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Songtai Sangtaweep Eng 101

1st writing assignment

Theme; how to be like Jesus

Essay type; compare and contrast

Topic; what will I like to learn by (book or expertise).

​There are many subjects and things to learn in the world. Some people love to teach mathematic while some people like to teach English. More importantly, some people like to teach another by using the book while some people prefer teaching from their true experience. If i will have to chose, i will chose to teach by using my own experience just like Jesus chose to come to be born human himself to taste the real world.

​I am totally agreed that, in some case, we should learn from books because many subject are universal. People should learn the same method and understand the same thing, so they could communicate to each other. However, there are so many ways to find one answer. In other words, people could learn a different way to find the same answer. Learning from expertise is a good idea because we could learn from there true experience. In additional, you will need to remember that even if what you learn from one expertise is true, you should never deny what the other experts said because that might be also true as well.

​As can be seen, there is always more than one solution to solve one problem. For example, the car manual book said that in order to replace the sensor, you have to follow these ten steps and remove nine parts to be able to reach it. On the other hand, when you ask the expertise, they might not follow what the book said because they have done it so many times, so they know the short cut. They might need to do only five steps and remove seven parts to reach the sensors. As a result, both ways is the way that you can reach your goal, but it depends which way you prefer. It will cost you time and effort, if you choose to do what book said, however, it might cost you extra money if you ask the trick from expert, but save the time.

​To conclude, there are many ways to learn and fine the solution for your problem. Do not believe that what you know is the only ways to do. It is your choice to choose the way you like to do. I prefer listening to expertise instead of using a book to do self-learning because that would save my time.

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** overall construction is okay.
** I would be better to add more theme

Songtai Sangtaweep Eng 101

1st writing assignment

Theme; how to be like Jesus

Essay type; compare and contrast

Topic; what will I like to learn by (book or expertise).

There are many subjects and things to learn in the world. Some people love to teach mathematic while some people like to teach English. More importantly, some people like to teach another by using the book while some people prefer teaching from their true experience. If i will have to chose, i will chose to teach by using my own experience just like Jesus chose to come to be born human himself to taste the real world.

I am totally agreed that, in some case, we should learn from books because many subject are universal. People should learn the same method and understand the same thing, so they could communicate to each other. However, there are so many ways to find one answer. In other words, people could learn a different way to find the same answer. Learning from expertise is a good idea because we could learn from there true experience. In additional, you will need to remember that even if what you learn from one expertise is true, you should never deny what the other experts said because that might be also true as well

As can be seen, there is always more than one solution to solve one problem. For example, the car manual book said that in order to replace the sensor, you have to follow these ten steps and remove nine parts to be able to reach it. On the other hand, when you ask the expertise, they might not follow what the book said because they have done it so many times, so they know the short cut. They might need to do only five steps and remove seven parts to reach the sensors. As a result, both ways is the way that you can reach your goal, but it depends which way you prefer. It will cost you time and effort, if you choose to do what book said, however, it might cost you extra money if you ask the trick from expert, but save the time.

To conclude, there are many ways to learn and fine the solution for your problem. Do not believe that what you know is the only ways to do. It is your choice to choose the way you like to do. I prefer listening to expertise instead of using a book to do self-learning because that would save my time.

Second Draft

Songtai Sangtaweep Eng 101

1st writing assignment

Theme; how to be like Jesus

Essay type; compare and contrast

Topic; what will I like to learn by (book or expertise).

There are many subjects and things to learn in the world. Some people love to teach mathematic while some people like to teach English. More importantly, some people like to teach another by using the book while some people prefer teaching from their true experience. If i will have to chose, i will chose to teach by using my own experience just like Jesus chose to come to be born human himself to taste the real world.

I am totally agreed that, in some case, we should learn from books because many subject are universal. People should learn the same method and understand the same thing, so they could communicate to each other. However, there are so many ways to find one answer. In other words, people could learn a different way to find the same answer. Learning from expertise is a good idea because we could learn from there true experience. In additional, you will need to remember that even if what you learn from one expertise is true, you should never deny what the other experts said because that might be also true as well

As can be seen, there is always more than one solution to solve one problem. For example, the car manual book said that in order to replace the sensor, you have to follow these ten steps and remove nine parts to be able to reach it. On the other hand, when you ask the expertise, they might not follow what the book said because they have done it so many times, so they know the short cut. They might need to do only five steps and remove seven parts to reach the sensors. As a result, both ways is the way that you can reach your goal, but it depends which way you prefer. It will cost you time and effort, if you choose to do what book said, however, it might cost you extra money if you ask the trick from expert, but save the time.

To conclude, there are many ways to learn and fine the solution for your problem. Do not believe that what you know is the only ways to do. It is your choice to choose the way you like to do. I prefer listening to expertise instead of using a book to do self-learning because that would save my time.

First draft

Songtai Sangtaweep Eng 101

1st writing assignment

Theme; how to be like Jesus

Essay type; compare and contrast

Topic; what will i like to learn by ( book or expertise).

There are many subjects and things to learn in the world. Some people love to teach mathematic while some people like to teach English. More importantly, some people like to teach another by using the book while some people prefer teaching from their true experience. If i will have to chose, i will chose to teach by using my own experience just like Jesus chose to come to be born human himself to taste the real world.

I am totally agree that, in some case, we should learn from books because many subject are universal. People should learn the same method and understand the same thing, so they could communicate to each other. However, there are so many ways to find one answer. In other words, people could learn a different way to find the same answer. Learning from expertise is a good idea because we could learn from there true experience. In additional, you will need to remember that even if what you learn from one expertise is true, you should never deny what the other experts said because that might be also true as well

As can be seen, there are always more than one solution to solve one problem. For example, the car manual guide book said that in order to replace the sensor, you will have to follow these ten steps and remove nine parts to be able to reach it. On the other hand, when you ask the expertise, they might not follow what the book said because they have done it so many time, so they know the short cut. They might need to do only five steps and remove seven parts to reach the sensors. As a result, both ways is the way that you can reach your goal, but it depend which way you prefer. It will cost you time and effort, if you choose to do what book said, however, it might cost you extra money if you ask the trick from expert, but save the time.

To conclude, there are many ways to learn and fine the solution for your problem. Do not believe that what you know is the only ways to do. It is your choice to choose the way you like to do. I prefer listening to expertise instead of using a book to do self learning because that would save my time.