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Theme: How to be come Jesus?

Topic idea: Where is your favorite place? Why?

Essay: Persuasive Essay

Where is your favorite place? America, Korea, Netherlands, England, Austria, Maldives, Hawaii, Switzerland, Morocco, Spain, or Vietnam? I believe everybody has a favorite place in mind. Many people want to go to the world historic locations like the great wall of china. But for me, my favorite place is Thailand.

Thailand is at the center of the Southeast Asia. Thailand is the world’s 50th largest country by total area and the 21st-most-populous country. The capital and largest city is Bangkok. Thailand has a lot of beautiful places to visit, such as beautiful beaches, historic locations, mountain views, and temples.

I love everything in Thailand and I like to go the to beaches on the island in the south of Thailand. The name is Phuket island. Phuket is the most popular city in Thailand. Thai people and tourists like coming here because around Phuket has small beautiful islands and beautiful beaches such as Phi Phi island, Similan island, Racha island, and Koh Khai island. Phuket is one of the adventure capitals of Thailand. On the island, Snorkeling and scuba diving are both popular here because of the amazing visibility the clear water provides. In addition, quad biking, white water rafting, kayaking and zip line runs are all available to do.

       

For the nightlife at Phuket, around the island there are dozens of bars, pubs and nightclubs pumping out music at ear splitting decibels, serving drinks at cheap prices and generally creating a hedonistic environment. It is a very good place for people who want to be drunk and relax.

It is not only the beaches that are popular in Thailand, there are also nice mountain views in the north of Thailand, named Chiang Mai. This place is very popular with mountains, temples, and street foods. You can spend hours walking around the ornate Buddhist temples all over Chiang Mai. Given that there are over 300 temples. The big golden Buddha statues among our favorite temples are Wat San Duok, Wat Chiang Man, Wat Lok Moli, Wat Chedi Luang, Wat Montien and Doi Suthep. After I walked around the temple, I could buy food around the temple. It is local food which is very delicious.

    

 Why Thailand is my favorite place? As mention above, there are a lot of beautiful places and a lot of delicious food. In addition, for sure this is my hometown and my family live here. I went anywhere I want to go but I have never felt happy and warm as far as Thailand. Like Jesus always come back home.

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Theme: How to be come Jesus?

Topic idea: Where is your favorite place? Why?

Essay: Persuasive Essay

Where is your favorite place? America, Korea, Netherlands, England, Austria, Maldives, Hawaii, Switzerland, Morocco, Spain, or Vietnam? I believe everybody has a favorite place in mind. Many people want to go to the world historic locations like the great wall of china. But for me, my favorite place is Thailand.

Thailand is at the center of the Southeast Asia. Thailand is the world’s 50th largest country by total area and the 21st-most-populous country. The capital and largest city is Bangkok. Thailand has a lot of beautiful places to visit, such as beautiful beaches, historic locations, mountain views, and temples.

I love everything in Thailand and I like to go the to beaches on the island in the south of Thailand. The name is Phuket island. Phuket is the most popular city in Thailand. Thai people and tourists like coming here because around Phuket has small beautiful islands and beautiful beaches such as Phi Phi island, Similan island, Racha island, and Koh Khai island. Phuket is one of the adventure capitals of Thailand. On the island, Snorkeling and scuba diving are both popular here because of the amazing visibility the clear water provides. In addition, quad biking, white water rafting, kayaking and zip line runs are all available to do.

For the nightlife at Phuket, around the island there are dozens of bars, pubs and nightclubs pumping out music at ear splitting decibels, serving drinks at cheap prices and generally creating a hedonistic environment. It is a very good place for people who want to be drunk and relax.

It is not only the beaches that are popular in Thailand, there are also nice mountain views in the north of Thailand, named Chiang Mai. This place is very popular with mountains, temples, and street foods. You can spend hours walking around the ornate Buddhist temples all over Chiang Mai. Given that there are over 300 temples. The big golden Buddha statues among our favorite temples are Wat San Duok, Wat Chiang Man, Wat Lok Moli, Wat Chedi Luang, Wat Montien and Doi Suthep. After I walked around the temple, I could buy food around the temple. It is local food which is very delicious.

 Why Thailand is my favorite place? As mention above, there are a lot of beautiful places and a lot of delicious food. In addition, for sure this is my hometown and my family live here. I went anywhere I want to go but I have never felt happy and warm as far as Thailand. Like Jesus always come back home.

