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Topic : Beach Or Mountain

Compare and Contrast essay

Have you ever had the feeling that you just want to get away from where you are or a situation you are in. When people start to feel this way they often decide to go on a vacation. Then they face a decision, “Where do I want to go?” There are many factors that may contribute to this decision, such as the amount of time that can be taken away from work or other obligations.

How to Decide Where to go? By comparing the qualities and differences between a trip to the beach and one to the mountains based upon your personal preferences.

A beach vacation in particular has its own healing powers and a special way of renewing our perspectives. Here are some reasons why you should plan your next vacation to the beach.

The Reason why you need a beach vacation is fresh air , most of people work in an office setting with fluorescent lighting. At least half of people never make it away from our desk at lunch. You need to get salty-sweet smell, cool breeze and sunlight that a beach vacation can fulfill. Island people, If you’re lucky enough to have visited a beach town, you know what I’m talking about. Everyone is in shorts, tank tops, and straw hats enjoying their own beach vacation. A smile and a beer are pretty much a requirement, and there’s always live music and delicious food. Our responsibilities, even the ones we love, can easily complicate our lives. Relax! Life is simple.

If we decide to go to the beach, it has many activity that you can do, the beach bums are sporty in nature .You can walk around the beach and see many people surrounding you and see what are they doing.You can go with big family or you can go with your couple if you want to go alone ,it’s ok too. Talking about the mountain people, they are both peace-lovers and peacemakers as well. They would rather sit on a mountain top and relish the breathtaking views alone or with their close friends rather than hitting a club any day. Living in a bubble is their ideal way of living which also is beautiful in a way.

My point of view, I  like the beach more than mountain because I like the activities on the beach such as fly-board, jet ski, swimming and walk on the beach.We can sitting on the beach and see the sunrise.If I go to the mountain, it has only hiking and see the sunrise that I can do.

After we work hard, we have to take a rest like Jesus create the world and the last day he take a rest.

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Topic : Beach Or Mountain

Compare and Contrast essay

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Have you ever had the feeling that you just want to get away from where you are or a situation you are in. When people start to feel this way they often decide to go on a vacation. Then they face a decision, “Where do I want to go?” There are many factors that may contribute to this decision, such as the amount of time that can be taken away from work or other obligations.

How to Decide Where to go? By comparing the qualities and differences between a trip to the beach and one to the mountains based upon your personal preferences.

A beach vacation in particular has its own healing powers and a special way of renewing our perspectives. Here are some reasons why you should plan your next vacation to the beach.

The Reason why you need a beach vacation is fresh air , most of people work in an office setting with fluorescent lighting. At least half of people never make it away from our desk at lunch. Do the scary math in your head. That’s a whole-lotta time without fresh air. If this is your story, you need that salty-sweet smell, cool breeze and sunlight that a beach vacation can fulfill. Island people, If you’re lucky enough to have visited a beach town, you know what I’m talking about. Everyone is in shorts, tank tops, and straw hats enjoying their own beach vacation. A smile and a beer are pretty much a requirement, and there’s always live music and delicious food. Our responsibilities, even the ones we love, can easily complicate our lives. Relax! Life is simple. Let the islanders remind you.

If we decide to go to the beach, it is take on any kind of challenge, the beach bums are sporty in nature . Talking about the mountain people, they are both peace-lovers and peacemakers as well. They would rather sit on a mountain top and relish the breathtaking views alone or with their close friends rather than hitting a club any day. Living in a bubble is their ideal way of living which also is beautiful in a way.

My point of view, I  like the beach more than mountain because I like the activities on the beach such as fly-board, jet ski, swimming and walk on the beach (conversation with my friend). If I go to the mountain, it has only hiking that I can do.

After we work hard, we have to take a rest like Jesus create the world and the last day he take a rest.

Review by Natthawan Piyapanee

 

2nd Draft

Topic : Beach Or Mountain

Compare and Contrast essay

Have you ever had the feeling that you just want to get away from where you are or a situation you are in. When people start to feel this way they often decide to go on a vacation. Then they face a decision, “Where do I want to go?” There are many factors that may contribute to this decision, such as the amount of time that can be taken away from work or other obligations.

How to Decide Where to go? By comparing the qualities and differences between a trip to the beach and one to the mountains based upon your personal preferences.

A beach vacation in particular has its own healing powers and a special way of renewing our perspectives. Here are some reasons why you should plan your next vacation to the beach.

The Reason why you need a beach vacation is fresh air , most of people work in an office setting with fluorescent lighting. At least half of people never make it away from our desk at lunch. Do the scary math in your head. That’s a whole-lotta time without fresh air. If this is your story, you need that salty-sweet smell, cool breeze and sunlight that a beach vacation can fulfill. Island people, If you’re lucky enough to have visited a beach town, you know what I’m talking about. Everyone is in shorts, tank tops, and straw hats enjoying their own beach vacation. A smile and a beer are pretty much a requirement, and there’s always live music and delicious food. Our responsibilities, even the ones we love, can easily complicate our lives. Relax! Life is simple. Let the islanders remind you.

If we decide to go to the beach, it is take on any kind of challenge, the beach bums are sporty in nature . Talking about the mountain people, they are both peace-lovers and peacemakers as well. They would rather sit on a mountain top and relish the breathtaking views alone or with their close friends rather than hitting a club any day. Living in a bubble is their ideal way of living which also is beautiful in a way.

My point of view, I  like the beach more than mountain because I like the activities on the beach such as fly-board, jet ski, swimming and walk on the beach (conversation with my friend). If I go to the mountain, it has only hiking that I can do.

After we work hard, we have to take a rest like Jesus create the world and the last day he take a rest.

 

First Draft

Topic : Beach Or Mountain

Compare and Contrast essay

Have you ever had the feeling that you just want to get away from where you are or a situation you are in. When people start to feel this way they often decide to go on a vacation. Then they face a decision, “Where do I want to go?” There are many factors that may contribute to this decision, such as the amount of time that can be taken away from work or other obligations, how much money there is to spend on this trip, is this the best time, and much more.

How to Decide Where to go? By comparing the qualities and differences between a trip to the beach and one to the mountains based upon your personal preferences.

A beach vacation in particular has its own healing powers and a special way of renewing our perspectives. Here are some reasons why you should plan your next vacation to the beach.

The Reason why you need a beach vacation is fresh air , most of people work in an office setting with fluorescent lighting. At least half of people never make it away from our desk at lunch. Do the scary math in your head. That’s a whole-lotta time without fresh air. If this is your story, you need that salty-sweet smell, cool breeze and sunlight that a beach vacation can fulfill. Island people, If you’re lucky enough to have visited a beach town, you know what I’m talking about. Everyone is in shorts, tank tops, and straw hats enjoying their own beach vacation. A smile and a beer are pretty much a requirement, and there’s always live music and delicious food. Our responsibilities, even the ones we love, can easily complicate our lives. Relax! Life is simple. Let the islanders remind you.

Beach people. Ever ready to take on any kind of challenge, the beach bums are sporty in nature and adrenaline junkies by heart. Talking about the mountain people, they are both peace-lovers and peacemakers as well. They’d rather sit on a mountain top and relish the breathtaking views alone or with their close friends rather than hitting a club any day. Living in a bubble is their ideal way of living which also is beautiful in a way.

My point of view, I  like the beach more than mountain because I like the activities on the beach such as fly-board, jet ski, swimming and walk on the beach (conversation with my friend). If I go to the mountain, it has only hiking that I can do.

After we work hard, we have to take a rest like Jesus create the world and the last day he take a rest.