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Theme: How to be come Jesus?

Topic idea: Who is my hero?

Essay: Cause and Effect Essay

Who is your hero? When I was young I watched a lot of heroes from Cartoons and movie sometime I read the books. I know superhero from another county. For example, In Japan They have a superhero name Ultraman. He is helps human from Monsters. In America They have a superhero name Supermen. He is helps human from the villain.” In Thailand, we have a superhero name king Bhumibol Adulyadej. “

Since I can remember my parent and my school always tell a story about Thai majesty. I have to studies Thai majesty in Thai History subject. My favorite majesty is king Bhumibol Adulyadei, also known as Rama IX of the Chakri Dynasty. But Thai people called him father. He is clever. He likes to play sports and write the song. He is the inventor.

          “Why Thai people called him father?”

He is loves Thai people and treats them like son and daughter. He is a nice king. He gives happiness and makes sacrifices for Thai people. Any problems happened anywhere in Thailand, He would reach there himself immediately. He does everything for Thai people. He always searching for a new projects to help Thai people to improve a good life. He had a lot of projects. Such as

  • Chang Hua Man Royal Project, Phetchaburi. This project is about an experimental farm where a range of experimental crops are being tested, not only to help the local people of the Phetchaburi area but farmers around the nation. In this place have a lot of different fruits and vegetables like a banana, papaya, pineapple, lime, rice, and rubber.

  • Royal Rain Project. This is the best project. He went to the countryside and sew a big problem about many areas faced the problem of drought. After he comes back palace he searching for how to help people. If He leaves it Thai people that area would be poor life. He is an experiment to make rainmaking much time until succeed it takes almost 4 years.

This is a part of a project that he does for Thai people. He never said that tired and he always smiles at Thai people. The goals he wants everyone to have the opportunity to do what they want. He wants everyone have a good standard of living and he wants everyone to have harmony. He is my king and my father forever like Jesus is a hero for you.

Pakpimkarn  Booncharn

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Review by friend

Theme: How to be come Jesus?

Topic idea: Who is my hero?

Essay: Narrative Essay

Who is your hero? When I was young I watched a lot of heroes from Cartoons and movie sometime I read the books. I know superhero from another county. For example, In Japan They have a superhero name Ultraman. He is helps human from Monsters. In America They have a superhero name Supermen. He is helps human from the villain.” In Thailand, we have a superhero name king Bhumibol Adulyadej. “

Since I can remember my parent and my school always tell a story about Thai majesty. I have to studies Thai majesty in Thai History subject. My favorite majesty is king Bhumibol Adulyadei, also known as Rama IX of the Chakri Dynasty. But Thai people called him father. He is clever. He likes to play sports and write the song. He is the inventor.

“Why Thai people called him father?”

He is loves Thai people and treats them like son and daughter. He is a nice king. He gives happiness and makes sacrifices for Thai people. Any problems happened anywhere in Thailand, He would reach there himself immediately. He does everything for Thai people. He always searching for a new projects to help Thai people to improve a good life. He had a lot of projects. Such as

  • Chang Hua Man Royal Project, Phetchaburi. This project is about an experimental farm where a range of experimental crops are being tested, not only to help the local people of the Phetchaburi area but farmers around the nation. In this place have a lot of different fruits and vegetables like a banana, papaya, pineapple, lime, rice, and rubber.
  • Royal Rain Project. This is the best project. He went to the countryside and sew a big problem about many areas faced the problem of drought. After he comes back palace he searching for how to help people. If He leaves it Thai people that area would be poor life. He is an experiment to make rainmaking much time until succeed it takes almost 4 years. This is a part of a project that he does for Thai people. He never said that tired and he always smiles at Thai people. The goals he wants everyone to have the opportunity to do what they want. He wants everyone have a good standard of living and he wants everyone to have harmony. He is my king and my father forever like Jesus is a hero for you.

This is a part of a project that he does for Thai people. He never said that tired and he always smiles at Thai people. The goals he wants everyone to have the opportunity to do what they want. He wants everyone have a good standard of living and he wants everyone to have harmony. He is my king and my father forever like Jesus is a hero for you.

