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How to be like Jesus by topic My best friend in the world

       I am a friendly person I like to have a lot of friends I usually make friends easily by talking, smiling so I have a lot of friends from many ways from schoolmates, neighborhoods, relatives and work. I can’t imagine my life without friends. But there is one, who will always be in the first important friend for me. Her name is Gift and she is my best friend because we were growing up together. Me and her we were study together in hight school and also in the same university. My house and her house was close. Our family we are very close. My mom and my dad same as her mom and her dad and also the same thing for me too.

        Gift is a very beautiful. I remember when we were study in hight school she was the popular girl in school. She was a Drum major at school that you can imagine how beautiful she is and She is taller same me and has straight black hair and deep chestnut brown eyes she has white skin beautiful face and beautiful smile. Her biggest dream is to become a teacher and I truly believe that one day she’ll make her wish come true. Gift has a strong sense of responsibility and you can always rely on her. 

          The thing I admire most about Gift is that she is protective and likes to look after people. I think for me friendship is the most important thing in the world. People should have a friends and I am proud to say that I have such loyal, nice and lovely friend one in a million is Gift.

          When I talked about my best friend that make me think about Jesus because Jesus have a lot of friends I mean he have a lot of people around him but the one was important and love Jesus so much is Peter , Peter always think good for Jesus and also He always follow Jesus and be with Jesus all the times.

                                                                 

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How to be like Jesus by topic My best friend in the world

       I am a friendly person I like to have a lot of friends and want to have a lot of friend.( you should not use the world having the same meaning a lot ) I usually make friends easily by talking, smiling and I have a lot of friends from many ways from schoolmates, neighborhoods, relatives, bar, coffee shop and work. I can’t imagine my life without friends. But there is one, who will always be in the first important friend for me. Her name is Gift and she is my close friend ( you should choose just only one world close friend or best friend )my best friend because we were growing up together. Me and her we were study together in hight school and also in the same university. My house and her house was close. Our family we are very close. My mom and my dad same as her mom and her dad and also the same thing for me too.

        Gift is a very beautiful for me. ( you don’t have to say this ) I remember when we were study in hight school she was the popular girl in school. She was a Drum major at school, that you can imagine how beautiful she is and She is taller same me and has straight black hair and deep chestnut brown eyes she has white skin beautiful face and beautiful smile. Her biggest dream is to become a teacher and I truly believe that one day she’ll make her wish come true. Gift has a strong sense of responsibility and you can always rely on her. 

          The thing I admire most about Gift is that she is protective and likes to look after people. I think for me friendship is the most important thing in the world. People should have a friends and I am proud to say that I have such loyal, nice and lovely friend one in a million is Gift.

          When I talked about my best friend that make me think about Jesus because Jesus have a lot of friends I mean he have a lot of people around him but the one was important and love Jesus so much is Peter , Peter always think good for Jesus and also He always follow Jesus and be with Jesus all the times.

                                                                                  EDIT BY Suparada

                                                                                15 september 2018

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How to be like Jesus by topic My best friend in the world

       I am a friendly person I like to have a lot of friends and want to have a lot of friend. I usually make friends easily by talking, smiling and I have a lot of friends from many ways from schoolmates, neighborhoods, relatives, bar, coffee shop and work. I can’t imagine my life without friends. But there is one, who will always be in the first important friend for me. Her name is Gift and she is my close friend my best friend because we were growing up together. Me and her we were study together in hight school and also in the same university. My house and her house was close. Our family we are very close. My mom and my dad same as her mom and her dad and also the same thing for me too.

        Gift is a very beautiful for me. I remember when we were study in hight school she was the popular girl in school. She was a Drum major at school, that you can imagine how beautiful she is and She is taller same me and has straight black hair and deep chestnut brown eyes she has white skin beautiful face and beautiful smile. Her biggest dream is to become a teacher and I truly believe that one day she’ll make her wish come true. Gift has a strong sense of responsibility and you can always rely on her. 

          The thing I admire most about Gift is that she is protective and likes to look after people. I think for me friendship is the most important thing in the world. People should have a friends and I am proud to say that I have such loyal, nice and lovely friend one in a million is Gift.

          When I talked about my best friend that make me think about Jesus because Jesus have a lot of friends I mean he have a lot of people around him but the one was important and love Jesus so much is Peter , Peter always think good for Jesus and also He always follow Jesus and be with Jesus all the times.

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How to be like Jesus by topic My best friend in the world

       I am a friendly person I like to have a lot of friends and want to have a lot of friends. I usually make friends easily by talking, smiling and I have a lot of friends from many ways form schoolmates, neighborhoods, relatives, bar, coffee shop and work. I can’t imagine my life without friends. But there is one, who will always be in the first important friend for me. Her name is Gift and she is my close friend my best friend because we were growing up together. Me and her we were study together in hight school and also in the same university. My house and her house was close. Our family we are very close. My mom and my dad same as her mom and her dad and also the same thing for me too.

        Gift is a very beautiful for me well I should not say that I should say she is a very beautiful girl for everybody. I remember when we were study in hight school she was the most popular girl in school. She was a Drum major at school, that you can imagine how beautiful she is and She is taller same me and has straight black hair and deep chestnut brown eyes she has white skin beautiful face and beautiful smile. Her biggest dream is to become a teacher and I truly believe that one day she’ll make her wish come true. However i will always support her in every way she want. Gift has a strong sense of responsibility and you can always rely on her. 

          The thing I admire most about Gift is that she is protective and likes to look after people. I think for me friendship is the most important thing in the world. People should have a friends and I am proud to say that I have such loyal, nice and lovely friend one in a million is Gift.

          When I talked about my best friend that make me think about Jesus because Jesus have a lot of friends I mean he have a lot of people around him but the one was important and love Jesus so much is Peter , Peter always think good for Jesus and also He always follow Jesus and be with Jesus all the times.