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Is kind person good?

We have learned to live well from childhood. But there are a lot of people who lose their lives when they live well. A good life makes bad habits of others, and the person eventually disturbs the world. The good person continues to be used, and the recipient continues to use the person. So I think it is not good to live well. I think it is more important to live right than to live well. In order to do that, we must not do anything to lose. At the same time, you should not give harm to others. So nowadays there is what I have to say these days. I am afraid that I will not be admitted and loved by people who are ‘good people complex’. I am an adult and can not express my thoughts and feelings frankly. I am too hard to try to frustrate my desires in order to get into the hearts of others. It’s called human syndrome.

They always make concessions, always brighten up, hide negative feelings, apologize for not doing well, or making mistakes. I am sensitive to the evaluation of others and feel negative negative emotions, and are constantly stressed. In this way, kind person will help people around, but sometimes it can put a lot of burdens on them. The side effects that can be caused by a good person who has a lot of heart and help others easily is that the person to be helped has to do. It is analyzed that it is affected by personal temperament, parenting environment, and growth process.” Especially, a child who is raised under strict parent tries to regard anger, irritation, rejection as “bad thing”

Now they need to say ‘no’. There is a need to answer yes to all of the other ‘s needs. You should keep in mind that saying no does not hate them. I have to live as a master myself. I think that I should listen to the sound of my heart without worrying too much about other people ‘s eyes. When I live so completely, I feel that self – esteem is formed . if you are unreasonable, you can go back to “I have to  good”. You should ask someone who can depend on you or ask yourself for your specific problem. so we need to effort overcome this personality of us
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I have to good -> I have to be good

Inconsistent with topic

 

 

second draft

Is kind person good?

We have learned to live well from childhood. But there are a lot of people who lose their lives when they live well. A good life makes bad habits of others, and the person eventually disturbs the world. The good person continues to be used, and the recipient continues to use the person. So I think it is not good to live well. I think it is more important to live right than to live well. In order to do that, we must not do anything to lose. At the same time, you should not give harm to others. So nowadays there is what I have to say these days. I am afraid that I will not be admitted and loved by people who are ‘good people complex’. I am an adult and can not express my thoughts and feelings frankly. I am too hard to try to frustrate my desires in order to get into the hearts of others. It’s called human syndrome.

They always make concessions, always brighten up, hide negative feelings, apologize for not doing well, or making mistakes. I am sensitive to the evaluation of others and feel negative negative emotions, and are constantly stressed. In this way, kind person will help people around, but sometimes it can put a lot of burdens on them. The side effects that can be caused by a good person who has a lot of heart and help others easily is that the person to be helped has to do. It is analyzed that it is affected by personal temperament, parenting environment, and growth process.” Especially, a child who is raised under strict parent tries to regard anger, irritation, rejection as “bad thing”

Now they need to say ‘no’. There is a need to answer yes to all of the other ‘s needs. You should keep in mind that saying no does not hate them. I have to live as a master myself. I think that I should listen to the sound of my heart without worrying too much about other people ‘s eyes. When I live so completely, I feel that self – esteem is formed . if you are unreasonable, you can go back to “I have to be good”. You should ask someone who can depend on you or ask yourself for your specific problem. so we need to effort overcome this personality of us

 

final

Is kind person good?

We have learned to live well from childhood. But there are a lot of people who lose their lives when they live well. A good life makes bad habits of others, and the person eventually disturbs the world. The good person continues to be used, and the recipient continues to use the person. So I think it is not good to live well. I think it is more important to live right than to live well. In order to do that, we must not do anything to lose. At the same time, you should not give harm to others. So nowadays there is what I have to say these days. I am afraid that I will not be admitted and loved by people who are ‘good people complex’. I am an adult and can not express my thoughts and feelings frankly. I am too hard to try to frustrate my desires in order to get into the hearts of others. It’s called human syndrome.

They always make concessions, always brighten up, hide negative feelings, apologize for not doing well, or making mistakes. I am sensitive to the evaluation of others and feel negative negative emotions, and are constantly stressed. In this way, kind person will help people around, but sometimes it can put a lot of burdens on them. The side effects that can be caused by a good person who has a lot of heart and help others easily is that the person to be helped has to do. It is analyzed that it is affected by personal temperament, parenting environment, and growth process.” Especially, a child who is raised under strict parent tries to regard anger, irritation, rejection as “bad thing”

Now they need to say ‘no’. There is a need to answer yes to all of the other ‘s needs. You should keep in mind that saying no does not hate them. I have to live as a master myself. I think that I should listen to the sound of my heart without worrying too much about other people ‘s eyes. When I live so completely, I feel that self – esteem is formed . if you are unreasonable, you can go back to “I have to be good”. You should ask someone who can depend on you or ask yourself for your specific problem. so we need to effort overcome this personality of us