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How to be like Jesus by topic What do you again and again

         I usually doing shopping online a lot  maybe 1-2 time a week and online shopping right now is the development of modern technology and The Internet offers people more and more convenience. With the Internet people can do a lot of things without going out. In the part people used the phone just only for call or text but right now the phone can do  a lot of things like paying bills, play games, FaceTime, watching movies, study online and In 2018 the most attractive one for people not just only for women or men but it can be for everyone is doing shopping online. 

          Online shopping right now attracts people because it has many advantages. For me I think especially for the office worker because they don’t have a lot of free time to go shopping because they’re busy with working or studying and doing other important things. So online shopping becomes the most convenient and best way for the office worker, students or maybe housewife. Many people choose shopping online also because they can’t stand that crowded and noisy environment. For shopping online, they just need to choose the things they want and pay online. For most people right now I think shopping is not a hard  job anymore, they can just stay at home and click the mouse then spend several minutes to get what they want without stepping out of the room or standing in line for checking. But for me I have another things about doing shopping online is not always a perfect thing it also has disadvantages. It seems easy and quick but there’s always a trap online. If you are careless it will bring you some troubles. For example if you order a cloth online at the moment you get the item you may find that the color is different from what you saw online or the size is either too small or too big because it is not available to try on before ordering. 

            So online shopping is offering convenience as well as disadvantages. On one hand we enjoy shopping without going out. On the other hand, we need to be very careful when choosing and trading online.

            It is same like Jesus always going to The synagogue because He do something again and again , For me I like to do shopping online  again and again.

 

 

 

 

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How to be like Jesus by topic What do you again and again

         I usually doing shopping online a lot  maybe 1-2 time a week and online shopping right now is the development of modern technology and The Internet offers people more and more convenience. With the Internet people can do a lot of things without going out. In the part people used the phone just only for call or text but right now the phone can do  a lot of things like paying bills, play games, FaceTime, watching movies, study online and In 2018 the most attractive one for people not just only for women or men but it can be for everyone is doing shopping online. 

          Online shopping right now attracts people because it has many advantages. More and more people and [ do not need it ] for me I think especially for the office worker because they don’t have a lot of free time to go shopping because they’re busy with working or also [ too much ] studying and doing other important things. So online shopping becomes the most convenient and best way for the office worker, students or maybe housewife. Many people choose shopping online also because they can’t stand that crowded and noisy environment. For shopping online, they just need to choose the things they want and pay online. For most people right now I think shopping is not a hard  job anymore, they can just stay at home and click the mouse then spend several minutes to get what they want without stepping out of the room or standing in line for checking. But for me I have another things about doing shopping online is not always a perfect thing it also has disadvantages. It seems easy and quick but there’s always a trap online. If you are careless it will bring you some troubles. For example if you order a cloth online at the moment you get the item you may find that the color is different from what you saw online or the size is either too small or too big because it is not available to try on before ordering. 

            So online shopping is offering convenience as well as disadvantages. On one hand we enjoy shopping without going out. On the other hand, we need to be very careful when choosing and trading online.

             It is same like Jesus always going to The synagogue because He do something again and again , For me I like to do shopping online  again and again.

 

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How to be like Jesus by topic What do you again and again

         I usually doing shopping online a lot  maybe 1-2 time a week and online shopping right now is the development of modern technology and The Internet offers people more and more convenience. With the Internet people can do a lot of things without going out. In the part people used the phone just only for call or text but right now the phone can do  a lot of things like paying bills, play games, FaceTime, watching movies, study online and In 2018 the most attractive one for people not just only for women or men but it can be for everyone is doing shopping online. 

          Online shopping right now attracts people because it has many advantages. More and more people and for me I think especially for the office worker because they don’t have a lot of free time to go shopping because they’re busy with working or also studying and doing other important things. So online shopping becomes the most convenient and best way for the office worker, students or maybe housewife. Many people choose shopping online also because they can’t stand that crowded and noisy environment. For shopping online, they just need to choose the things they want and pay online. For most people right now I think shopping is not a hard  job anymore, they can just stay at home and click the mouse then spend several minutes to get what they want without stepping out of the room or standing in line for checking. But for me I have another things about doing shopping online is not always a perfect thing it also has disadvantages. It seems easy and quick but there’s always a trap online. If you are careless it will bring you some troubles. For example if you order a cloth online at the moment you get the item you may find that the color is different from what you saw online or the size is either too small or too big because it is not available to try on before ordering. 

            So online shopping is offering convenience as well as disadvantages. On one hand we enjoy shopping without going out. On the other hand, we need to be very careful when choosing and trading online.

            It is same like Jesus always going to The synagogue because He do something again and again , For me I like to do shopping online  again and again.

 

 

 

 

 

 

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 How to be like Jesus by topic What do you again and again

         I usually doing shopping online a lot  maybe 1-2 time a week and online shopping right now is the development of modern technology and The Internet offers people more and more convenience. With the Internet people can do a lot of things without going out. In the part people used the phone just only for call or text but right now the phone can do  a lot of things like paying bills, play games, FaceTime, watching movies, study online and In 2018 the most attractive one for people not just only for women or men but it can be for everyone is doing shopping online. 

          Online shopping right now attracts people because it has many advantages. More and more people and for me I think especially for the office worker because they don’t have a lot of free time to go shopping because they’re busy with working or also studying and doing other important things. So online shopping becomes the most convenient and best way for the office worker, students or maybe housewife. Many people choose shopping online also because they can’t stand that crowded and noisy environment. For shopping online, they just need to choose the things they want and pay online. For most people right now I think shopping is not a hard  job anymore, they can just stay at home and click the mouse then spend several minutes to get what they want without stepping out of the room or standing in line for checking. But for me I have another things about doing shopping online is not always a perfect thing it also has disadvantages. It seems easy and quick but there’s always a trap online. If you are careless it will bring you some troubles. For example if you order a cloth online at the moment you get the item you may find that the color is different from what you saw online or the size is either too small or too big because it is not available to try on before ordering or the material of the cloth is not what you want. There are also many swindlers waiting for you to bargain with. You would pay for the article but couldn’t get anything ultimately.

            So online shopping is offering convenience as well as disadvantages. On one hand we enjoy shopping without going out. On the other hand, we need to be very careful when choosing and trading online.

            It is same like Jesus always going to The synagogue because He do something again and again , For me I like to do shopping online  again and again.