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The Temple of Artemis(Diana) at Ephesus, Turkey. This temple is considered one of the Seven Wonders of the Ancient World. It was built to honor Artemis, one of three maiden goddesses of Olympus. This temple had to be rebuilt at least three times due to disaster and a mob that was determined to destroy it.

The great temple was built by Croesus, king of Lydia and was rebuilt after being burned by a madman named Herostratus. In the temple there is a statue of the goddesses Artemis, this place is very sacred. So the people bring the offerings to her and most of that are very valuable. Why most of people are respect and believe in Artemis? Because Artemis was the goddesses of wild animals, the hunt, vegetation, and of chastity and childbirth.

This temple was built from human beliefs to goddesses. At that time, there was no religion in that city yet. Humans need goddesses because they believe that goddesses will give light for the way in their lives.

When Christianity influences more than goddesses system. This temple was destroyed by the people who agianst goddesses. The remains of the building that made by marble were sold to build the Cathedral of St. Sophia and the Temple of St. John.

The temple of Diana is recognized as one of the Seven Wonders of the Ancient World because the whole building was built from marble. There are over 100 marble pillars around the building. The building and the surrounding area are vast and beautiful. It is a wonder that ancient humans could create a great architecture and use of hard materials in construction because at that time, the device is not ready or not much same like today. At present, still have little remains of the temple. It became a major tourist attraction of the world. Many people are interested and want to visit here. Unfortunately, we did not have the opportunity to see this temple before it was destroyed.

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The Temple of Artemis (Diana) at Ephesus, Turkey. This temple is considered one of the Seven Wonders of the Ancient World. It was built to honor Artemis, one of three maiden goddesses of Olympus. This temple had to be rebuilt at least three times due to disaster and a mob that was determined to destroy it.

The great temple was built by Croesus, king of Lydia, about 550 BCE and was rebuilt after being burned by a madman named Herostratus in 356 BCE. In the church is the goddess Artemis (Diana), this place is very sacred. So the people bring the offerings. Most of these items are very valuable. Why most of people are respect and believe in Artemis? Because Artemis was the goddess of wild animals, the hunt, and vegetation, and of chastity and childbirth.

This temple was built from human beliefs to goddess . At that time there was no religion in that city. Humans must have goddess because they believe that goddess will give light for the way in their lives. But there are some groups that do not agree or disregard with this. So there are the conflict between the two groups. And the group that disagree, they destroyed that important thing.

When Christianity influences more than many goddess system. This temple was destroyed. Poles made of marble, big marbles and also beautiful. It was brought to build the Cathedral of St. Sophia and the Temple of St. John.

The temple of Artemis is recognized as one of the Seven Wonders of the Ancient World because the whole building was built of marble. There are over 100 marble pillars. It is located around the building. The building and the surrounding area are vast and beautiful. It is a wonder that ancient humans could create a great architecture and use of hard materials in construction because at that time the device is not ready or not much same like today. Unfortunately, we did not have the opportunity to see this temple before it was destroyed.

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The Temple of Artemis (Diana) at Ephesus, Turkey. This temple is considered one of the Seven Wonders of the Ancient World. It was built to honor Artemis, one of three maiden goddesses of Olympus. This temple had to be rebuilt at least three times due to disaster and a mob that was determined to destroy it.

The great temple was built by Croesus, king of Lydia, about 550 BCE and was rebuilt after being burned by a madman named Herostratus in 356 BCE. In the church is the goddess Artemis (Diana), this place is very sacred. So the people bring the offerings. Most of these items are very valuable. Why most of people are respect and believe in Artemis? Because Artemis was the goddess of wild animals, the hunt, and vegetation, and of chastity and childbirth.

This temple was built from human beliefs to goddess . At that time there was no religion in that city. Humans must have goddess because they believe that goddess will give light for the way in their lives. But there are some groups that do not agree or disregard with this. So there are the conflict between the two groups. And the group that disagree, they destroyed that important thing.

When Christianity influences more than many goddess system. This temple was destroyed. Poles made of marble, big marbles and also beautiful. It was brought to build the Cathedral of St. Sophia and the Temple of St. John.

The temple of Artemis is recognized as one of the Seven Wonders of the Ancient World because the whole building was built of marble. There are over 100 marble pillars. It is located around the building. The building and the surrounding area are vast and beautiful. It is a wonder that ancient humans could create a great architecture and use of hard materials in construction because at that time the device is not ready or not much same like today. Unfortunately, we did not have the opportunity to see this temple before it was destroyed.

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The Temple of Artemis (Diana) at Ephesus, Turkey. This temple is considered one of the Seven Wonders of the Ancient World. It was built to honor Artemis, one of three maiden goddesses of Olympus. This temple had to be rebuilt at least three times due to disaster and a mob that was determined to destroy it.

Some group of people in that time are interested and praise this temple because They respect and believe in Artemis who from heaven. They believe Artemis will save the city from catastrophes and disasters.

The great temple was built by Croesus, king of Lydia, about 550 BCE and was rebuilt after being burned by a madman named Herostratus in 356 BCE. In the church is the goddess Artemis (Diana), this place is very sacred. So the people bring the offerings. Most of these items are very valuable. Why most of people are respect and believe in Artemis? Because Artemis was the goddess of wild animals, the hunt, and vegetation, and of chastity and childbirth.

This temple was built from human beliefs to goddess . At that time there was no religion in that city. Humans must have goddess because they believe that goddess will give light for the way in their lives. But there are some groups that do not agree or disregard with this. So there are the conflict between the two groups. And the group that disagree, they destroyed that important thing.

When Christianity influences more than many goddess system (polytheism). This temple was destroyed. Poles made of marble, big marbles and also beautiful. It was brought to build the Cathedral of St. Sophia and the Temple of St. John.

The temple of Artemis is recognized as one of the Seven Wonders of the Ancient World because it was built of marble. There are over 100 marble pillars. It is located around the building. The building and the surrounding area are vast and beautiful. It is a wonder that ancient humans could create a great architecture and use of hard materials in construction because at that time the device is not ready or not much same like today. Unfortunately, we did not have the opportunity to see this temple before it was destroyed.