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Final Draft
Songtai Sangtaweep Eng 101
2nd writing assignment
Theme; how to be like Jesus
Essay type; descriptive
Topic; If you fasting 40 hrs. What will happen?
As can be seen, human race have to eat and drink to survive and maintain their daily routine. People have different diet schedule. Some people eat three times a day, while some people only eat 2 times a day. As you may know, the average people always have three meals a days, breakfast, lunch and dinner. On the other hand, some people, monk, they eat only once a day and they cannot eat after 12.00 pm. As a result, human are always fasting at least 8-12 hours for the average people. Some are fasting 24 hour or even more.

Fasting is the state of body fasting. Like car refill the gas to operate, our human body need food as a gas to maintain our daily routine. However, Human body is more sophisticated than machine. Human body could be fasting for very long time without eating. On the other hand, car will not operate without has. For example, monks have to fast 24 hour. In other word, they only eat once a day before noon. Another example is Ramadan, they can only eat when the sunset. These are the examples of the possibility of long fasting.

Some people find it difficult to perform a long fasting while some people could easily perform long fasting. Jesus believed fasting is preying time, and he have done more than 40 hours fasting. If I have to perform 40 hours fasting, I believe I would be able to make it. Since my regular fasting time is 18 hours a day, I believe 40 hours fasting would be possible. Back in time when we have to hunt for surviving, it is not that convenient to find the food to eat when you are hungry, so I believed that our ancestors had to perform a very long fasting. Comparing to nowadays, food is everywhere.

I believed that human body is a incredible machine. After long fasting, it will detox the left over poison in our body. More importantly, our body will also adjust the balance of it function like reset. Moreover, our body will repair and replace the old cells. As a result, I believed that long period fasting have the good benefit to our body.

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Songtai Sangtaweep Eng 101
2nd writing assignment
Theme; how to be like Jesus
Essay type; descriptive
Topic; If you fasting 40 hrs. What will happen?
As can be seen, human have to eat and drink to survive and maintain their daily routine. People have different diet schedule. Some people eat three times a day, while some people only eat 2 times a day. As you may know, the average people always have three meals a days, breakfast, lunch and dinner. On the other hand, some people, monk, they eat only once a day and they cannot eat after 12.00 pm. As a result, human are always fasting at least 8-12 hours for the average people. Some are fasting 24 hour or even more.

Fasting is the state of body fasting. Like machine refill the gas to operate, our human body need food as a gas to maintain our daily routine. However, Human body is more sophisticated than machine. Human body could be fasting for very long time without eating. For example, monks have to fast 24 hour. In other word, they only eat once a day before noon. Another example is Ramadan, they can only eat when the sunset.

Some people find it difficult to perform a long fasting while some people could easily perform long fasting. Jesus believed fasting is preying time, and he have done more than 40 hours fasting. If I have to perform 40 hours fasting, I believe I would be able to make it. Since my regular fasting time is 18 hours a day, I believe 40 hours fasting would be possible. Back in time when we have to hunt for surviving, it is not that convenient to find the food to eat when you are hungry, so I believed that our ancestor had to perform a very long fasting.

What will happen if we perform 40 hours fasting? I believed that human body is a incredible machine. After long fasting, it will detox the left over poison in our body. After long fasting, our body will also adjust the balance of it function like reset. Moreover, our body will repair and replace the old cell. As a result, I believed that long period fasting have the good benefit to our body.

Second Draft
Songtai Sangtaweep Eng 101
2nd writing assignment
Theme; how to be like Jesus
Essay type; descriptive
Topic; If you fasting 40 hrs. What will happen?
As can be seen, human have to eat and drink to survive and maintain their daily routine. People have different diet schedule. Some people eat three times a day, while some people only eat 2 times a day. As you may know, the average people always have three meals a days, breakfast, lunch and dinner. On the other hand, some people, monk, they eat only once a day and they cannot eat after 12.00 pm. As a result, human are always fasting at least 8-12 hours for the average people. Some are fasting 24 hour or even more.

Fasting is the state of body fasting. Like machine refill the gas to operate, our human body need food as a gas to maintain our daily routine. However, Human body is more sophisticated than machine. Human body could be fasting for very long time without eating. For example, monks have to fast 24 hour. In other word, they only eat once a day before noon. Another example is Ramadan, they can only eat when the sunset.

Some people find it difficult to perform a long fasting while some people could easily perform long fasting. Jesus believed fasting is preying time, and he have done more than 40 hours fasting. If I have to perform 40 hours fasting, I believe I would be able to make it. Since my regular fasting time is 18 hours a day, I believe 40 hours fasting would be possible. Back in time when we have to hunt for surviving, it is not that convenient to find the food to eat when you are hungry, so I believed that our ancestor had to perform a very long fasting.

What will happen if we perform 40 hours fasting? I believed that human body is a incredible machine. After long fasting, it will detox the left over poison in our body. After long fasting, our body will also adjust the balance of it function like reset. Moreover, our body will repair and replace the old cell. As a result, I believed that long period fasting have the good benefit to our body.

First Draft
Songtai Sangtaweep Eng 101
2nd writing assignment
Theme; how to be like Jesus
Essay type; descriptive
Topic; If you fasting 40 hrs. What will happen?
As can be seen, human have to eat and drink to survive and maintain their daily routine. People have different diet schedule. Some people eat three times a day, while some people only eat 2 times a day. As you may know, the average people always have three meals a days, breakfast, lunch and dinner. On the other hand, some people, monk, they eat only once a day and they cannot eat after 12.00 pm. As a result, human are always fasting at least 8-12 hours for the average people. Some are fasting 24 hour or even more.

Fasting is the state of body fasting. Like machine refill the gas to operate, our human body need food as a gas to maintain our daily routine. However, Human body is more sophisticated than machine. Human body could fasting for very long time without eating. For example, monks have to fast 24 hour. In other word, they only eat once a day before noon. Another example is Romadon, they can only eat when the sunset.

Some people find it difficult to perform a long fasting while some people could easily perform long fasting. Jesus believed fasting is preying time, and he have done more than 40 hours fasting. If I have to perform 40 hours fasting, I believe I would be able to make it. Since my regular fasting time is 18 hours a day, I believe 40 hours fasting would be possible. Back in time when we have to hunt for surviving, it is not that convenient to find the food to eat when you are hungry, so I believed that our ancestor have to perform a very long fasting.

What will happen if we perform 40 hours fasting? I believed that human body is a incredible machine. After long fasting, it will detox the left over poison in our body. After long fasting, our body will also adjust the balance of it function like reset. Moreover, our body will repair and replace the old cell. As a result, I believed that long period fasting have the good benefit to our body.