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Topic- What is the biggest surprise in my life?

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I have got a lot of biggest moments in my life. I think that I am really lucky and blessed person.The first of all expecially I am in the USA. Sometimes I couldn’t believe what I am living in USA. It feels like in my dream. It means very biggest event or surprise in my life.
When I was in Korea, I had taught from kindergarten to elemantary student as a teacher over 10 years.
I didn’t get married with someone also I was getting exhausted in my job.
The doctor said to me “you need to take a rest instead of your work.
So I thought and thought every night.
Finally I made a decision to go to America
I thought that I should take turing point in my life. However It was very complicated and difficult to get ready for American student Visa while I was still working. But I was trying very hard and prayed seriously at that time.
God listened to my prayer and made a way so I passed Visa interview and got American student VISA. Many people said “It is miracle and God’s grace. you are able to meet Jesus more deeply in USA”
I arrived in America end of March in this year. I always gave thanks to God everything because there is beautiful nature and house, nice people and fresh air as well as most people are open-minded and liberal also enjoy their life lesurely in daily life.
It was very impressed and really envy for me. I have learned a lot of things even though I am living for 6 months.

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Topic- What is the biggest surprise in my life?

Review by Anna Lee
If we are still in Korea, we couldn’t meet each other I am so happy to meet you
I think it is God’s plan living in USA because God made us for his mission.
Let’s pray for our vision.

I have got a lot of biggest moments in my life. I think that I am really lucky and blessed person.The first of all expecially I am in the USA. Sometimes I couldn’t believe what I am living in USA. It feels like in my dream. It means very biggest event or surprise in my life.
When I was in Korea, I had taught from kindergarten to elemantary student as a teacher over 10 years.
I didn’t get married with someone also I was getting exhausted in my job.
The doctor said to me “you need to take a rest instead of your work.
So I thought and thought every night.
Finally I made a decision to go to America
I thought that I should take turing point in my life. However It was very complicated and difficult to get ready for American student Visa while I was still working. But I was trying very hard and prayed seriously at that time.
God listened to my prayer and made a way so I passed Visa interview and got American student VISA. Many people said “It is miracle and God’s grace. you are able to meet Jesus more deeply in USA”
I arrived in America end of March in this year. I always gave thanks to God everything because there is beautiful nature and house, nice people and fresh air as well as most people are open-minded and liberal also enjoy their life lesurely in daily life.
It was very impressed and really envy for me. I have learned a lot of things even though I am living for 6 months.

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I have got a lot of biggest moments in my life. I think that I am really lucky and blessed person.The first of all expecially I am in the USA. Sometimes I couldn’t believe what I am living in USA. It feels like in my dream. It means very biggest event or surprise in my life.
When I was in Korea, I had taught from kindergarten to elemantary student as a teacher over 10 years.
I didn’t get married with someone also I was getting exhausted in my job.
The doctor said to me “you need to take a rest instead of your work.
So I thought and thought every night.
Finally I made a decision to go to America
I thought that I should take turing point in my life. However It was very complicated and difficult to get ready for American student Visa while I was still working. But I was trying very hard and prayed seriously at that time.
God listened to my prayer and made a way so I passed Visa interview and got American student VISA. Many people said “It is miracle and God’s grace. you are able to meet Jesus more deeply in USA”
I arrived in America end of March in this year. I always gave thanks to God everything because there is beautiful nature and house, nice people and fresh air as well as most people are open-minded and liberal also enjoy their life lesurely in daily life.
It was very impressed and really envy for me. I have learned a lot of things even though I am living for 6 months. I really had great and amazing experiences in USA. I am often surprised and impressed about American people and abroad students.Tstudents.They are living very diffrent life style with liberal thought.

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Topic- What is the biggest surprise in my life?

I have got a lot of biggest moments in my life. I think that I am really lucky and blessed person.The first of all expecially I am in the USA. Sometimes I couldn’t believe what I am living in USA. It feels like in my dream. It means very biggest event or surprise in my life.
When I was in Korea, I had taught from kindergarten to elemantary student as a teacher over 10 years.
I didn’t get married with someone also I was getting exhausted in my job.
The doctor said to me “you need to take a rest instead of your work.
So I thought and thought every night.
Finally I made a decision to go to America
I thought that I should take turing point in my life. However It was very complicated and difficult to get ready for American student Visa while I was still working. But I was trying very hard and prayed seriously at that time.
God listened to my prayer and made a way so I passed Visa interview and got American student VISA. Many people said “It is miracle and God’s grace. you are able to meet Jesus more deeply in USA”
I arrived in America end of March in this year. I always gave thanks to God everything because there is beautiful nature and house, nice people and fresh air as well as most people are open-minded and liberal also enjoy their life lesurely in daily life.
It was very impressed and really envy for me. I have learned a lot of things even though I am living for 6 months.

The second biggest surprise is Study in Oikos university in California,USA.
I have learned English in Kaplan institute Berkeley and then I tansfered out to Oikos university for study theology. of couse I should keep my student VISA as well. However I really want to know God’s word and his will for my future life
When It was school first day, I was very surprised because there were so many Tai  people and another countries students.
We took the lectures in English. For the first time I was so hard to understand but I am trying to focus on the class in these days I am getting better and motivated to study English. I have got a lot of nice and kind friends also met wonderful and faithful teachers in the school.
The thing what my favorite is Chapel in 4th class. We are praiseing Lord in English lyrics and listen to English sermon. At the end we are praying together. I often feel like Holy Spirit with us I prayed for international students go
to the church and be saved their spirit by blood of Jesus so they can be the heaven.

I think what I am living in USA is God’s biggest surprised present for me in my life. I am always trying to appreciate and give thanks to God for everything in USA.
Thank you so much