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Second Draft

Theme: How to be come Jesus?

Topic idea: Where is your favorite place? Why?

Essay: Persuasive Essay

Where is your favorite place? America, Korea, Netherlands, England, Austria, Maldives, Hawaii, Switzerland, Morocco, Spain, or Vietnam? I believe everybody has a favorite place in mind. Many people want to go to world historic locations like the great wall of china. But for me my favorite place is Thailand.

Thailand is a country at the center of the Southeast Asian Thailand is the world’s 50th largest country by total area and the 21st-most-populous country. The capital and largest city is Bangkok. In Thailand have a lot of place beautiful to visit. Such as beautiful beaches, historic locations, mountain views, temples, and Thai foods.

I love everything in Thailand and I like to go the to beaches in south of Thailand the name is Phuket island. Phuket is the most popular in Thailand. Thai people and tourists like to coming here. because around Phuket island has beautiful islands and beautiful beaches such as Phi phi island, Similan island, Racha island, Koh khai island. Phuket is one of the adventure capitals of Thailand. In island Snorkelling and scuba diving are both popular here because of the amazing visibility the clear water provides. In addition, quad biking, white water rafting, kayaking and zip line runs are all available to do on the island.

The nightlife at Phuket. Around the island there have dozens of bars, pubs and nightclubs pumping out music at ear splitting decibels, serving drinks at cheap prices and generally creating a hedonistic environment.it very good place for who want to drunk and relax.

It not only the beaches that is popular in Thailand. They have nice mountain view in north of Thailand the name Chiang Mai. This place is very popular about mountain, temple, and street foods. You can spend hours walking around the ornate Buddhist temples all over Chiang Mai. Given that there are over 300 temples. The big golden Buddha statues Among our favorite temples are Wat San Duok, Wat Chiang Man, Wat Lok Moli, Wat Chedi Luang, Wat Montien and Doi Suthep. After I walking around the temple. I can bought the food around the temple it a local foods it very delicious.

Why Thailand is my favorite place? As mention above, there are a lot of beautiful places and a lot of delicious food. In addition, for sure this is my hometown and my family live here. I went anywhere I want to go but I have never felt happy and warm as far as Thailand. Like Jesus always come back home.


Frist Draft

Theme: How to be come Jesus?

Topic: Where is your favorite place? Why?

Essay: Persuasive Essay

Where is your favorite place? America, Korea, Netherlands, England, Austria, Maldives, Hawaii, Switzerland, Morocco, Spain, or Vietnam? I believe everybody has a favorite place in mind. Many people want to go to world historic locations like the great wall of china. But for me my favorite place is Thailand.

Thailand is a country at the center of the Southeast Asian Thailand is the world’s 50th largest country by total area and the 21st-most-populous country. The capital and largest city is Bangkok. In Thailand have a lot of place beautiful to visit. Such as beautiful beaches, historic locations, mountain views, temples, and Thai foods.

I love everything in Thailand and I like to go the to beaches in south of Thailand the name is Phuket island. Phuket is the most popular in Thailand. Thai people and tourists like to coming here. because around Phuket island has beautiful islands and beautiful beaches such as Phi phi island, Similan island, Racha island, Koh khai island. Phuket is one of the adventure capitals of Thailand. In island Snorkelling and scuba diving are both popular here because of the amazing visibility the clear water provides. In addition, quad biking, white water rafting, kayaking and zip line runs are all available to do on the island.

The nightlife at Phuket. Around the island there have dozens of bars, pubs and nightclubs pumping out music at ear splitting decibels, serving drinks at cheap prices and generally creating a hedonistic environment.it very good place for who want to drunk and relax.

It not only the beaches that is popular in Thailand. They have nice mountain view in north of Thailand the name Chiang Mai. This place is very popular about mountain, temple, and street foods. You can spend hours walking around the ornate Buddhist temples all over Chiang Mai. Given that there are over 300 temples. The big golden Buddha statues Among our favorite temples are Wat San Duok, Wat Chiang Man, Wat Lok Moli, Wat Chedi Luang, Wat Montien and Doi Suthep. After I walking around the temple. I can bought the food around the temple it a local foods it very delicious.

Why Thailand is my favorite place? For sure this is my hometown. My family live here. I went to anywhere I want go but I never feel happy and warm as far as Thailand. Like Jesus said

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