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That’s me I feel like I have come out to see the big world that we never saw. I will take you to a delicious meal or perhaps a mother to take the children to see the second movie in the mother’s house to tell us one piece. Two movies. Take a cold air. We are happy now. This is a little joy of Mother and child

I do not know what to say. What do you want to learn? Why?  How much money to tell? We are not rich enough. My mother for me my real hero is mother. Mother is an iron lady in my eyes. Do you know why my mother is my hero? Dad broke up with Mom. I was only 3 years old.  She worked alone raised my whole family with my sister and grandmother, and my mother taught me not to finish my English. No need to use calculator. And the rice is good and very delicious. Someone ask me that not married my mother is a beautiful. Mother said that it is not afraid of men to marry, do not love their mother. I will pretend to be a mother. I’m with you, I’m happy enough remember the children. My mother left home early in the morning, but she returned almost seven o’clock. Work almost without a break. I can’t find you, but you know how to talk to your mother. You bought the noodles, please come back home. When it arrives home Mother would wake me and my brother to eat noodles and talk to my children. If you ask me to eat it, I do not want to eat because I’m sleepy. We are happy to talk to our mother. Holidays I do not have to go to school. Saturday Sunday I will leave home a little rice or stir fried macaroni in a large bowl to eat. My mom is very delicious and my brother and I go through the mango to eat. I used to tease my mother. I still miss you. Do not say that. The children will eat like a dog to eat.

Mother’s Day I like to take the bus ride around the city. Some people may be ordinary. I’m not sure where to go. Have a ride, it is very happy. Imagine a baby car seat. This point is pointed. Make a face Ask this question with your mother and I attended a prestigious private school where the tuition fees were high. I know my mother asked me. Why do not you go to the government school? Want to get a good school Have a good school friend. Even to expensive. I will try to send my children with my two hands. This is my mother’s answer. First, there are 4 rental houses, resulting from the savings of the mother. But when you grow up. The more money my mother decided to sell the house rent out, send the child to my mother told us there are already home to sell the house to rent. We do not trouble anything. When was I first? I do not know how tired my mother never showed that she was tired. I have a smile to tell the child that I want to learn. This mother is satisfied. If exam is complete each semester. I will take the notebook to show my mother. My grades are moderate. But when I open my mother’s notebook, I smile and tell me that I am very good at trying again. I will have a single exam.

When I graduated bachelor on the day I graduated, as I received, I feel proud to have today. A day and proud of being the mother of this child. I do not know. But can be sent to graduate to graduate. When I got a degree, I finished out of the auditorium. I met my mother waiting for me. Hero is a hero. I’m going to say hello to my mom. I do not know what to do. I’m very proud of this mother. Even though we are complaining about it, but because you love us, you complain about us. Mother is my hero.

Note that I love my mother every day.

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That’s me I feel like I have come out to see the big world that we never saw. I will take you to a delicious meal or perhaps a mother to take the children to see the second movie in the mother’s house to tell us one piece. Two movies. Take a cold air. We are happy now. This is a little joy of Mother and child

I do not know what to say. What do you want to learn? Why?  How much money to tell? We are not rich enough. My mother for me my real hero is mother. Mother is an iron lady in my eyes. Do you know why my mother is my hero? Dad broke up with Mom. Since I was only 3 years old,  She worked alone, raised my whole family with my sister and grandmother, and my mother taught me not to finish my English. No need to use calculator. And the rice is good and very delicious. Someone ask me that not married my mother is a beautiful. Mother said that it is not afraid of men to marry, do not love their mother. I will pretend to be a mother. I’m with you, I’m happy enough remember the children. My mother left home early in the morning, but she returned almost seven o’clock. Work almost without a break. I can’t find you, but you know how to talk to your mother. You bought the noodles, please come back home. When it arrives home Mother would wake me and my brother to eat noodles and talk to my children. If you ask me to eat it, I do not want to eat because I’m sleepy. We are happy to talk to our mother. Holidays I do not have to go to school. Saturday Sunday I will leave home a little rice or stir fried macaroni in a large bowl to eat. My mom is very delicious and my brother and I go through the mango to eat. I used to tease my mother. I still miss you. Do not say that. The children will eat like a dog to eat.

