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Time has a beginning and an end

In the beginning God created the heavens and the earth.

Now the earth was formless and void, and darkness was over the surface of the deep. And the Spirit of God was hovering over the surface of the waters.

The First Day: “Let there be light,” and there was light.

The Second Day: “Let there be an expanse between the waters, to separate the waters from the waters.” So, God made the expanse and separated the waters beneath it from the waters above. And it was so. God called the expanse “sky.”

The Third Day: God called the dry land “earth,” and the collection of waters He called “seas.”

The Fourth Day: “Let there be lights in the expanse of the sky to distinguish between day and night and to mark the seasons and days and years,

The Fifth Day: “Let the waters teem with living creatures, and let birds fly above the earth in the open expanse of the sky.”

The Sixth Day: “Let the earth bring forth living creatures according to their kinds: livestock, land crawlers, and wild animals according to their kinds.” And it was so.

From the beginning, I’m believe in God created the earth in seven days by the bible but in scientifically it hard to believe because everything in the earth have evidenced and evolutional in themselves that scientist was proved. Everything have evolution from wildlife, no one can be created. In my point of view, the nature created everything.

The theme of Revelation—the time of the end of the age and the return of Jesus Christ to establish God’s Kingdom on earth. John then describes events and trends to take place during the period before the 3 1⁄2 years. Jesus opens, in Revelation 6, the seven seals on the scroll of prophecy. There was a great earthquake; and the sun became black as sackcloth of hair, and the moon became like blood. And the stars of heaven fell to the earth, as a fig tree drops its late figs when it is shaken by a mighty wind. Then the sky receded as a scroll when it is rolled up, and every mountain and island was moved out of its place.

In my point of view, I believe in “the end of the earth” because I believe that everything was happened by the action. The earth never hurt everyone but everyone always destroys the earth. So, I think it is possible to happen and it make sense to agree with it but I don’t know how soon it going to be happen.

 

 Second draft

Time has a beginning and an end

In the beginning God created the heavens and the earth.

Now the earth was formless and void, and darkness was over the surface of the deep. And the Spirit of God was hovering over the surface of the waters.

From the beginning, I’m believe in God created the earth in seven days by the bible but in scientifically it hard to believe because everything in the earth have evidenced and evolutional in themselves that scientist was proved. Everything have evolution from wildlife, no one can be created. In my point of view, the natural created everything. And in my religion, we believe that everything has the reason in themselves, everything was created by themselves but it doesn’t mean you can touch everything that happen. Because sometime we also believe in invisible thing such as supernatural, spirits.

The theme of Revelation—the time of the end of the age and the return of Jesus Christ to establish God’s Kingdom on earth. John then describes events and trends to take place during the period before the 3 1⁄2 years. Jesus opens, in Revelation 6, the seven seals on the scroll of prophecy. There was a great earthquake; and the sun became black as sackcloth of hair, and the moon became like blood. And the stars of heaven fell to the earth, as a fig tree drops its late figs when it is shaken by a mighty wind. Then the sky receded as a scroll when it is rolled up, and every mountain and island was moved out of its place.

In my point of view, I believe in “the end of the earth” because I believe that everything was happened by the own action. The earth never hurt the human but the human always destroys the earth. So, I think it is possible to happen like the bible said. When the human did something, it going to be turn back to the human also that why it makes sense to agree with it but I just don’t know how soon it going to be happen.

 

Friend revise:

In my opinion, I agree with this essay because if you’re looking for the fact you will agree with her. I believe in scientific, everything should have evidence such as the human is evolved by the monkey. I’m believe in the action and the fact that I can prove but I’m not believe in invisible thing no matter it’s real or not real also. But I think some part of view is true because I think all of catastrophe can be happen from bad action that all people did it.

 

 

Final draft

Time has a beginning and an end

In the beginning God created the heavens and the earth.

Now the earth was formless and void, and darkness was over the surface of the deep. And the Spirit of God was hovering over the surface of the waters.

From the beginning, I’m believe in God created the earth in seven days by the bible but in scientifically it hard to believe because everything in the earth have evidenced and evolutional in themselves that scientist was proved. Everything have evolution from wildlife, no one can be created. In my point of view, the natural created everything. And in my religion, we believe that everything has the reason in themselves, everything was created by themselves but it doesn’t mean you can touch everything that happen. Because sometime we also believe in invisible thing such as supernatural, spirit.

However, the theme of Revelation—the time of the end of the age and the return of Jesus Christ to establish God’s Kingdom on earth.

In my point of view, I believe in “the end of the earth” because I believe that everything was happened by the own action. The earth never hurt the human but the human always destroys the earth. So, I think it is possible to happen like the bible said. When the human did something, it going to be turn back to the human also that why it makes sense to agree with it but I just don’t know how soon it going to be happen.

Finally, my friend revise that in her opinion, she agrees with this essay because if you’re looking for the fact you will agree with her. She believes in scientific, everything should have evidence such as the human is evolved by the monkey. She believes in the action and the fact that she can prove but she’s not believe in invisible thing no matter it’s real or not real also. And she thinks some part of the end of the earth is true because the all of catastrophe can be happen from bad action that all people did it. It’s factual.