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Topic-What are you teaching to the students in the future?

When I was 6 or 7 years old, I started to go to church. Some of my friends they said to me If you go to church, you can get the present when you are not absent for month. Also after Sunday school worship we have cookie party and play with teacher. It made me so happy to hear that. I made a decision to go to church every Sunday. I really enjoyed prasing God and listening to a sermon.praying to the Lord. And then we played outside all of Sunday school teachers were very kind,friendly and so nice to me like my mother.I never forget one of Sunday school teacher when I became a Sunday school teacher. She prayed for us with her tear when she hugged us after Sunday worship. I didn’t understand that why is she crying during the pray at that time.Sometimes she invited us her house to teach God’s words and about Jesus Christ, Heaven too. I think she was a faithful and passionate in Jesus.She is a Gospeler and great teacher just like 12 apostles disciple.Mettew 28:19 ” There go and make disciples of all nations,baptizing them in the name of the father and of the Son and of Holy spirit”She just has followed Jesus teaching so I am sure that she is a real christian.I often have reminded her when I was teaching about Jesus in the Sunday school.I was trying to be just like my great Sunday school teacher.However I was disappointed some of my students because they didn’t listen to me and made a noise during the worship and meetig time.

I was angery with them and scolded but they still made me annoyed.I thought and prayed for them to be like my great teacher ” Please, give me Jesus’s heart and eyes so make me them love so muc. I want to pray for them”John 15:12 ” My command is this. Love each other as I have loved you”Eventually I loved my student and prayed for their growing faith,becoming Jesus’s disciples and their mission for God as well.I would like to teach my students in the future. At first God loves you so muchHe wants to live with me in the heaven but we are sinner so we have to confess our sin in front of Jesus’s cross because Jesus is our Savior and Messiah.Luke 3:8 ” I have not come to call the righteous,but sinners to repentance”The second we should love and help each other with Jesus heart.Finally we are going to live with Jesus just ilke heaven in this world.

 

Review by Jung kyung ah

*You should correct grammar mistakes

* You have a wounderful and great teacher so I envy you

* Just keep going your Ehglish writing do not be afraid.

Topic-What are you teaching to the students in the future?

When I was 6 or 7 years old, I started to go to church. Some of my friends they said to me If you go to church, you can get the present when you are not absent for month. Also after Sunday school worship we have cookie party and play with teacher. It make me so happy to hear that. I made a decision to go to church every Sunday. I really enjoyed prasing God and listening to a sermon.praying to the Lord. And then we play outside all of Sunday school teachers were very kind,friendly and so nice to me like my mother.I never forget one of Sunday school teacher when I became a Sunday school teacher. She prayed for us with her tear when she hug us after Sunday worship. I didn’t understand that why is she crying during the pray at that time.she invite us her house to teach God’s words and about Jesus Christ, Heaven too. I think she was a faithful and passionate in Jesus.She is a Gospeler and great teacher just like 12 apostles disciple.Mettew 28:19 ” There go and make disciples of all nations,baptizing them in the name of the father and of the Son and of Holy spirit”She just has followed Jesus teaching so I am sure that she is a real christian.I often have reminded her when I was teaching about Jesus in the Sunday school.I was trying to be just like my great Sunday school teacher.However I was disappointed some of my students because they didn’t listen to me and made a noise during the worship and meetig time.

I was angery with them and scolded but they still made me annoyed.I thought and prayed for them to be like my great teacher ” Please, give me Jesus’s heart and eyes so make me them love so muc. I want to pray for them”John 15:12 ” My command is this. Love each other as I have loved you”Eventually I loved my student and prayed for their growing faith,becoming Jesus’s disciples and their mission for God as well.I would like to teach my students in the future. At first God loves you so muchHe wants to live with me in the heaven but we are sinner so we have to confess our sin in front of Jesus’s cross because Jesus is our Savior and Messiah.Luke 3:8 ” I have not come to call the righteous,but sinners to repentance”The second we should love and help each other with Jesus heart.Finally we are going to live with Jesus just ilke heaven in this world.

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Topic-What are you teaching to the students in the future?

When I was 6 or 7 years old, I started to go to church. Some of my friends they said to me If you go to church, you can get the present when you are not absent for month. Also after Sunday school worship we have cookie party and play with teacher. It make me so happy to hear that. I made a decision to go to church every Sunday. I really enjoyed prasing God and listening to a sermon.praying to the Lord. And then we play outside all of Sunday school teachers were very kind,friendly and so nice to me like my mother.I never forget one of Sunday school teacher when I became a Sunday school teacher. She prayed for us with her tear when she hug us after Sunday worship. I didn’t understand that why is she crying during the pray at that time.she invite us her house to teach God’s words and about Jesus Christ, Heaven too. I think she was a faithful and passionate in Jesus.She is a Gospeler and great teacher just like 12 apostles disciple.Mettew 28:19 ” There go and make disciples of all nations,baptizing them in the name of the father and of the Son and of Holy spirit”She just has followed Jesus teaching so I am sure that she is a real christian.I often have reminded her when I was teaching about Jesus in the Sunday school.I was trying to be just like my great Sunday school teacher.However I was disappointed some of my students because they didn’t listen to me and made a noise during the worship and meetig time.

I was angery with them and scolded but they still made me annoyed.I thought and prayed for them to be like my great teacher ” Please, give me Jesus’s heart and eyes so make me them love so much. I want to pray for them”

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Topic-What are you teaching to the students in the future?

When I was 6 or 7 years old, I started to go to church. Some of my friends they said to me If you go to church, you can get the present when you are not absent for month. Also after Sunday school worship we have cookie party and play with teacher. It make me so happy to hear that. I made a decision to go to church every Sunday. I really enjoyed prasing God and listening to a sermon.praying to the Lord. And then we play outside all of Sunday school teachers were very kind,friendly and so nice to me like my mother.I never forget one of Sunday school teacher when I became a Sunday school teacher. She prayed for us with her tear when she hug us after Sunday worship. I didn’t understand that why is she crying during the pray at that time.she invite us her house to teach God’s words and about Jesus Christ, Heaven too. I think she was a faithful and passionate in Jesus.She is a Gospeler and great teacher just like 12 apostles disciple.Mettew 28:19 ” There go and make disciples of all nations,baptizing them in the name of the father and of the Son and of Holy spirit”She just has followed Jesus teaching so I am sure that she is a real christian.I often have reminded her when I was teaching about Jesus in the Sunday school.I was trying to be just like my great Sunday school teacher.