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Essay 1 : Final draft.

Theme : How to become like Jesus?

Topic : “My friend introduce you”.

Essay style : Descriptive essay.

 

               One day, I woke up and saw 4 people standing in front of me. They were smiling and looking at me, seem like they had known me before. Unfortunately,I feel I didn’t know them. One of them began asking me some questions but I didn’t answer anything then I felt pain in my head, I looked around and thought this looks like in a hospital. Four people looked at me seriously. One of them told me, I got an accident and my head got a violent impact. Due to the accident, I had slept for 2 days and 2 nights. After that,  I told them that I couldn’t recognize anyone even myself. I kept asking myself “ Who am I ? And Who are you?

               They looked at me then talked to each other. After that, one guy came to me and start answering my question.

“ Your name is Mac. You are 36 year-old. I am your closed friend and we studied together in university. You are a rich guy because you worked so hard and you are so smart. Two nights ago, you slept while driving and got an accident. That is your wife. She will tell you your stories.”

The small lady came forward and talked to me “ My name is Nuch, we live together in San Francisco. We have married for 2 years. We always spend time together. You like to read a book with me and watch a movie together. You also like to take a photography and we have many lovely photos of me in our house. You like me cooking for you and the bean sprout with ground pork is your favorite but you hate the chili paste a lot. You are a healthy person, playing and watching sport is your favorite. You are generous and funny, everyone around us loves you. I know a lot of things that you like and don’t like but one thing that I want you to know, whatever happen, I will always love you. Don’t worry honey everything will be better”

               I saw 2 elder people walked toward and sat down beside me then the elder guy said “ Boy, we are your parent. Even Though, you cannot regain your memories for now, we will pass through this difficulty together. Don’t afraid to start a new life, Like a Jesus, when he gets baptized. After that he would have a new life. It looks like you. Believe in God. You can do that.”

              After I heard them said. Whether I can or cannot remember my memories. It was not important to me anymore. I believe those people will stand by me. Now I have a new life. God bless me.

 

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Essay 1 : Friend review.

Theme : How to become like Jesus?

Topic : “My friend introduce you”.

Essay style : Descriptive essay.

 

              One day, I woke up and saw 4 people standing in front of me. They looked at me with cozy feeling, seem like they knew me for a long time. Unfortunately,I feel I didn’t know them before. One of them began asking me some questions but I didn’t answer then I felt pain in my head, I looked around and thought this looks like in a hospital. Four people looked at me seriously. One of them told me, I got an accident and my head got a violent impact. Due to the accident, I had slept for 2 days. After that,  I told them that I couldn’t recognize anyone even myself. I kept asking myself “ Who am I ? And Who are you?

              They looked at me then talked to each other. After that, one guy came to me and start answering my question.

             “ Your name is Mac. You are 36 year-old. I am your closed friend and we studied together in university. You are a rich guy because you worked so hard. Two nights ago, you slept while driving and got an accident. That is your wife. She will tell you your stories.”

The small lady came forward and talked to me “ My name is Nuch, we live together in San Francisco. We have married for 2 years. We always spend time together. You like to read a book with me and watch the movie together. You also like to take a photography and we have many lovely photos of me in our house. You like me cooking for you and the bean sprout with ground pork is your favorite but you hate the chili paste a lot. You are a healthy person, playing and watching sport is your favorite. You are generous and funny, everyone around us likes you. I know a lot of things that you like and don’t like but one thing that I want you to know, whatever happen, I will always love you. Don’t worry honey everything will be better”

               I saw 2 elder people walked toward and sat down beside me then the elder guy said “ Boy, we are your parent. Even Though, you cannot regain your memories for now, we will pass through this difficulty together. Don’t afraid to start a new life, Like a Jesus, when he gets baptized. After that he would have a new life. It looks like you. Believe in God. You can do that.”

              After I heard them said. Whether I can or cannot remember my own stories past. It was not important to me anymore. I believe those people will stand by me. Now I have a new life. God bless me.

