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 importance of  humility

 We forget the humility when life is abundant and my work is well done. Then, when life is not solved well, it becomes difficult financially or body becomes weak, and then I think about my own fault little by little. We think we should respect the other person and take care of myself before that happens.  But  knowing that, we act arrogant or ignore the other person. We must always observe me. At the end of the day, you should have time to look back today. Did I spend a day today to honor the other person? You have to ask yourself a question.

there are people who overestimate themselves without anything else. There are some people who are confident as if the world is theirs. If you look at it, there are people who live with their mouths It is a person who should be very careful. because it can fall into a deep hell in a moment, and man is a living being with inherent limitations. It is a fundamentally immutable entity. It is impossible to live on a steady upward curve of life. Even if you are in a ‘good position’ or ‘great position’, you have to come down in just five or ten years. It is a natural thing to fall down or fall vertically because it is a human being who has a fundamental deficiency in this changing world.

 

So we need humility. It is not humiliating once and twice.Especially when my life is rosy all around, we need to be more humble when all things go well. I think about the virtue of humility. It is so simple in a dictionary sense. It means ‘there is an attitude that respects others and does not set oneself up’. But the meaning of humility in Christ’s faith is different in dimension. The first thing we need to do to build a virtue of humility is to know how great God is, how great is God’s love for me, and how great is His work.

 

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Second draft 

 importance of  humility

 We forget the humility when life is abundant and my work is well done. Then, when life is not solved well, it becomes difficult financially or body becomes weak, and then I think about my own fault little by little. We think we should respect the other person and take care of myself before that happens.  But even though knowing that, we act arrogant or ignore the other person. We must always observe me. At the end of the day, you should have time to look back today. Did I spend a day today to honor the other person? You have to ask yourself a question.

there are people who overestimate themselves without anything else. There are some people who are confident as if the world is theirs. If you look at it, there are people who live with their mouths It is a person who should be very careful. because it can fall into a deep hell in a moment, and man is a living being with inherent limitations. It is a fundamentally immutable entity. It is impossible to live on a steady upward curve of life. Even if you are in a ‘good position’ or ‘great position’, you have to come down in just five or ten years. It is a natural thing to fall down or fall vertically because it is a human being who has a fundamental deficiency in this changing world.

 

So we need humility. It is not humiliating once and twice.Especially when my life is rosy all around, we need to be more humble when all things go well. I think about the virtue of humility. It is so simple in a dictionary sense. It means ‘there is an attitude that respects others and does not set oneself up’. But the meaning of humility in Christ’s faith is different in dimension. The first thing we need to do to build a virtue of humility is to know how great God is, how great is God’s love for me, and how great is His work.

Final draft 

 importance of  humility

 We forget the humility when life is abundant and my work is well done. Then, when life is not solved well, it becomes difficult financially or body becomes weak, and then I think about my own fault little by little. We think we should respect the other person and take care of myself before that happens.  But even though knowing that, we act arrogant or ignore the other person. We must always observe me. At the end of the day, you should have time to look back today. Did I spend a day today to honor the other person? You have to ask yourself a question.

there are people who overestimate themselves without anything else. There are some people who are confident as if the world is theirs. If you look at it, there are people who live with their mouths It is a person who should be very careful. because it can fall into a deep hell in a moment, and man is a living being with inherent limitations. It is a fundamentally immutable entity. It is impossible to live on a steady upward curve of life. Even if you are in a ‘good position’ or ‘great position’, you have to come down in just five or ten years. It is a natural thing to fall down or fall vertically because it is a human being who has a fundamental deficiency in this changing world.

 

So we need humility. It is not humiliating once and twice.Especially when my life is rosy all around, we need to be more humble when all things go well. I think about the virtue of humility. It is so simple in a dictionary sense. It means ‘there is an attitude that respects others and does not set oneself up’. But the meaning of humility in Christ’s faith is different in dimension. The first thing we need to do to build a virtue of humility is to know how great God is, how great is God’s love for me, and how great is His work.