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By Ratsameedara Nunkliang

When Dinosaurs Walked the Earth (https://youtu.be/W5tTOO_6ydQ) gives information about Art Chadwick, a Christian molecular biologist who has been digging dinosaur fossils at a ranch in Wyoming for more than 20 years. He thinks that the fossils discovery is related to the creation, as in the biblical account. So he opened this up to creationists to come and dig.

Personally, I don’t agree with his idea that this phenomenon is related to the creation and once the whole world had wiped out by the flood.

According to Thomas Purifoy Jr., the director and writer of this video, this ranch is a single layer that was 1 matter and it went basically, for about 100 acres. It is filled with millions of dinosaur bones. For about 5-10 thousand of them had been killed at one point. They floated and bloated. They got articulated and rotted. Then another mudflow came and put them together in that three-foot layer with the big bones at the bottom and the little bones at the top. They are grandad by water.

I had studied and read about the extinction of dinosaur before. They were attacked by meteorite impact. The explosion lifted dust into the atmosphere and it had blocked the sunlight completely from reaching the surface, plunging Earth into a period of cold and darkness that lasted at least several months. So the dinosaur and some other creatures could not survive. Because of this violent and sudden national disaster it should be normal to find a big pile of dinosaur fossils at one single spot like in the one at this ranch in Wyoming.

I have to admit that I agree to a part of this video that the position of these dinosaur bones at this site had caused by water. But, people have been discovering many dinosaur fossils in many different areas in the world. Some of them might have the same position as at this ranch because they were once might leave close to water or to somewhere that could get flooded. However, dinosaur fossils in the whole world didn’t found in the same position like in this case. There were some that didn’t have big bones in the bottom nor little bones in the top.

In conclusion, I don’t think we can sum up that once the whole world had all flooded or that the universe and living organisms originate from specific acts of divine creation.

 

Review

By Panida Chanmai

  • You should give the website’s link to the readers.
  • You should indent you passage.
  • It’s extinction not xtinction.
  • The last paragraph should begin with In conclusion, instead of From this,
  • All in all I thinking this is a good essay.

 

Second draft 

By Ratsameedara Nunkliang

When Dinosaurs Walked the Earth gives information about Art Chadwick, a Christian molecular biologist who has been digging dinosaur fossils at a ranch in Wyoming for more than 20 years. He thinks that the fossils discovery is related to the creation, as in the biblical account. So he opened this up to creationists to come and dig.

Personally, I don’t agree with his idea that this phenomenon is related to the creation and once the whole world had wiped out by the flood.

According to Thomas Purifoy Jr., the director and writer of this video, this ranch is a single layer that was 1 matter and it went basically, for about 100 acres. It is filled with millions of dinosaur bones. For about 5-10 thousand of them had been killed at one point. They floated and bloated. They got articulated and rotted. Then another mudflow came and put them together in that three-foot layer.

With the big bones at the bottom and the little bones at the top. They are grandad by water.

I had studied and read about the xtinction of dinosaur before. They were attacked by Meteorite Impact. The explosion lifted dust into the atmosphere and it had blocked the sunlight completely from reaching the surface, plunging Earth into a period of cold and darkness that lasted at least several months. So the dinosaur and some other creatures could not survive. Because of this violent and sudden national disaster it should be normal to find a big pile of dinosaur fossils at one single spot like in the one at this ranch in Wyoming.

I have to admit that I agree to a part of this video that the position of these dinosaur bones at this site had caused by water. But, people have been discovering many dinosaur fossils in many different areas in the world. Some of them might have the same position as at this ranch because they were once might leave close to water or to somewhere that could get flooded. However, dinosaur fossils in the whole world didn’t found in the same position like in this case. There were some that didn’t have big bones in the bottom nor little bones in the top.

From this, I don’t think we can sum up that once the whole world had all flooded or that the universe and living organisms originate from specific acts of divine creation.

 

First draft 

By Ratsameedara Nunkliang

When Dinosaurs Walked the Earth gives information about Art Chadwick, a Christian molecular biologist who has been digging dinosaur fossils at a ranch in Wyoming for 20+ years. He opened this up to creationists to come and dig and learn about the creation, as in the biblical account.

Personally. I don’t agree with the video that once the whole world had wiped out by the flood.

According to Thomas Purifoy Jr., the director and writer of this video, this ranch is a single layer that was 1 matter and it’s layer that went basically, for about 100 acres. It is filled with millions of dinosaur bones. For about 5-10 thousand of them had been killed at one point. They floated and bloated. They got articulated and rotted. Then another mudflow came and put them together in that three-foot layer.

With the big bones at the bottom and the little bones at the top. They are grandad by water.

However, I had studied and read about the extinction of dinosaur before. They were attacked by Meteorite Impact. The explosion lifted dust into the atmosphere and it had blocked the sunlight completely from reaching the surface, plunging Earth into a period of cold and darkness that lasted at least several months. So the dinosaur and some other creatures could not survive. This violent and sudden National disaster showed that it is normal to find a big pile of dinosaur fossils at one single spot. There were many dinosaur in different areas. Of course, some of them might leave close to water or to somewhere that could get flooded. So Wyoming might be one in those. But dinosaur fossils in the whole world didn’t found in the same position like in this ranch. There were some that didn’t have bid bones in the bottom nor little bones in the top.

From this, I don’t think we can sum up that once the whole world had all flooded or that the universe and living organisms originate from specific acts of divine creation.