 

Reviewed  by Wararad  Luengthong.

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Essay 1 : 2nd draft.

Theme : How to become like Jesus?

Topic : “My friend introduce you”.

Essay style : Descriptive essay.

 

               Once a day, I woke up and saw 4 people standing in front of me. They looked at me with cozy feeling, seem like they knew me for a long time. Unfortunately, I didn’t know them. One of them began ask me but I didn’t answer. I felt pain on my head, I looked around and thought this room looks like a hospital. Four people watched me and they felt so serious. That man told me, I got the accident and my head got a violent impact. I had slept for 2 days. I told them that I couldn’t recognize anybody. So the question is “ Who am I ? And Who are you?

               They looked at me then talked to each other after that the first guy came to me and start answering my question.

             “ Your name is Mac. You are 36 year-old. I am your close friend and we studied together in university. You are rich because you worked hard. Two nights ago, you slept while driving and got an accident. That is your wife. She will tell your stories.”

The small lady came forward and talked to me “ My name is Nuch, we live together in San Francisco. We have married for 2 years. We are always spent time together. You like to read a book with me and watch the movie together. You also like to take a photography and we have many lovely photos of me in our house. You like me cooking for you and the bean sprout with ground pork is your favorite but you very hate the chili paste. You are a healthy person, playing and watching sport is your favorite. You are generous and funny, everyone likes you. I know a lot of things that you like and don’t like but one thing that I want you to know, whatever you are, I will always love you. Don’t worry honey everything will be better”

               I saw 2 elder people walked toward and set down beside me then the elder guy said “ Boy, we are your parent. Even Though, you cannot regain your memories, we will pass through this difficulty together. Don’t afraid to start a new life. Like a Jesus, when he get baptized. After that he would have a new life. It looks like you. Believe in God. You can do that.”

             After I heard them said. Whatever I can or cannot remember my stories. It was not important to me. I believe that group of people will stand by me. Now I have a new life. God bless me.

 

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Essay 1 : First draft.

Theme : How to become like Jesus?

Topic : “My friend introduce you”.

Essay style : Descriptive essay.

 

                    Once day, I woke up in the white room. I saw 4 people in front of me. They looked at me with worried feeling like they knew me for a long time. Unfortunately, I didn’t know about them. When they saw me kept silent, one of them began ask me but I didn’t answer. I felt pain on my head, I looked around this room looks like hospital. Five guys watched me more serious.

                    They told me, I got the accident and my head got a violent impact. I had slept for 2 days, Am I an Alzheimer’s? I told them that I couldn’t recognize anybody. So the first question is “ Who am I ?”

                    They looked at me then talked to each other after that the first guy came to me and start answering my question.

                    “ Your name is Mac. You are 36 year-old. I am your close friend we studied together in university. You are pharmacist and you work for famous pharmaceutical company. That is your girlfriend. She will tell about your stories better than me”

 

                      The small lady came forward and talked to me “ My name is Nuch, we live together. We marriage and rent a house in San Francisco. You like to read a book with me and watch the movie together. Sometime, you like to play the video game and let me sleep alone in the bed room. You also like to take a photography and we have many lovely photos of me in our house. You like me to cook the bean sprout with ground pork but hate the chili paste. You are a healthy person, playing and watching sport is your favorite. You like to listen to the ghost stories but you scare to watch the ghost movie, it look like contradiction. I know a lot of things that you like and don’t like and I know you love me. Don’t worry everything will be better”

                       I saw 2 elder people walked toward and set down beside me then the elder guy said “ Boy, we are your parent. Even Though, you cannot regain your memories, we will pass through this difficulty together. Don’t afraid to start a new life. Like a Jesus, when he found John to get baptized after that he would have a new life. Now you can do that.”

                       It was not important to me. If I can or cannot remember my memory, that group of people will stand by me. Now I have a new life. God bless me.

 

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