easy life. In the beginning that I learn God created “live in this world without condition” said be thankful for everything that you have in your life.

          The second things that I like my Mom’s house is atmosphere around city. The small town was safe. Every time I walk on the street people were nice. As I always say, it is usually to walk without scared when the night time. My Mom’s house seemed to have something special about it that set from apart to all at the rest. I wanted everything to stay the same. Growth is painful, change is painful, but nothing is as painful as staying stuck somewhere you don’t belong

For all these reasons, my Mom’s house is my favorite to go, if you don’t have a favorite place, I think you should think about family first. Sometime it’s a good to visit a favorite place where you can make special memories. By the way, in the image of God I created to live and die in my small town. I feel that it is safe to stay. In life we can go and live many place, but just one place that you belong and want to stay forever.

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My favorite place has always been Mon’s house that place with family, good weather, and fun things to do in a small city form where I live when I was a child. This town is an a small side city and as soon as you see it, you feel like not for from Bangkok. And also not far from the airport too. It was very special place in my heart. All of my family and relative they live here. I spent time every summers with my Mom. I can just feel hot summer sun on my face. The weather is great ! There are the old market in the morning and every other day in the evening near by my Mom’s house. There is small shop that open everyday, and as soon as you go in, you can see fresh produce, local craftspeople, gourmet edibles, live music, food, fun and more. I always like to go at the market every week. From here, I can go by walking. Whit a convenience and high quality, I feel very happy and relax in my favorite place. It is just the little things that make Mon’s house so special to me.

My Mom’s house is a place of family. When we met is always full of laughter. We went to the market by walking. It was more convenience than I had in a big city. Sometime I can rid a bicycle. I try to make easy life. In the beginning that I learn God created “live in this world without condition” said be thankful for everything that you have in your life.

The second things that I like my Mom’s house is atmosphere around city. The small town was safe. Every time I walk on the street people were nice. As I always say, it is usually to walk without scared to the dark. My Mom’s house seemed to have something special about it that set from apart to all at the rest. I wanted everything to stay the same. Growth is painful, change is painful, but nothing is as painful as staying stuck somewhere you don’t belong

For all these reasons, my Mom’s house is my favorite to go, if you don’t have a favorite place, I think you should think about family first. Sometime it’s a good to visit a favorite place where you can make special memories. By the way, in the image of God I created to live and die in my small town. I feel that it is safe to stay. In life we can go and live many place, but just one place that you belong and want to stay forever.

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My favorite place has always been Mom’s house that place with family, good weather, and fun things to do in a small city form where I live when I was a child. This town is an a small side city and as soon as you see it, you feel like not for from Bangkok. And also not far from the airport too. It was very special place in my heart. All of my family and relative they live here. I spent time every summers with my Mom. I can just feel hot summer sun on my face. The weather is great ! There are the old market in the morning and every other day in the evening near by my Mom’s house. There is small shop that open everyday, and as soon as you go in, you can see fresh produce, local craftspeople, gourmet edibles, live music, food, fun and more. I always like to go at the market every week. From here, I can go by walking. Whit a convenience and high quality, I feel very happy and relax in my favorite place. It is just the little things that make Mon’s house so special to me.

My Mom’s house is a place of family. When we met is always full of laughter. We went to the market by walking. It was more convenience than I had in a big city. Sometime I can rid a bicycle. I try to make easy life. In the beginning that I learn God created “live in this world without condition” said be thankful for everything that you have in your life.

The second things that I like my Mom’s house is atmosphere around city. The small town was safe. Every time I walk on the street people were nice. As I always say, it is usually to walk without scared to the dark. My Mom’s house seemed to have something special about it that set from apart to all at the rest. I wanted everything to stay the same. Growth is painful, change is painful, but nothing is as painful as staying stuck somewhere you don’t belong

For all these reasons, my Mom’s house is my favorite to go, if you don’t have a favorite place, I think you should think about family first. Sometime it’s a good to visit a favorite place where you can make special memories. By the way, in the image of God I created to live and die in my small town. I feel that it is safe to stay. In life we can go and live many place, but just one place that you belong and want to stay forever.

first draft

My favorite place has always been Mon’s house that place with family, good weather, and fun things to do in a small city form where I live when I was a child. This town is an a small side city and as soon as you see it, you feel like not for from Bangkok. And also not far from the airport too. It was very special place in my heart. All of my family and relative they live here. I spent time every summers with my Mom. I can just feel hot summer sun on my face. The weather is great ! There are the old market in the morning and every other day in the evening near by my Mom’s house. There is small shop that open everyday, and as soon as you go in, you can see fresh produce, local craftspeople, gourmet edibles, live music, food, fun and more. I always like to go at the market every week. From here, I can go by walking. Whit a convenience and high quality, I feel very happy and relax in my favorite place. It is just the little things that make Mon’s house so special to me.

My Mom’s house is a place of family. When we met is always full of laughter. We went to the market by walking. It was more convenience than I had in a big city. Sometime I can rid a bicycle. I try to make easy life. In the beginning that I learn God created “live in this world without condition” said be thankful for everything that you have in your life.

The second things that I like my Mom’s house is atmosphere around city. The small town was safe. Every time I walk on the street people were nice. As I always say, it is usually to walk without scared to the dark. My Mom’s house seemed to have something special about it that set from apart to all at the rest. I wanted everything to stay the same. Growth is painful, change is painful, but nothing is as painful as staying stuck somewhere you don’t belong.

In the image of God I created to live and die in my small town. I feel that it is safe to stay. In life we can go and live many place, but just one place that you belong and want to stay forever.

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