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2nd Essay – Compare and contrast Essay

Final:

“When Someone Misunderstands You”

When did someone misunderstand you? It happened to me a lot of times when I talked to other people whenever I used unclear words and confusing communication. However, it depended on what the topic was and who the other person was. Because communication can be a variety and easy to mislead each other, how should you do and become like Jesus when someone misunderstands you?

First, you had better stay calm.

Have you heard that when you talk loud, the other will talk back louder? Someone might get angry at the beginning. It will make it worse if the other person also get mad. Eventually both of you will not have a chance to understand each other. The better way to start is staying calm and cool. Whenever someone misunderstands you, please take a second to think how to communicate better. The other person will see and take a second too when you keep calm. Like Jesus did when He was blaspheming in Capernaum.(Mark 2:7)

Second, You had better try to explain as clear as you can.

Someone thinks just being quiet will make everything better. It might work for some situations but misunderstanding is still there. For example, your wife misunderstands you that you are cheating on her. Instead of telling the truth, you keep quiet and do not say anything. Consequently, she will always keep in mind and do not trust you anymore. Some situations someone misunderstands you and thinks of you in a bad way. You had better explain and make it clear as soon as possible. Furthermore, you should talk softly and politely. As a result, that person will understand you and know you better. Like Jesus did, He explained people who were questioning in their heart how He could do that.( Mark 2:8)

Third, you had better fix yourself as well.

Some people may not think how they communicate is confusing. Even though they try to explain and everything is clearer, they still communicate the same way which is not clear. Therefore, misunderstanding will continue happening. As you know that communication can cause misunderstanding, sometimes it might be your fault. In such case, you should adjust the way you communicate with other people. Do not just explain, but also fix your confusing words how to communicate well. Like Jesus asked people which way is easier to say to the paralytic. (Mark 2:9)

In summary, since you have known these three steps;-keeping calm, explaining and communicating well- are the good idea to make situations better when someone misunderstands you, why do you not try to follow them?  Then you will become like Jesus, who was very calm and could fix everything and amaze everyone at the end. (Mark 2:12)

 

Friend review:

  1. Conclusion part is short.
  2. Body part is long and over 400 words.
  3. Some words are used redundantly.
  4. Good at organizing.
  5. Link to the theme ‘Learn to be like Jesus’

By Pakpimkarn Booncharn

 

Rewrite:

“When Someone Misunderstands You”

When did someone misunderstand you? It happened to me a lot of times when I talked to other people whenever I used unclear words and confusing communication. However, it depended on what the topic was and who the other person was. Because communication can be a variety and easy to mislead each other, how should you do and become like Jesus when someone misunderstands you?

First, you had better stay calm.

Have you heard that when you talk loud, the other will talk back louder? Someone might get angry at the beginning. It will make it worse if the other person also get mad. Eventually both of you will not have a chance to understand each other. The better way to start is staying calm and cool. Whenever someone misunderstands you, please take a second to think how to communicate better. The other person will see and take a second too when you keep calm. Like Jesus did when He was blaspheming in Capernaum.(Mark 2:7)

Second, You had better try to explain as clear as you can.

Someone thinks just being quiet will make everything better. It might work for some situations but misunderstanding is still there. For example, your wife misunderstands you that you are cheating on her. Instead of telling the truth, you keep quiet and do not say anything. Consequently, she will always keep in mind and do not trust you anymore.

Some situations someone misunderstands you and thinks of you in a bad way. You had better explain and make it clear as soon as possible. Furthermore, you should talk softly and politely. As a result, that person will understand you and know you better. Like Jesus did, He explained people who were questioning in their heart how He could do that.( Mark 2:8)

Third, you had better fix yourself as well.

Some people may not think how they communicate is confusing. Even though they try to explain and everything is clearer, they still communicate the same way which is not clear. Therefore, misunderstanding will continue happening. As you know that communication can cause misunderstanding, sometimes it might be your fault. In such case, you should adjust the way you communicate with other people. Do not just explain, but also fix your confusing words how to communicate well. Like Jesus asked people which way is easier to say to the paralytic. (Mark 2:9)

In summary, since you have known these three steps;-keeping calm, explaining and communicating well- are the good idea to make situations better when someone misunderstands you, why do you not try to follow them?  Then you will become like Jesus, who was very calm and could fix everything and amaze everyone at the end. (Mark 2:12)

 

First draft:

“When Someone Misunderstands You”

 

When did someone misunderstand you?

Because communication can be variety and easy to mislead each other.

It happened to me a lot of times. When misunderstanding happened, sometimes the result could be arguing and/or fighting. Though it depends what the topic is and who the other person is.  How can you become like Jesus when someone misunderstand you?

1.stay calm

Have you heard that when you talk loud, the other will talk back louder? Someone might get angry at the beginning. It will make it worse if the other person also get mad. Eventually you will not have a chance to understand each other.

The better way to start is staying calm and cool. Whenever someone misunderstand you, please take a second to think how to communicate better. The other person may see and take a second too when you keep calm. Like Jesus did when He was blaspheming in Capernaum.(Mark 2:7)

2.try to explain as clear as you can

Someone thinks just be quiet will help everything better. It might work for some situations but misunderstanding is still there. For example, your wife misunderstands you that you are cheating on her. Instead of telling the truth, you keep quiet and do not say anything. Consequently, she will always keep in mind and do not trust you anymore.

Some situations someone misunderstand you and think of you in a bad way. You had better explain and make it clear as soon as possible. As a result, that person will understand you and know you better. Like Jesus did, He explained people who were questioning in their heart how He could do that.( Mark 2:8)

3.fix yourself

Some people may not think how they communicate is confusing. Even though they try to explain and everything is clearer, they still communicate the same way which is not clear. Therefore, misunderstanding will continue happening. As you know that communication can cause misunderstanding. Sometimes it might be your fault. In such case, you should adjust the way you communicate with other people. Do not just explain, but somehow fix yourself how to communicate well. Like Jesus asked people which way is easier to say to the paralytic. (Mark 2:9)

In summary, since you have known these three steps are the good idea to make situations better when someone misunderstands you, why do you not try to follow and then you will become like Jesus, who was very calm? As a result He could fix everything and amaze everyone.