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Songtai Sangtaweep Eng 101
3rd writing assignment
Theme; how to be like Jesus
Essay type; Argumentative
Topic; Who check on you. (Good or bad)
Many people believe that they, themselves, can measure how good or bad they are. On the other hand, some people believe that we need someone who can check on them and tell them the truth. To be honest, I think we should listen to ourselves and the others to see if I am good or bad. However, who can tell you which judgement is right. What if you are already good, but the other said you are bad. What if you are bad, but you are lying to yourself that you are good. This might be depending on what you believe, since people can believe and think in a different ways.

Those who are very confident tend to believe in themselves, and less likely listen to others. Some people claim that you should be able to rely on yourself. In other word, you will know yourself better than anyone else. More importantly, people cannot lie to themselves. They know exactly who they are, and what are they doing. As a result, there are some people who believe that you, yourself, are the best person to check on yourself to see if you are good or bad.

On the other hand, there some people who believe that they need someone the check on them. Some people claim that people are sometime ignoring their own mistake. In other word, they are blinded to see their own mistake. Conversely, when we check on someone, we will clearly spot their mistake. For example, there is a reason why we have to write four drafts of essays. After the first draft, we check on ourselves. Then we let our friend check the mistake again on third draft. Finally we write final draft base on self-review and feedback from friend.

As can be seen, there is still no right and wrong answer of which judgement is best for you. To conclude, you will need to listen to yourselves and others, and then find the answer yourself.

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Songtai Sangtaweep Eng 101
3rd writing assignment
Theme; how to be like Jesus
Essay type; Argumentative
Topic; Who check on you. (Good or bad)
Many people believe that they, themselves, can measure how good or bad they are. On the other hand, some people believe that we need someone who can check on them and tell them the truth. To be honest, I think we should listen to ourselves and the others to see if I am good or bad. However, who can tell you which judgement is right. What if you are already good, but the other said you are bad. What if you are bad, but you are lying to yourself that you are good. This might be depending on what you believe, since people can believe and think in a different ways.

Those who are very confident tend to believe in themselves, and less likely listen to others. Some people claim that you should be able to rely on yourself. In other word, you will know yourself better than anyone else. More importantly, people cannot lie to themselves. They know exactly who they are, and what are they doing. As a result, there are some people who believe that you, yourself, are the best person to check on yourself to see if you are good or bad.

On the other hand, there some people who believe that they need someone the check on them. Some people claim that people are sometime ignoring their own mistake. In other word, they are blinded to see their own mistake. Conversely, when we check on someone, we will clearly spot their mistake. For example, there is a reason why we have to write four drafts of essays. After the first draft, we check on ourselves. Then we let our friend check the mistake again on third draft. Finally we write final draft base on self-review and feedback from friend.

As can be seen, there is still no right and wrong answer of which judgement is best for you. To conclude, you will need to listen to yourselves and others, and then find the answer yourself.

Second Draft
Songtai Sangtaweep Eng 101
3rd writing assignment
Theme; how to be like Jesus
Essay type; Argumentative
Topic; Who check on you. (Good or bad)

Many people believe that they, themselves, can measure how good or bad they are. On the other hand, some people believe that we need someone who can check on them and tell them the truth. To be honest, I think we should listen to ourselves and the others to see if I am good or bad. However, who can tell you which judgement is right. What if you are already good, but the other said you are bad. What if you are bad, but you are lying to yourself that you are good. This might be depending on what you believe, since people can believe and think in a different ways.

Those who are very confident tend to believe in themselves, and less likely listen to others. Some people claim that you should be able to rely on yourself. In other word, you will know yourself better than anyone else. More importantly, people cannot lie to themselves. They know exactly who they are, and what are they doing. As a result, there are some people who believe that you, yourself, are the best person to check on yourself to see if you are good or bad.

On the other hand, there some people who believe that they need someone the check on them. Some people claim that people are sometime ignoring their own mistake. In other word, they are blinded to see their own mistake. Conversely, when we check on someone, we will clearly spot their mistake. For example, there is a reason why we have to write four drafts of essays. After the first draft, we check on ourselves. Then we let our friend check the mistake again on third draft. Finally we write final draft base on self-review and feedback from friend.

As can be seen, there is still no right and wrong answer of which judgement is best for you. To conclude, you will need to listen to yourselves and others, and then find the answer yourself.

First Draft
Songtai Sangtaweep Eng 101
3rd writing assignment
Theme; how to be like Jesus
Essay type; Argumentative
Topic; Who check on you. (Good or bad)

Many people believe that they, themselves, can measure how good or bad they are. On the other hand, some people believe that we need some one who can check on them and tell them the truth. To be honest, i think we should listen to ourselves and the others to see if i am good or bad. However, who can tell you which judgement is right. What if you are already good, but the other said you are bad. What if you are bad, but you are lying to yourself that you are good. This might be depending on what you believe, since people can believe and think in a different ways.

Those who are very confident tend to believe in themselves, and less likely listen to others. Some people claim that you should be able to rely on yourself. In other word, you will know yourself better than anyone else. More importantly, people cannot lie to themselves. They know exactly who they are, and what are they doing. As a result, there are some people who believe that you, yourself, is the best person to check on yourself to see if you are good or bad.

On the other hand, there some people who believe that they need someone the check on them. Some people claim that people are sometime ignore their own mistake. In other word, they are blinded to see their own mistake. Conversely, when we check on someone, we will clearly spot their mistake. For example, there is a reason why we have to write four draft of essays. After the first draft, we check on ourselves. Then we let our friend check the mistake again on third draft. Finally we write final draft base on self review and feedback from friend.

As can be seen, there is still no right and wrong answer of which judgement is best for you. To conclude, You will need to listen to yourselves and others, then find the answer yourself.