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Noah’s Ark.
Chang Woo Han
first draft
 The first lesson was Noah’s Ark. The professor showed Noah ‘s movie, but It was famous and I had seen it before. At first I fell into the film and did not know the intention of the professor, but later I got a new feeling as I read the Bible. There are several reasons why Noah’s ark remembers.
 First, Noah’s Ark was a famous story and I saw it in a movie. I read it as a comic book when I was a child, and I watched it on TV as an animation. I’ve seen a lot in movies, for example Evan Almighty, 2007. I think it is a good start to start classes with what I know.
 Second, the first reading of the Bible was the story of Noah. At the end of the lesson, homework was to read the Bible of Noah’s Part. That was the first time I read it, So I think I will have a lot of memories later.
 Finally, I asked many questions about what would have happened if I had been in that situation. In the Bible there was a difference between Noah and Noah in the movie. When I think about both of them, I was worried that I would be in that situation. This idea reminds me of this story so far.
 I did not read the Bible before, but I started to read interesting stories that I knew, so I felt fun. Noah ‘s Ark may appear a new beginning, but it seems to me that he has given a new beginning to the Bible.
final draft (+friend advice)
Topic idea Enlightenment of Noah’s Ark
I do not know how to be like Jesus yet, but through this essay I became acquainted with the Bible. Everything started at Oikos university, the first lesson was Noah’s Ark. The professor showed Noah ‘s movie, but It was famous and I had seen it before. At first I fell into the film and did not know the intention of the professor, but later I got a new feeling as I read the Bible. There are several reasons why Noah’s ark remembers.
 First, Noah’s Ark was a famous story and I saw it in a movie. I read it as a comic book when I was a child, and I watched it on TV as an animation. I’ve seen a lot in movies, for example Evan Almighty, 2007. I think it is a good start to start classes with what I know. Therefore, the story was easy to understand and long in memory.
 Second, the first reading of the Bible was the story of Noah. At the end of the lesson, homework was to read the Bible of Noah’s Part. That was the first time I read it. I did not have a Bible, but that was why I began to borrow and to read the Bible. Although it started with homework, everything was new every time I read the Bible, so I think I will have a lot of memories later.
Finally, I asked many questions about what would have happened if I had been in that situation. In the Bible there was a difference between Noah and Noah in the movie. When I think about both of them, I was worried that I would be in that situation. This idea reminds me of this story so far. And these questions are similar to the way of approaching God.
 I did not read the Bible before, but I started to read interesting stories that I knew, so I felt fun. Noah ‘s Ark may appear a new beginning, but it seems to me that he has given a new beginning to the Bible. After reading the Bible, I seem to have grown up. In the future, I expect all of my reading and studying the Bible.