Mother’s Day I like to take the bus ride around the city. Some people may be ordinary. I’m not sure where to go. Have a ride, it is very happy. Imagine a baby car seat. This point is pointed. Make a face Ask this question with your mother and I attended a prestigious private school where the tuition fees were high. I know my mother asked me. Why do not you go to the government school? Want to get a good school Have a good school friend. Even to expensive. I will try to send my children with my two hands. This is my mother’s answer. First, there are 4 rental houses, resulting from the savings of the mother. But when you grow up. The more money my mother decided to sell the house rent out, send the child to my mother told us there are already home to sell the house to rent. We do not trouble anything. When was I first? I do not know how tired my mother never showed that she was tired. I have a smile to tell the child that I want to learn. This mother is satisfied. If exam is complete each semester. I will take the notebook to show my mother. My grades are moderate. But when I open my mother’s notebook, I smile and tell me that I am very good at trying again. I will have a single exam.

When I graduated bachelor on the day I graduated, as I received, I feel proud to have today. A great day and proud of being the mother of this child. I do not know. But can be sent to graduate to graduate. When I got a degree, I finished out of the auditorium. I met my mother waiting for me. Hero is a hero. I’m going to say hello to my mom. I do not know what to do. I’m very proud of this mother. Even though we are complaining about it, but because you love us, you complain about us. Mother is my hero.

Note that I love my mother every day.

Rongh

For me my real hero is mother. Mother is an iron lady in my eyes. Do you know why my mother is my hero? Dad broke up with Mom. Since I was only 3 years old, She worked alone, raised my whole family with my sister and grandmother, and my mother taught me not to finish my English. No need to use calculator. And the rice is good and very delicious. Someone ask me that not married my mother is a beautiful. Mother said that it is not afraid of men to marry, do not love their mother. I will pretend to be a mother. I’m with you, I’m happy enough remember the children. My mother left home early in the morning, but she returned almost seven o’clock. Work almost without a break I can not find you, but you know how to talk to your mother. You bought the noodles, please come back home. When it arrives home Mother would wake me and my brother to eat noodles and talk to my children. If you ask me to eat it, I do not want to eat because I’m sleepy. We are happy to talk to our mother. Holidays I do not have to go to school. Saturday Sunday I will leave home a little rice or stir fried macaroni in a large bowl to eat. Can eat all day. My mom is very delicious and my brother and I go through the mango to eat. I used to tease my mother. I still miss you. If the mother knocked the mango. Do not say that. The children will eat like a dog to eat.

Mother’s Day I like to take the bus ride around the city. Some people may be ordinary. I’m not sure where to go. Have a ride, it is very happy. Imagine a baby car seat. This point is pointed. Make a face Ask this question with your mother. That’s me I feel like I have come out to see the big world that we never saw. I will take you to a delicious meal or perhaps a mother to take the children to see the second movie in the mother’s house to tell us one piece. Two movies. Take a cold air. We are happy now. This is a little joy of Mother and child

I do not know what to say. What do you want to learn? Why? If you want to learn what to say. How much money to tell. We are not rich enough. My mother and I attended a prestigious private school where the tuition fees were high. I know my mother asked me. Why do not you go to the government school? Want to get a good school Have a good school friend. Even to expensive. I will try to send my children with my two hands. This is my mother’s answer. First, there are 4 rental houses, resulting from the savings of the mother. But when you grow up. The more money my mother decided to sell the house rent out, send the child to my mother told us there are already home to sell the house to rent. We do not trouble anything. When was I first? I do not know How tired my mother never showed that she was tired. I have a smile to tell the child that I want to learn. This mother is satisfied. If the exam is completed each semester. I will take the notebook to show my mother. My grades are moderate. But when I open my mother’s notebook, I smile and tell me that I am very good at trying again. I will have a single exam.

When I graduated bachelor On the day I graduated, as I received, I feel proud to have today. A great day And proud of being the mother of this child. I do not know. But can be sent to graduate to graduate. When I got a degree, I finished out of the auditorium. I met my mother waiting for me. Hero is a hero. I’m going to say hello to my mom. I do not know what to do. I’m very proud of this mother. Even though we are complaining about it, but because you love us, you complain about us. Mother is my hero.

Note that I love my mother every day.