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Theme: How to be come Jesus?

Topic idea: where do you relax?

Essay: Descriptive essay

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Firstly, I believe that everybody used to get stress and need to relax sometime to refresh their life. There are many ways to relax and these up to each person to choose which way they like. Relaxation is important to increase quality of life and providing profit to human.

Following above, I grant me the inspiration by visiting Yellowstone National Park.Yellowstone National Park is the first national park in the world. Wyoming, Montana, and Idaho. There are almost all the parks in the park, including geysers, craters, wildlife, hot springs, lakes, canyons, mountains, and much more. You will find it from a single park.This is my relaxation trail and I got great experiences when travelling. During visitation, I stopped to see many colourful basins named Biscuit Basin, Black Sand Basin, Old Faithful Basin and so on. The one basin I would like to visit but as I didn’t have enough time is Glory Morning Basin. Basins distributed almost all areas in Yellowstone, these seem God gives extraordinary arts to the world and I really hard to explain how beautiful they are. Also basins come with geysers and the geysers blow out like dancing. Sometimes geyser blow out high but sometimes less thus I compare these as they are dancing.

The new experiences I got is seeing wildlife, I saw Bison walked along the park, crossed a road and this was the first time of my life to see wildlife closely, how excited I was! .and I sew the many elk around the moutain. Another great point is the Grand Prismatic Spring. We go twice because the weather is not good. It’s cold and it’s cold enough to hit the hot spring, it’s just smoke. This is it. To return to another three, it is very far. Yellowstone National Park is a good place to go to relax. I recommend! Sometime you have to do something very hard. You have to find the good place to relax like Jesus said.

BY PAKPIMKARN BOONCHARN


Theme: How to be come Jesus?

Topic idea: where do you relax?

Essay: Descriptive essay

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Firstly, I believe that everybody used to get stress and need to relax sometime to refresh their life. There are many ways to relax and these up to each person to choose which way they like. Relaxation is important to increase quality of life and providing profit to human.

Following above, I grant me the inspiration by visiting Yellowstone National Park.Yellowstone National Park is the first national park in the world. Wyoming, Montana, and Idaho. There are almost all the parks in the park, including geysers, craters, wildlife, hot springs, lakes, canyons, mountains, and much more. You will find it from a single park.This is my relaxation trail and I got great experiences when travelling. During visitation, I stopped to see many colourful basins named Biscuit Basin, Black Sand Basin, Old Faithful Basin and so on. The one basin I would like to visit but as I didn’t have enough time is Glory Morning Basin. Basins distributed almost all areas in Yellowstone, these seem God gives extraordinary arts to the world and I really hard to explain how beautiful they are. Also basins come with geysers and the geysers blow out like dancing. Sometimes geyser blow out high but sometimes less thus I compare these as they are dancing.

The new experiences I got is seeing wildlife, I saw Bison walked along the park, crossed a road and this was the first time of my life to see wildlife closely, how excited I was! .and I sew the many elk around the moutain. Another great point is the Grand Prismatic Spring. We go twice because the weather is not good. It’s cold and it’s cold enough to hit the hot spring, it’s just smoke. This is it. To return to another three, it is very far. Yellowstone National Park is a good place to go to relax. I recommend! Sometime you have to do something very hard. You have to find the good place to relax like Jesus said.

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Theme: How to be come Jesus?

Topic idea: where do you relax?

Essay: Descriptive essay

Second draft

Firstly, I believe that everybody used to get stress and need to relax sometime to refresh their life. There are many ways to relax and these up to each person to choose which way they like. Relaxation is important to increase quality of life and providing profit to human.

Following above, I grant me the inspiration by visiting Yellowstone National Park.Yellowstone National Park is the first national park in the world. Wyoming, Montana, and Idaho. There are almost all the parks in the park, including geysers, craters, wildlife, hot springs, lakes, canyons, mountains, and much more. You will find it from a single park.This is my relaxation trail and I got great experiences when travelling. During visitation, I stopped to see many colourful basins named Biscuit Basin, Black Sand Basin, Old Faithful Basin and so on. The one basin I would like to visit but as I didn’t have enough time is Glory Morning Basin. Basins distributed almost all areas in Yellowstone, these seem God gives extraordinary arts to the world and I really hard to explain how beautiful they are. Also basins come with geysers and the geysers blow out like dancing. Sometimes geyser blow out high but sometimes less thus I compare these as they are dancing.

The new experiences I got is seeing wildlife, I saw Bison walked along the park, crossed a road and this was the first time of my life to see wildlife closely, how excited I was! .and I sew the many elk around the moutain. Another great point is the Grand Prismatic Spring. We go twice because the weather is not good. It’s cold and it’s cold enough to hit the hot spring, it’s just smoke. This is it. To return to another three, it is very far. Yellowstone National Park is a good place to go to relax. I recommend! Sometime you have to do something very hard. You have to find the good place to relax like Jesus said.

BY PAKPIMKARN BOONCHARN

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Theme: How to be come Jesus?

Topic idea: where do you relax?

Essay: Descriptive essay

First draft

Firstly, I believe that everybody used to get stress and need to relax sometime to refresh their life. There are many ways to relax and these up to each person to choose which way they like. Relaxation is important to increase quality of life and providing profit to human.

Following above, I grant me the inspiration by visiting Yellowstone National Park.Yellowstone National Park is the first national park in the world. Wyoming, Montana, and Idaho. There are almost all the parks in the park, including geysers, craters, wildlife, hot springs, lakes, canyons, mountains, and much more. You will find it from a single park.This is my relaxation trail and I got great experiences when travelling. During visitation, I stopped to see many colourful basins named Biscuit Basin, Black Sand Basin, Old Faithful Basin and so on.Old Faithful (OFF): Hot springs are also erupting. There will be a notice that next time will be hours. And people will sit and watch. There are many other small springs that creep together. There are a lot of different colors around the fountain that are made of bacteria !!! Many people may think that Yellowstone is really there, just a part of it. Yellowstone has many.Noris: A fountain and a muddy spot. The boardwalk is the same as the OFF. The highlight is the steamboat. This pond was the last big in 2010, soaring soaring over OFF almost twice. During the walk he will have a rope. Looking to see the hat to fly down a lot. I need a good helmet. It’s very dangerous if you walk out of the track.  The one basin I would like to visit but as I didn’t have enough time is Glory Morning Basin. Basins distributed almost all areas in Yellowstone, these seem God gives extraordinary arts to the world and I really hard to explain how beautiful they are. Also basins come with geysers and the geysers blow out like dancing. Sometimes geyser blow out high but sometimes less thus I compare these as they are dancing.

The new experiences I got is seeing wildlife, I saw Bison walked along the park, crossed a road and this was the first time of my life to see wildlife closely, how excited I was! .and I sew the many elk around the moutain. Another great point is the Grand Prismatic Spring. We go twice because the weather is not good. It’s cold and it’s cold enough to hit the hot spring, it’s just smoke. This is it. To return to another three, it is very far. Yellowstone National Park is a good place to go to relax. I recommend! Sometime you have to do something very hard. You have to find the good place to relax like Jesus said .

BY PAKPIMKARN BOONCHARN

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