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Topic : My friend introduced me.

Descriptive essay

Friendship is one of the most important relationship. We are created with a deep desire for loving the communities and social engagement. Friendship is personal and look different to every individual.

At the age of six years old, I met my first best friend, Wisuda. She was about the same age to me, and she lived next door to my house. My aunt was the first person to introduced me to her. She told me that the family moving into the house next to us had a child around my age.At that age, I never anticipated how this new friend would change my life.

Whenever we hang out, she always tells me that she likes me very much because I’m always there anytime she’s in need for help.

When I entered high school, I met two friends, Thanthikorn and Thanthika who is twin. We were in the same class and we always helped each other. They were the most intelligent twin and always score the first place in the class. Our teachers really like Thanthikorn and Thanthika and our classmates like them because they are friendly. They had the pleasing manners, sweet words and a cheerful face. They have told me that I am so kind because I like to help other people. And they told me that I would be great at working in entertainment industry, such as writer and backstage crew. That made me think about my future to go to University.

At University, I met another best friend. Her name is Angkana .When I went to the class for the last semester. Our professor gave homework to write the essay about our best friend.

She wrote about me, I was a adorable friend, one of the best friends that she ever had. She had known me approximately seven years . The first-year at Burapha University. She  accompanied me to study the introduction courses and attending Freshmen Orientation in the first-year. We often joined many school activities together. Although each of us parted way to study the majors we chose on second-year, but we were hangout together after finished class anyway. I was so nice, kind, amiable and good consultant that everyone loves me.We always care each other because I believe that we as a human should treat other how we also want to receive back. Like Jesus, he forgave Peter even though Peter betrayed him. Peter betrayed Jesus but Jesus would never betray Peter.

Friend review

My friend introduced me.

Friendship is one of the most important relationship. We are created with a deep desire for loving the communities and social engagement. Friendship is personal and look different to every individual.

At the age of six years old, I met my first best friend, Zee(Shoud be the first name ). She was about the same age to me, and she lived next door to my house. My aunt was the first person to introduced me to her. She told me that the family moving into the house next to us had a child around my age. I couldn’t wait to meet her. At that age, I never anticipated how this new friend would change my life.

Whenever we hang out, she always tells me that she likes me very much because I’m always there anytime she’s in need for help.

When I entered high school, I met two friends, A and B (Shoud be the first name )who is twin. We were in the same class and we always helped each other. They were the most intelligent twin and always score the first place in the class. Our teachers really like A and B for their intelligence and the ❓students for their friendly nature. They had the pleasing manners, sweet words and a cheerful face. They always told me that I am kind,❓ (What do you mean?)intelligent because I likes to help other people. And they told me i would be great at working in entertainment industry, such as writer and backstage crew. That made me think about my future to go to University.

At University, I met another best friend. Her name is Nui. When I went to the class for the last semester. Our professor gave homework to write the essay about our best friend.

She wrote about me, I was a adorable friend, one of the best friends that she ever had. She had known me approximately seven years . The first-year at Burapha University. She  accompanied me to study the introduction courses and attending Freshmen Orientation in the first-year. We often joined many school activities together. Although each of us parted way to study the majors we chose on second-year, but we were joined at the hip❓ after finished class anyway. I was so nice, kind, amiable and good consultant that everyone loves me.We always care and stick with each other because I believe that we as a human should treat other how we also want to receive back. Like Jesus, he forgave Peter even though Peter betrayed him. Peter betrayed Jesus but Jesus would never betray Peter.

Nowadays, we occasionally contact each other due to the different time zones. Even if we have a different own way of life and responsibility. I am studying in the United State of America, I will always support and give her my hand if she’s ever in need for one.

In my life I know a lot of people but some of the people didn’t know me well and sometime leads to the misunderstanding and judgemental from them. I understand and forgive them just like Jesus always forgive us.

Review by Natthawan Piyapanee

2nd draft

My friend introduced me.

Friendship is one of the most important relationship. We are created with a deep desire for loving the communities and social engagement. Friendship is personal and look different to every individual.

At the age of six years old, I met my first best friend, Wisuda. She was about the same age to me, and she lived next door to my house. My aunt was the first person to introduced me to her. She told me that the family moving into the house next to us had a child around my age. I couldn’t wait to meet her. At that age, I never anticipated how this new friend would change my life.

Whenever we hang out, she always tells me that she likes me very much because I’m always there anytime she’s in need for help.

When I entered high school, I met two friends, Thanthikorn and Thanthika who is twin. We were in the same class and we always helped each other. They were the most intelligent twin and always score the first place in the class. Our teachers really like Thanthikorn and Thanthika for their intelligence and the students for their friendly nature. They had the pleasing manners, sweet words and a cheerful face. They have told me that I am kind, intelligent because I like to help other people. And they told me that I would be great at working in entertainment industry, such as writer and backstage crew. That made me think about my future to go to University.

At University, I met another best friend. Her name is Nui When I went to the class for the last semester. Our professor gave homework to write the essay about our best friend.

She wrote about me, I was a adorable friend, one of the best friends that she ever had. She had known me approximately seven years . The first-year at Burapha University. She  accompanied me to study the introduction courses and attending Freshmen Orientation in the first-year. We often joined many school activities together. Although each of us parted way to study the majors we chose on second-year, but we were having dinner after finished class anyway. I was so nice, kind, amiable and good consultant that everyone loves me.We always care and stick with each other because I believe that we as a human should treat other how we also want to receive back. Like Jesus, he forgave Peter even though Peter betrayed him. Peter betrayed Jesus but Jesus would never betray Peter.

first draft

My friend introduced me.

Friendships are one of the most important relationships. We were created with a deep desire for loving community and social engagement. Friendship is personal and looks different to every individual.

At the age of six years old, I met my first best friend, Zee. She was about the same age as me, and she lived next door to my house. My aunt was the first person to tell me about her. She told me that the people moving into the house next to ours had a child around my age. I couldn’t wait to meet her. At that age, I never anticipated how this new friend would change my life.

When I was with her, she always to me that she liked me very much. I had proved helpful when there was a need for help.

When I was in high school, I met my twin friends. They name A and B. We were study at the same class. We helped each other. They were the most intelligent twin and always stands first in the class. Our teachers like A and B for their intelligence and the students for their friendly nature. They had pleasing manners, sweet words and a cheerful face. They always told me that I am kind, intelligent because I likes to help other people. And they told me I good to work in entertainment line, such as the writer, or backstage. That made me think about my future to go to University.

When I was in the University, I met my another best friend. Her name is Nui. When I went to the class for the last semester. Our professor gave homework to writing about my best friend.

She wrote about me, I was a adorable friend, one of the best friends that she ever had. She had known me approximately seven years . The first-year in Burapha University. She had accompanied with me studying introduction courses and attending Freshmen Orientation in the first-year. We jointly often did many activities. Although each of us separated to study the majors we chose on second-year, but we were joined at the hip after finished class anyway. I was so nice, kind, amiable and good consultant that everyone loves me.We always care each other because if we like to be treated we have to treat others as we would like.Be like Jesus forgave Peter even though Peter betrayed Jesus. Peter betrayed Jesus but Jesus would never betray Peter.

Nowadays, we occasionally contact each other due to the different time zones. Even if we have a different own way of life and responsibility. I am study in the United State of America, I will always support and give her some help.

In my life I know a lot of people but some people do not know me well and get me wrong and say about me to other people. I understand and forgive them just like Jesus always forgive us.