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Theme : How to become like Jesus?

Topic idea : What will you do to make the world a better place?

Essay: Persuasive

It seems that people nowadays are seeking the best way to meet their needs. It is resulting in much competition. The rich becoming richer while the poor are becoming poorer. Although, the world has produced more than enough food for all humans, hunger is still all around us​. People have harnessed  nature to their needs, cutting down the trees, and carving up the mountains with roads, factories, and buildings. They are pouring toxic chemicals into the environment, creating air pollution. The spillage of oil in the sea during ship transportation has not only polluted the water but also has blocked the sunlight which is essential for underwater living creatures.

It is very difficult for us to control the circumstances that will never be changed. However, we can make the world a better place by doing very simple things in our daily basis. First of all, respect yourself and others; be honest about who you are. When you know what makes you feel good, continue to be clear with yourself and others. For example,  you may ​feel better about working in social work rather than working in computer coding which pays more money. Be honest and stick with what makes you happy, even if we respect others but do not let them define who you are.

Secondly, volunteering your time to the local community. Whether in schools or churches, children are the future of this world; help them develop their skills. Spend some time at the church, help feed the homeless, cut their hair, and donate some of your clothes. In addition, you might help a nonprofit organization build shelters for the homeless. These are the sign of harmony and humanity.

Thirdly, as I mentioned above about air pollution. I would encourage you to drive less in order to reduce the ​toxic air which is ​released by cars. You can carpool or take public transportation to work: bike or walk to pick up small things from the grocery store. Furthermore, preserve the trees by using less paper. Learn how to use technology, especially the smartphone, so you can actually do almost everything on your phone. For example, online banking, email, jot down some notes or make a shopping list on your phone, etc.

Lastly, conserve water and donate to clean water charities. Do not waste water by letting it run  while you are doing something else. You might donate to clean water organizations. As you know, in many parts of the world people are suffering not only from malnutrition but from the lack of clean water.

To conclude,in order to make the world a better place, you need to be a generous person. Help preserve the environment as well as volunteering to help others.

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Theme : How to become like Jesus?

Topic idea : What will you do to make the world a better place?


Review and Edit by Mitchell Bonner

Essay: Persuasive

It seems that people nowadays are seeking the best way to meet their needs. It is resulting in much competition. with the rich becoming richer while the poor are becoming poorer. Although, the world has produced more than enough food for all humans, hunger is still all around us​. People have harnessed  nature to their needs, cutting down the trees, and carving up the mountains with roads, factories, and buildings. They are pouring toxic chemicals into the environment, creating air pollution. The spillage of oil in the sea during ship transportation has not only polluted the water but also has blocked the sunlight which is essential for underwater living creatures.

It is very difficult for us to control the circumstances that will never be changed. However, we can make the world a better place by doing very simple things in our daily basis. First of all, respect yourself and others; be honest about who you are. When you know what makes you feel good, continue to be clear with yourself and others. For example,  you may ​feel better about working in social work rather than working in computer coding which pays more money. Be honest and stick with what makes you happy, even if we respect others but do not let them define who you are.

Secondly, volunteering your time to the local community. Whether in schools or churches, children are the future of this world; help them develop their skills. Spend some time at the church, help feed the homeless, cut their hair, and donate some of your clothes. In addition, you might help a nonprofit organization build shelters for the homeless. These are the sign of harmony and humanity.

Thirdly, as I mentioned above about air pollution. I would encourage you to drive less in order to reduce the ​toxic air which is ​released by cars. You can carpool or take public transportation to work: bike or walk to pick up small things from the grocery store. Furthermore, preserve the trees by using less paper. Learn how to use technology, especially the smartphone, so you can actually do almost everything on your phone. For example, online banking, email, jot down some notes or make a shopping list on your phone, etc.

Lastly, conserve water and donate to clean water charities. Do not waste water by letting it run  while you are doing something else. You might donate to clean water organizations. As you know, in many parts of the world people are suffering not only from malnutrition but from the lack of clean water.

