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After God is angry From the beginning of Genesis one to seven that told us about how God create the world from Day one God create light , Day two create sky ,Day three create land and plant , Day fourth create Sun and Stars, Day five create birds and Aquatic animals ,Day six create terrestrial animals and Human ,Day Sven is a rest day ,God Create Men first then Women because god think is good to be together.

The beginning of sin that happen in bible talk about snake. That snake use artifice and told the women to eat the fruit from the tree. God said don’t eat them. but in another bible (Quran) talk about evil not snake to use a trick to the women and  God punish the Woman and Her husband because They eat the fruit.by make command of God to both of human to work hard and if they hungry they must to work for the food and that snake have to be reptile and smell dust all the rest of their life.

After that Human getting violent more humans all round the country .God felt upset about the violent. but only one that god like is Nosh and his family god told him that God going to make a lot of water flood all of the world and told he to make a boat and bring  the animal each pair to the boat include his family. and water are clean all of the world.

In my opinion the logic of the sin is we shouldn’t do when the rule in as oder or we should respect the rule. In the bible said about the day that have seven day as we are use the day to work to live life we work, we rest just as the same god create we are not alone the world need humans and humans need the world to make the things balance and organize each other. we can see how humanities live life even is simple. from now on everything develop people crate to many innovation but i believe that everything is happen of a reason.

 

Review by Preawnapa Ariyapakdee

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After God is angry From the beginning of Genesis one to seven that told us about how God create the world from Day one God create light , Day two create sky ,Day three create land and plant , Day fourth create Sun and Stars, Day five create birds and Aquatic animals ,Day six create terrestrial animals and Human ,Day Sven is a rest day ,God Create Men first then Women because god think is good to be together.
The beginning of sin that happen in bible talk about snake. That snake use artifice and told the women to eat the fruit from the tree. God said don’t eat them. but in another bible (Quran) talk about evil not snake to use a trick to the women and  God punish the Woman and Her husband because They eat the fruit.by make command of God to both of human to work hard and if they hungry they must to work for the food and that snake have to be reptile and smell dust all the rest of their life.
after that Human getting violent more humans all round the country .God felt upset about the violent. but only one that god like is Nosh and his family god told him that God going to make a lot of water flood all of the world and told he to make a boat and bring  the animal each pair to the boat include his family. and water are clean all of the world.

In my opinion the logic of the sin is we shouldn’t do when the rule in as oder or we should respect the rule. In the bible said about the day that have seven day as we are use the day to work to live life we work, we rest just as the same god create we are not alone the world need humans and humans need the world to make the things balance and organize each other. we can see how humanities live life even is simple. from now on everything develop people crate to many innovation but i believe that everything is happen of a reason   .

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After God is angry From the beginning of Genesis one to seven that told us about how God create the world from Day one God create light , Day two create sky ,Day three create land and plant , Day fourth create Sun and Stars, Day five create birds and Aquatic animals ,Day six create terrestrial animals and Human ,Day Sven is a rest day ,God Create Men first then Women because god think is good to be together.
The beginning of sin that happen in bible talk about snake. That snake use artifice and told the women to eat the fruit from the tree. God said don’t eat them. but in another bible (Quran) talk about evil not snake to use a trick to the women and  God punish the Woman and Her husband because They eat the fruit.by make command of God to both of human to work hard and if they hungry they must to work for the food and that snake have to be reptile and smell dust all the rest of their life.
after that Human getting violent more humans all round the country .God felt upset about the violent. but only one that god like is Nosh and his family god told him that God going to make a lot of water flood all of the world and told he to make a boat and bring  the animal each pair to the boat include his family. and water are clean all of the world.

In my opinion the logic of the sin is we shouldn’t do when the rule in as oder or we should respect the rule. In the bible said about the day that have seven day as we are use the day to work to live life we work, we rest just as the same god create we are not alone the world need humans and humans need the world to make the things balance and organize each other. we can see how humanities live life even is simple. from now on everything develop people crate to many innovation but i believe that everything is happen of a reason   .