Edit by Sirirat  Yoocharon

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Second Draft

Theme: How to be come Jesus?

Topic idea: Who is my hero?

Essay: Narrative Essay

Who is your hero? When I was young I watched a lot of hero from Cartoons and movie sometime I read the books. I know super hero from another county. For example, In Japan They have super hero name Ultraman. He is help human from Monsters. In America They have super name Supermen. He is help human from villain.” In Thailand we have super hero name king Bhumibol Adulyadej. “

Since I can remember my parent and my school always tell story about Thai majesty. I have to studies Thai majesty in Thai History subject. My favorite majesty is king Bhumibol Adulyadei, also known as Rama IX of the Chakri Dynasty. But Thai people called him father. He is clever. He like to play sports and write the song. He is the inventor.

“Why Thai people called him father?”

He is love Thai people and treat them like son and daughter. He is a nice king. He gives happiness and makes sacrifices for Thai people. Any problems happened anywhere in Thailand, He would reach there himself immediately. He does everything for Thai people. He always searching a new projects for help Thai people to improve a good life. He had a lot of projects. Such as

  • Chang Hua Man Royal Project, Phetchaburi. This project is about an experimental farm where a range of experimental crops are being tested, not only to help the local people of the Phetchaburi area, but farmers around the nation. In this place have a lot of different fruits and vegetables like a banana, papaya, pineapple, lime, rice and rubber.
  • Royal Rain Project. This is the best project. He went to countryside and sew a big problem about many areas faced the problem of drought. After he come back palace he searching how to help people. If He leave it Thai people that area would be poor life. He is experiment to make rainmaking many time until succeed it takes almost 4 years.

This is a part of project that he does for Thai people. He never said that tired and he always smile at Thai people. The goals he wants everyone to have opportunity to do what they want. He wants everyone have a good standard of living and he wants everyone to have harmony. He is my king and my father forever like Jesus is hero for you.

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Frist Draft

Theme: How to be come Jesus?

Topic idea: Who is my hero?

Essay: Narrative Essay

Who is your hero? When I was young I watched a lot of hero from Cartoons and movie sometime I read the books. I know super hero from another county. For example, In Japan They have super hero name Ultraman. He is help human from Monsters. In America They have super name Supermen. He is help human from villain.” In Thailand we have super hero name king Bhumibol Adulyadej. “

Since I can remember my parent and my school always tell story about Thai majesty. I have to studies Thai majesty in Thai History subject. My favorite majesty is king Bhumibol Adulyadei, also known as Rama IX of the Chakri Dynasty. But Thai people called him father. He was born on December 5, 1927, in Cambridge, Massachusetts, in the United States, the only king of Thailand born outside of the country. He is clever. He like to play sports and write the song. He is the inventor.

“Why Thai people called him father?”

He is love Thai people and treat them like son and daughter. He is a nice king. He gives happiness and makes sacrifices for Thai people. Any problems happened anywhere in Thailand, He would reach there himself immediately. He does everything for Thai people. He always searching a new projects for help Thai people to improve a good life. He had a lot of projects. Such as

  • Chang Hua Man Royal Project, Phetchaburi. This project is about an experimental farm where a range of experimental crops are being tested, not only to help the local people of the Phetchaburi area, but farmers around the nation. In this place have a lot of different fruits and vegetables like a banana, papaya, pineapple, lime, rice and rubber.
  • Royal Rain Project. This is the best project. He went to countryside and sew a big problem about many areas faced the problem of drought. After he come back palace he searching how to help people. If He leave it Thai people that area would be poor life. He is experiment to make rainmaking many time until succeed it takes almost 4 years.
  • Renewable Energy. This project is about renewable biofuels was widely apparent, His Majesty was actively researching the potential of locally-made palm oil. The resulting biodiesel has become a standard additive in the nation’s fuel, and its local sourcing is an inspiration for ongoing research.

This is a part of project that he does for Thai people. He never said that tired and he always smile at Thai people. The goals he wants everyone to have opportunity to do what they want. He wants everyone have a good standard of living and he wants everyone to have harmony. He is my king and my father forever like Jesus is hero for you.