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First draft

What did you learn in the class

         In the fact, “Who are we, Where are we came from” that is always the question the people never know the true because on the earth we always separated 2 way to believe. In the first way, we were taught to believe in science. Everything had proved by science. If it cannot that is not true and that is unbelievable. In the second way, we were taught to believe in God, and invisible thing that we always call “Believe” and “The Miracle”. It depends on what are you looking for in your life and what is the way that you want to go for.

Some of part in class, I’m study about how was the world born by bible. I knew that God created the world in seven days but I already write about that story. So, this essay I will expense about “the end of the world”. What is going on in the world on that day and what is happened in the end of the day.

In the bible, although we do not know the time, one thing we know for sure is that the Bible prophesies the end of the world as we know it. I believe that God created everything and God give our life so he deserves to take everything back if we are not deserving to get it. That is the way it should to be, as long as we are going to do like in the present. We are going to exploit the people with each other or encroach with animals or everything that they think it is not worth to live or have life more than them. Because everything in the world deserve to living and decide everything by themselves.

In my opinion, I believe in science but it doesn’t mean in the bible is not true. In the bible might true if it had evidence. Because I think everything that happened have a resource, everything has object. When you did something, another thing always happened. In the bible just warning about result that the human did it. The bible is warning about if you do something bad you will get effect that you done. You can see right now; many natural disasters were happened in the world because people in the world destroy the natural. They destroy the place that give food sources, living and everything to them in the beginning. So, it is make sense if something going to happened such as the bible said.

 

Second draft

What did you learn in the class 

         In the fact, “Who are we, Where are we came from” that is always the question the people never know the true because on the earth we always separated 2 way to believe. In the first way, we were taught to believe in science. Everything had proved by science. If it cannot that is not true and that is unbelievable. In the second way, we were taught to believe in God, and invisible thing that we always call “Believe” and “The Miracle”. It depends on what are you looking for in your life and what is the way that you want to go for.

Some of part in class, I’m study about how was the world born by bible. I knew that God created the world in seven days but I already write about that story. So, this essay I will expense about “the end of the world”. What is going on in the world on that day and what is happened in the end of the day.

In the bible, although we do not know the time, one thing we know for sure is that the Bible prophesies the end of the world as we know it. I believe that God created everything and God give our life so he deserves to take everything back if we are not deserving to get it.

In my opinion, I believe in science but it doesn’t mean in the bible is not true. In the bible might true if it had evidence. Because I think everything that happened have a resource, everything has object. When you did something, another thing always happened. In the bible just warning about result that the human did it. The bible is warning about if you do something bad you will get effect that you done. You can see right now; people in the world destroy the natural. They destroy the place that give food sources, living and everything to them in the beginning. So, it is make sense if something going to happened such as the bible said.

 

Friend’s revise

I agree with this writing, because I believe that everything that happened is the result from the action that we done. The human always receives and think they are own everything in the world. So, it makes sense if one day everything that the bible prophesies about the end of the world going to be happened.

 

Final draft

What did you learn in the class 

         In the fact, “Who are we, Where are we came from” that is always the question the people never know the true because on the earth we always separated 2 way to believe. In the first way, we were taught to believe in science. Everything had proved by science. If it cannot that is not true and that is unbelievable. In the second way, we were taught to believe in God, and invisible thing that we always call “Believe” and “The Miracle”. It depends on what are you looking for in your life and what is the way that you want to go for.

Some of part in class, I’m study about how was the world born by bible. I knew that God created the world in seven days but I already write about that story. So, this essay I will expense about “the end of the world”. What is going on in the world on that day and what is happened in the end of the day.

In the bible, although we do not know the time, one thing we know for sure is that the Bible prophesies the end of the world as we know it. I believe that God created everything and God give our life so he deserves to take everything back if we are not deserving to get it.

In my opinion, I believe in science but it doesn’t mean in the bible is not true. In the bible might true if it had evidence. Because I think everything that happened have a resource, everything has object. When you did something, another thing always happened. In the bible just warning about result that the human did it. The bible is warning about if you do something bad you will get effect that you done. You can see right now; people in the world destroy the natural. They destroy the place that give food sources, living and everything to them in the beginning. So, it is make sense if something going to happened such as the bible said.

Finally, In the part of my friend view, she agrees with this writing, because she believe that everything that happened is the result from the action that we done. The human always receives and think they are own everything in the world. So, it makes sense if one day everything that the bible prophesies about the end of the world going to be happened.