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Final:

A lot of people associate being strong with physical strength, such as how many push ups can one do or how heavy one can exercise weights with. Those people are strong, no doubt about it, but I think love is essentially is what makes a person strong.

Jesus is strong, not because he is the son of God, but because of his undying love for us. Jesus has been through so many things, and even died for us, because of how much he loves us. He didn’t carry boulders because he wasn’t physically strong, but he did carry our burdens which I think is 100x heavier than carrying a boulder on his back. Because of his strength, it passed down to others who were influenced by his love, causing them to also give others the love and strength needed. However, it can also cause harm.

Nowadays, people take advantage of one’s love, how many others had taken advantage of both Jesus’ and God’s love. Those that crucified him took advantage of his love and instead threw hate at him. Others took advantage of God’s love by worshiping other entities. An example of how one can take advantage of someone is by cheating on them. The cheater takes advantage of the person who loves them, cause that person to become weakened. Love, if taken advantaged of, makes people vulnerable and weak. One of the millions of things that we can learn form Jesus is we are still able to forgive others, no matter how great or little pain that one has inflicted onto us, because of love.

Jesus and the Lord forgives everyone’s sins if they see that they truly also love them as much as they love us. Jesus even died on the cross for us because of how much he loves everyone! Love is such a powerful thing. Because of love, we have grew and advanced so much as a society, despite all of the horrors and tragedies that befall us. From learning about the Lord and Jesus, we will not weaken because we are strong and love one another.

Peer Review:

I really liked how you showed the compared and contrast about how strong love is and how Jesus is strong because of love. A lot of people do not think that people can be strong through love, but what you wrote shows that’s wrong!

Second Draft:

People today always think that being strong is how big your muscles are, when that’s not true. People forget that love can make us strong, and an example of that is Jesus.

Jesus is strong, not because he is the son of God, but because of his undying love for us. Jesus has been through so many things, and even died for us, because of how much he loves us. Because of his strength, it passed down to others who were influenced by his love, causing them to also give others the love and strength needed. However, it can also cause harm.

Nowadays, people take advantage of one’s love, how many others had taken advantage of both Jesus’ and God’s love. Those that crucified him took advantage of his love and instead threw hate at him. An example of how one can take advantage of someone is by cheating on them. The cheater takes advantage of the person who loves them, cause that person to become weakened. One of the millions of things that we can learn form Jesus is we are still able to forgive others, no matter how great or little pain that one has inflicted onto us, because of love.

Jesus and the Lord forgives everyone’s sins if they see that they truly also love them as much as they love us. Because of love, we have grew and advanced so much as a society, despite all of the horrors and tragedies that befall us. From learning about the Lord and Jesus, we will not weaken because we are strong and love one another.

Peer Review:

People today always think that being strong is how big your muscles are, when that’s not true. People forget that love can make us strong, and an example of that is Jesus.

Jesus is strong, not because he is the son of God, but because of his undying love for us. Jesus has been through so many things, and even died for us, because of how much he loves us. Because of his strength, it passed down to others who were influenced by his love, causing them to also give others the love and strength needed. However, it can also cause harm.

Nowadays, people take advantage of one’s love, how many others had taken advantage of both Jesus’ and God’s love.  An example of how one can take advantage of someone is by cheating on them. The cheater takes advantage of the person who loves them, cause that person to become weakened. One of the millions of things that we can learn form Jesus is we are still able to forgive others, no matter how great or little pain that one has inflicted onto us, because of love.

Jesus and the Lord forgives everyone’s sins if they see that they truly also love them as much as they love us. Because of love, we have grew and advanced so much as a society, despite all of the horrors and tragedies that befall us. From learning about the Lord and Jesus, we will not weaken because we are strong and love one another.