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PANNITCHA CHONGPANYAWAT

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1ST DRAFT

My name is Pannitcha. People call me Blue. I originally from Thailand. Thai people have long name and also long lastname. People in my coutry called me Blue, which is the easiest name.

I lived in USA about 3 year without family, with so little english skills. My first year is tough. I feel like my life is so hard. Why I have to deal with all the problem  by myself.

I always have my own car which is mean I could go anywhere anytime. It is very easy and convinient for me. My family always cook for me or oherwise I could buy it at the marget and the food is cheap too. I have heard cost of living in SF is the most highest in USA. I realize is it true. It is very difference from my country. I could communicate but sometime I don’t understand the specipic word. People around me help me a lot. Good things is I’m positive and keep motivate myself to getting better. I make my own decision to come to USA then I have to improve myself to survive in the big city.

The 1 st year was the worst because everything new. I’m not familiar with public transportation, cooking for myself, and english comunicate. Education in Thailand is confusing me and I studied in Thailand more than 10 years. I didn’t use English everyday that is why I didn’t get better with any English skills. My own opinion about improve is practice. I try so many way as my teacher suggest me for example I could getting better skill by listen to the music or watch movie. I’m motivate myself even sometime I have a lot of obstacles. I have to improve myself to my family and myself.
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2nd DRAFT

My name is Pannitcha. People call me Blue. I originally from Thailand. Thai people have long name and also long lastname. People in my coutry called me Blue, which is the easiest name and short as well. For Thai people it’s commond for us even our nick name not relate to our full name.

I lived in USA about 3 year without family, with so little english skills. My first year is tough because I didn’t get used to with big city like SF. I feel like my life is so hard. Why I have to deal with all the problem  by myself.

I always have my own car which is mean I could go anywhere anytime. It is very easy and convinient for me. My family always cook for me or oherwise I could buy it at the marget and the food is cheap too. I have heard cost of living in SF is the most highest in USA. I realize is it true. It is very difference from my country. I could communicate but sometime I don’t understand the specipic word. People around me help me a lot. Good things is I’m positive and keep motivate myself to getting better. I make my own decision to come to USA then I have to improve myself to survive in the big city.

The 1 st year was the worst because everything new. I’m not familiar with public transportation, cooking for myself, and english comunicate. Education in Thailand is confusing me and I studied in Thailand more than 10 years. I didn’t use English everyday that is why I didn’t get better with any English skills. My own opinion about improve is practice. I try so many way as my teacher suggest me for example I could getting better skill by listen to the music or watch movie. I’m motivate myself even sometime I have a lot of obstacles. I have to improve myself to my family and myself.

How I survive in USA is hard for me but I have good friend helping me sometime. I asked them to give me suggestion. I help them. They’re helpping me. We take turn to helping each other. I keep myself on track and I change my thought and I also thinking how to getting better for my life. I found out this is the best way to improve myself.
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FRIEND REVIEW

My name is Pannitcha. People call me Blue. I originally from Thailand. Thai people have long name and also long lastname. People in my coutry called me Blue, which is the easiest name and short as well. For Thai people it’s commond for us even our nick name not relate to our full name.

I lived in USA about 3 year without family, with so little english skills. My first year is tough because I did not get used to with big city like San Francisco. I feel like my life is so hard. Why I have to deal with all the problem  by myself.

I always have my own car which is mean I could go anywhere anytime. It is very easy and convinient for me. My family always cook for me or oherwise I could buy it at the marget and the food is cheap too.

I have heard cost of living in SF is the most highest in USA. I realize is it true. It is very difference from my country. I could communicate but sometime I don’t understand the specipic word. People around me help me a lot. Good things is I’m positive and keep motivate myself to getting better. I make my own decision to come to USA then I have to improve myself to survive in the big city.

The 1 st year was the worst because everything new. I’m not familiar with public transportation, cooking for myself, and english comunicate. Education in Thailand is confusing me and I studied in Thailand more than 10 years. I didn’t use English everyday that is why I didn’t get better with any English skills. My own opinion about improve is practice. I try so many way as my teacher suggest me for example I could getting better skill by listen to the music or watch movie. I’m motivate myself even sometime I have a lot of obstacles. I have to improve myself to my family and myself.

How I survive in USA is hard for me but I have good friend helping me sometime. I asked them to give me suggestion. I help them. They’re helpping me. We take turn to helping each other. I keep myself on track and I change my thought and I also thinking how to getting better for my life. I found out this is the best way to improve myself.
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FINAL

My name is Pannitcha. People call me Blue. I originally from Thailand. Thai people have long name and also long lastname. People in my coutry called me Blue, which is the easiest name and short as well. For Thai people it is commond for us even our nick name not relate to our full name.

I lived in Unitedstate of america about three year without family, with so little english skills. My first year is tough because I did not get used to with big city like San Francisco. I feel like my life is so hard. Why I have to deal with all the problem  by myself.

I always have my own car which is mean I could go anywhere anytime. It is very easy and convinient for me. My family always cook for me or oherwise I could buy it at the marget and the food is cheap too. I have heard cost of living in San francisco is the most highest in USA. I realize is it true.

It is very difference from my country. I could communicate but sometime I do not understand the specipic word. People around me help me a lot. Good things is I’m positive and keep motivate myself to getting better. I make my own decision to come to USA then I have to improve myself to survive in the big city.

The 1 st year was the worst because everything new. I’m not familiar with public transportation, cooking for myself, and english comunicate. Education in Thailand is confusing me and I studied in Thailand more than 10 years. I didn’t use English everyday that is why I didn’t get better with any English skills.

My own opinion about improve is practice. I try so many way as my teacher suggest me for example I could getting better skill by listen to the music or watch movie. I’m motivate myself even sometime I have a lot of obstacles. I have to improve myself to my family and myself.

How I survive in USA is hard for me but I have good friend helping me sometime. I asked them to give me suggestion. I help them. They’re helpping me. We take turn to helping each other. I keep myself on track and I change my thought and I also thinking how to getting better for my life. I found out this is the best way to improve myself.