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Learning to Be Like Jesus by (how will you going to make the world a better place? ) – Oikos University Eng 101

First Draft

This topic is about how can I make the world a better place. This is so interesting and I think it will seem like a reason why Jesus came to the world and gave us a way to be a good people gave us a holy spirit and show us that he can do a miracle. I will combine these world together. No counties, No corruption, and No wars. I mean there are so many countries in the world. Many countries used to have wars with another country. Until now some countries still have a war. Then the war will able to make people basely and greedy. For example South Korea & North Korea they are still thinking about how to fight each other. They try to teach people from their own country that people from another country had killed their people in the past. That is a very big problem form these world. 

The reason why they really want the power. Because if which country has more power. They will able to be number one. They can do anything that they want. They can judge another country and punish them if they want because every country has to respect them. they will control everything such as business, economic or something else. 

If I can make the world a better place. I would stop everything that they made. I would change how people thought. I will make the world more comfortable. I will make a good environment, I will make a good relationship with the enemy, I will live together with the enemy and I will make the world better. Everybody should be equal. No one will be powerful, no one can kill each other. Because everybody had made form God. God gives us a life. God gives us a holy spirit. we will not make god disappointed. Because we are a human being. We learned and we know what is a bad thing or a good thing. God can do a miracle but we can not. We have to follow the rules that god have done to us then you will know the truth of the holy spirit.

Second draft

This topic is about how can I make the world a better place. This is so interesting and I think it will seem like a reason why Jesus came to the world and gave us a way to be a good people gave us a holy spirit and show us that he can do a miracle. I will combine these world together. No counties, No corruption, and No wars. I mean there are so many countries in the world. Many countries used to have wars with another country. Until now some countries still have a war. Then the war will able to make people basely and greedy. For example South Korea & North Korea they are still thinking about how to fight each other. They try to teach people from their own country that people from another country had killed their people in the past. That is a very big problem form these world.

If I can make the world a better place. I would stop everything that they made. I would change how people thought. I will make the world more comfortable. I will make a good environment, I will make a good relationship with the enemy, I will live together with the enemy and I will make the world better. Everybody should be equal. No one will be powerful, no one can kill each other. Because everybody had made form God. God gives us a life. God gives us a holy spirit. we will not make god disappointed. Because we are a human being. We learned and we know what is a bad thing or a good thing. God can do a miracle but we can not. We have to follow the rules that god have done to us then you will know the truth of the holy spirit.

Third Draft

Friend Review: Panpaporn Kongkankean

This topic is about how can I make the world a better place.

I will combine these world together. Same like an essay that I wrote last time. This world will have No counties, No corruption, and No wars. I mean there are so many countries in the world. Many countries used to have wars with another country. Until now some countries still have a war. Then the war will able to make people basely and greedy. For example The United state of America & Russia, they both very powerful country. They both have a big power such as military and nuclear. They are still thinking about how to fight each other. They try to teach people from their own country that people from another country had killed their people in the past. That is a very big problem form these world. I always have a question in my head. “Why they do like that?” “Why they like to fight each other?”

Because they really want the power. If which country has more power. They will become a number one. They can do anything that they want. They can judge another country and punish them if they want because every country has to trust them and respect them. they will control everything such as business, economic or something else.

If I will have more power. I will stop the war. I will teach people that we can live together. because we are the human being. Everyone is equal. I will change how people thought, I will make the world more comfortable, I will make a good environment, I will make a great relationship with the enemy, I will live together with the enemy. There will no more enemy words anymore and all of the things that I said. I am pretty sure that will make the world better. Cause No one will be powerful, no one can kill each other.  Because we have only one country in the world. Seem like the God said. Everybody had made form God. God gives us a life. God gives us a holy spirit. God prepares the way for us to be happy. If we follow God we will be happy. Because we are a human being.

Learning to Be Like Jesus by ( How will you going to make the world a better place ) – Oikos University Eng 101

Final Draft

Friend Review: Panpaporn Kongkankean

This topic is about how can I make the world a better place. This is so interesting and I think it will seem like a reason why Jesus came to the world and gave us a way to be a good people gave us a holy spirit and show us that he can do a miracle. Because Jesus came to help us. On this topic. If I can make the world better I will make this world better than now. I will combine these world together. Same like an essay that I wrote last time. This world will have No counties, No corruption, and No wars. I mean there are so many countries in the world. Many countries used to have wars with another country. Until now some countries still have a war. Then the war will able to make people basely and greedy. For example The United state of America & Russia, they both very powerful country. They both have a big power such as military and nuclear. They are still thinking about how to fight each other. They try to teach people from their own country that people from another country had killed their people in the past. That is a very big problem form these world. I always have a question in my head. “Why they do like that?” “Why they like to fight each other?” 

Because they really want the power. If which country has more power. They will become a number one. They can do anything that they want. They can judge another country and punish them if they want because every country has to trust them and respect them. they will control everything such as business, economic or something else. 

If I will have more power. I will stop the war. I will teach people that we can live together. because we are the human being. Everyone are equal. I will change how people thought, I will make the world more comfortable, I will make a good environment, I will make a great relationship with the enemy, I will live together with the enemy. There will no more enemy words anymore and all of the things that I said. I am pretty sure that will make the world better. Cause No one will be powerful, no one can kill each other.  Because we have only one country in the world. Seem like the God said. Everybody had made form God. God gives us a life. God gives us a holy spirit. God prepares the way for us to be happy. If we follow God we will be happy. Because we are a human being. We learned and we know what is a bad thing or a good thing. We should have mercy to other people then we will not make god disappointed.