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Review: DHANASETII CHODVORAPAN

 

What is making your strong?

In these case, I am not sure about how strong am I. Because of the strong word it could be any kind of strong. Such as strong of mine, strong of the body or physically strong. But I think the physically strong from most of the people because they are eating a good food and live in the great environment. That one is about physically strong. But for the strong mind is more important. For example, if you want to become a strong mind person you should learn a lot from the experience. You have to be brave in any situation. Because of any experiences are good. The experience is a very good teacher. It will teach you everything even you fail or succeed. If you fail one time after that you will know why you have failed and you will learn a lot of things from the failed then try to fix that problem and make it better.

If you do it again and you failed it again there is no problem because you will learn more from the second failed. And If you fail it again and again and again so many time. Please remember that you will learn much more every time that you have failed. But when you become a successful person that means you have become a strong person too.

There are many ways to become a strong person. The first example that I told you was just the one reason to become a strong person.

The second thing that makes you become strong is love. Because I think love could help people from sadness. Love is beautiful and makes peoples feel good. No one feels comfortable if they know that someone hates them. Same like Jesus said that love could help people because Jesus loves us. Jesus came to the world to help us. Because Jesus loves us. God gives us a way to become a strong people. God gives us a holy sprite. If you believe in God and trust him you will be happy and become a strong person. God will take the fear out from our heart. You will have no fear because God will bless you.

Now I just think about how to have a strong mind with no fear.

I will believe in God and let him help me and show me how to walk to the right way. Those are all of the reason in my opinion what is making me strong or make people strong. 

 

First draft

What is making your strong?

In these case, I am not sure about how strong am I. Because it could be any strong. Example a strong of mine, strong of the body or physically strong. But I think most of the people are strong because they are eating a good food and live in the great environment. For example, if you want to become a strong person you should learn a lot from the experience. you have to be brave in any situation. Because of any experience are good. The experience is a very good teacher. It will teach you everything even you fail or succeed. If you fail one time after that you will know that why you have failed and you will learn a lot of things from the failed then try to fix that problem then make it better.

If you do it again and you failed it again there is no problem because you will learn more from the second failed. And If you fail it again and again and again so many time. Please remember that you will learn much more every time that you have failed. But when you become a successful person that means you have become a strong person too.

There are many ways to become a strong person. The first example that I told you was just the one reason to become a strong person.

The second thing that makes you become strong is love. Because I think love could help people from sadness. Love is beautiful and makes peoples feel good. No one feels comfortable if they know that someone hates them. Same like Jesus said love could help people because Jesus loves us. Jesus came to the world to help us. Because Jesus loves us. God gives us a way to become a strong people. God gives us a holy sprite. If you believe in God and trust him you will be happy and become a strong person. God will take the fear out from our heart. You will have no fear because God will bless you.

Now I just think about how to have a strong mind with no fear.

I will believe in God and let him help me and show me how to walk to the right way. Those are all of the reason in my opinion what is making me strong or make people strong.