To conclude,in order to make the world a better place, you need to be a generous person. Help preserve the environment as well as volunteering to help others.

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Second

Theme : How to become like Jesus?

Topic idea : What will you do to make the world a better place?

Essay: Persuasive

It seems that people nowadays are seeking the best way to meet their needs. It is resulting in competition. The rich become richer and the poor become poorer. Although, the world has produced more than enough food for all humans, the hunger still all around. People have destroyed the nature, cutting down trees, exploding mountains replacing them with roads, factories, and buildings. They are producing toxic to the environment, especially air pollution. The spillage of oil on the sea during transportation is not only polluted the water but also blocked the sunlight which is essential for living creatures underwater.

It is very difficult for us to control the circumstances that will never be changed. However, we can make the world a better place by doing very simple things in our daily basis. First of all, respect yourself and others, honest about who you are. When you know what makes you feel good, continue to be clear with yourself and others. For example, if you feel good about working with social workers rather than coding which paid more. Be honest and stick with what makes you happy. Even if we respect others but do not let them define who you are.

Secondly, volunteering your time to the local community. Whether in schools or churches, children are the future of this world. Help them develop their skills, tutoring for instance. Spend some time at the church help feed the homeless, cut their hair, and donate some of your clothes. In addition, you might help the team build shelters for the homeless. These are the sign of harmony and humanity.

Thirdly, as I mentioned above about air pollution. I would encourage you to drive less in order to reduce toxic air which released by cars. You can carpool or take public transportation to work. Bike or walk to pick up small things from the grocery store. Furthermore, preserving the trees by using less paper. Learn how to use technology, especially smartphone you can actually do almost everything on your phone. For example, online banking, email, jot down some notes or make a shopping list on your phone etc.

Lastly, conserve water and donate to clean water charities. Do not let the water run down while you are doing something else. You might donate to clean water organizations. As you know, in many parts of the world people are suffering not only from malnutrition but the lack of clean water.

In conclusion, it seems that people nowadays don’t care about nature and others. However, we can make this world a better place. Being generous and helping out others is the best way to make this world a better place.

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First

Theme : How to become like Jesus?

Topic idea : What will you do to make the world a better place?

Essay: Persuasive

It seems that people nowadays are seeking the best to meet their needs. It is resulting in competition. The rich are richer the poor are poorer. Although, the world has produced more than enough food for all humans, the hunger still all around. People have harassed the nature, cutting down trees, exploding mountains replacing them with roads, factories, and buildings. They are producing toxic to the environment, especially air pollution. The spillage of oil on the sea during transportation is not only polluted the water but also blocked the sunlight which is essential for living creatures underwater.

It is very difficult for us to control the circumstances that will never be changed. However, we can make the world a better place by doing very simple things in our daily basis. First of all, respect yourself and others, honest about who you are. When you know what makes you feel good, continue to be clear with yourself and others. For example, if you feel good about working with social workers rather than coding which paid more. Be honest and stick with what makes you happy. Even if we respect others but do not let them define who you are.

Secondly, volunteering your time to the local community. Whether in schools or churches, children are the future of this world. Help them develop their skills, tutoring for instance. Spend some time at the church help feed the homeless, cut their hair, and donate some of your clothes. In addition, you might help the team build shelters for the homeless. These are the sign of harmony and humanity.

Thirdly, as I mentioned above about air pollution. I would encourage you to drive less in order to reduce toxic air which released by cars. You can carpool or take public transportation to work. Bike or walk to pick up small things from the grocery store. Furthermore, preserving the trees by using less paper. Learn how to use technology, especially smartphone you can actually do almost everything on your phone. For example, online banking, email, jot down some notes or make a shopping list on your phone etc.

Lastly, conserve water and donate to clean water charities. Do not let the water run down while you are doing something else. You might donate to clean water organizations. As you know, in many parts of the world people are suffering not only from malnutrition but the lack of clean water.