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How to make a happy family?

Chang Woo Han

 

Final Draft

How can we make a happy family? A person is a group animal. The smallest group that makes up this group is the family. It is the smallest, but it is the closest existence with the longest together last. How can we make this assumption happy? And what does Jesus think of a happy family?

First of all I love each other The first thing I need to make a home is love I love my husband and my wife The stronger this love is, the happier the family becomes. For example, as our parents love each other and start their families, so will we, and our children of the future will love them as well. “So God created man in His own image; He created him in the image of God; He created them male and female. And God blessed them, and God said unto them, Be fruitful, and multiply, and replenish the earth, and subdue it: and have dominion over the fish of the sea, and over the fowl of the air, and over every living thing that moveth upon the earth.”(Genesis 1:27-28)

We respect each other’s opinions. I spend a lot of time in my life with my family. The closer you are, the more you respect and listen to the story. This process creates a robust home. Talking with family is the best way to understand each other’s minds. “Children, obey your parents in the Lord: for this is right. Honour thy father and mother; (which is the first commandment with promise;)”(Ephesians 6:1-2)

Finally, help each other. A close friend A close friend We get help from friendly people But the one who needs the most help and help is the family. Let’s give up on greed and care for each other. It is a way of assisting each other in a happy home that does not want to pay for helping each other, but wants to give more even if it helps a lot. “And thou shalt tell them to thy children, and thou shalt meditate upon them sitting in thy house, and walking on thy journey, sleeping and rising.”( Deuteronomy 6:7)

To make a happy family, we need a lot of preparation, such as love and respect, but we have already heard this story from Jesus as a Bible. As a result, Jesus’ word is an important role in building a happy family.

 

2nd Draft (Friend review)

How can we make a happy family? A person is a group animal. The smallest group that makes up this group is the family. It is the smallest, but it is the closest existence with the longest together last. How can we make this assumption happy?( And what does Jesus think of a happy family?)

First of all I love each other The first thing I need to make a home is love I love my husband and my wife The stronger this love is, the happier the family becomes. For example, as our parents love each other and start their families, so will we, and our children of the future will love them as well. (“So God created man in His own image; He created him in the image of God; He created them male and female. And God blessed them, and God said unto them, Be fruitful, and multiply, and replenish the earth, and subdue it: and have dominion over the fish of the sea, and over the fowl of the air, and over every living thing that moveth upon the earth.”(Genesis 1:27-28))

We respect each other’s opinions. I spend a lot of time in my life with my family. The closer you are, the more you respect and listen to the story. This process creates a robust home. Talking with family is the best way to understand each other’s minds.( “Children, obey your parents in the Lord: for this is right. Honour thy father and mother; (which is the first commandment with promise;)”(Ephesians 6:1-2))

Finally, help each other. A close friend A close friend We get help from friendly people But the one who needs the most help and help is the family. Let’s give up on greed and care for each other. It is a way of assisting each other in a happy home that does not want to pay for helping each other, but wants to give more even if it helps a lot. (“And thou shalt tell them to thy children, and thou shalt meditate upon them sitting in thy house, and walking on thy journey, sleeping and rising.”( Deuteronomy 6:7))

To make a happy family, we need a lot of preparation, such as love and respect, but we have already heard this story from Jesus as a Bible. As a result, Jesus’ word is an important role in building a happy family.

 

1st Draft

How can we make a happy family? A person is a group animal. The smallest group that makes up this group is the family. It is the smallest, but it is the closest existence with the longest together last. How can we make this assumption happy?

First of all I love each other The first thing I need to make a home is love I love my husband and my wife The stronger this love is, the happier the family becomes. For example, as our parents love each other and start their families, so will we, and our children of the future will love them as well.

We respect each other’s opinions. I spend a lot of time in my life with my family. The closer you are, the more you respect and listen to the story. This process creates a robust home. Talking with family is the best way to understand each other’s minds.

Finally, help each other. A close friend A close friend We get help from friendly people But the one who needs the most help and help is the family. Let’s give up on greed and care for each other. It is a way of assisting each other in a happy home that does not want to pay for helping each other, but wants to give more even if it helps a lot.

To make a happy family, we need a lot of preparation, such as love and respect, but we have already heard this story from Jesus as a Bible. As a result, Jesus’ word is an important role in building a happy family.