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Learning to Be Like Jesus by ( If I become a hero what will I do?) – Oikos University Eng 101

My topic is “If I become a hero what will I do ? and how I will become a hero”

Final Draft:

Review by Panpaporn Klongkankian

I choose this topic because this topic is very interesting and I think it will seem like a reason why Jesus came to the world.
Because Jesus came to help us then gave us a holy spirit.
If I can be a hero I will change the world and make this world better than now.
I will combine these world together. No counties, No corruption, and No wars.
I mean there are so many countries in the world. Many countries used to have wars with another country.
Until now some countries still have a war. Then the war will able to make people basely and greedy. For example South Korea & North Korea they are still thinking about how to fight each other.
They try to teach people from their own country that people from another country had killed their people in the past. That is a very big problem form these world.
I always have a question in my head. “Why they do like that?” “Why they like to fight each other?”
Because they really want the power. If which country has more power. They will able to be number one.
They can do anything that they want. They can judge another country and punish them if they want because every country has to trust them and respect them.
they will control everything such as business, economic or something else.
If I become a hero. I would stop everything that they made. I would change how people thought,
how to make the world more comfortable, how to make a good environment, how to make a good relationship with the enemy, how to live together with the enemy and how to make to the world better.
They should be equal. no one will be powerful, no one can kill each other. Because everybody had made form God. God gives us a life. God gives us a holy spirit. we will not make god disappointed.
Because we are a human being. We learned and we know what is a bad thing or a good thing. We should have mercy to other people.
God can do a miracle but we can not. We have to follow the rules that god have done to us. If someone can do that. They will get a new life. They will be able to live with happiness.

Third DRAFT

I choose this topic because this topic is very interesting and I think it will seem like a reason why Jesus came to the world.
Because Jesus came to help us then gave us a holy spirit.
If I can be a hero I will change the world and make this world better than now.
I will combine these world together. No counties, No corruption, and No wars.
I mean there are so many countries in the world. Many countries used to have wars with another country.
Until now some countries still have a war. Then the war will able to make people basely and greedy.
I always have a question in my head. “Why they like to fight each other?”
Because they really want the power. If which country has more power. They will able to be number one.
They can do anything that they want. They can judge another country and punish them if they want because every country has to trust them and respect them.
they will control everything such as business, economic or something else.
If I become a hero. I would stop everything that they made. I would change how people thought,
how to make the world more comfortable, how to make a good environment, how to make a good relationship with the enemy, how to live together with the enemy and how to make to the world better.
They should be equal. no one will be powerful, no one can kill each other. Because everybody had made form God. God gives us a life. God gives us a holy spirit. we will not make god disappointed.
Because we are a human being. God can do a miracle but we can not. We have to follow the rules that god have done to us. If someone can do that. They will get a new life. They will be able to live with happiness.

SECOND DRAFT

I choose this topic because this topic is very interesting and I think it will seem like a reason why Jesus came to the world.
Because Jesus came to help us then gave us a holy spirit.
If I can be a hero I will change the world and make this world better than now.
I will combine these world together. No counties, No corruption, and No wars.
I mean there are so many countries in the world. Many countries used to have wars with another country.
Until now some countries still have a war. Then the war will able to make people basely and greedy. For example South Korea & North Korea they are still thinking about how to fight each other.
They try to teach people from their own country that people from another country had killed their people in the past. That is a very big problem form these world.
I always have a question in my head. “Why they do like that?” “Why they like to fight each other?”
Because they really want the power. They can do anything that they want. They can judge another country and punish them if they want because every country has to trust them and respect them.
they will control everything such as business, economic or something else.
If I become a hero. I would stop everything that they made. No one will be powerful, no one can kill each other. Because everybody had made form God. God gives us a life. God gives us a holy spirit. we will not make god disappointed.
Because we are a human being. We learned and we know what is a bad thing or a good thing. We should have mercy to other people.

First draft

I choose this topic because this topic is very interesting and I think it will seem like a reason why Jesus came to the world.
Because Jesus came to help us then gave us a holy spirit.
If I can be a hero I will change the world and make this world better than now.
I will combine these world together. No counties, No corruption, and No wars.
I mean there are so many countries in the world. Many countries used to have wars with another country.
Until now some countries still have a war. Then the war will able to make people basely and greedy. For example South Korea & North Korea they are still thinking about how to fight each other.
They try to teach people from their own country that people from another country had killed their people in the past. That is a very big problem form these world.
I always have a question in my head. “Why they do like that?” “Why they like to fight each other?”
Because they really want the power. If which country has more power. They will able to be number one.
They can do anything that they want. They will control everything such as business, economic or something else.
If I become a hero. I would stop everything that they made. I would change how people thought,
how to make the world more comfortable, how to make a good environment, how to make a good relationship with the enemy, how to live together with the enemy and how to make to the world better.
They should be equal. no one will be powerful, no one can kill each other. Because everybody had made form God. God gives us a life. God gives us a holy spirit. we will not make god disappointed.
Because we are a human being.