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The Purpose of the Stars

By Panida Chanmai

What is the purpose of the stars? The video I watched  about the purpose of the stars said that there are some purposes given for the stars to mark time, the way we measure time is based on our relationship with the sun, moon, and stars. 

     Another  the purpose the stars give the light on the earth. When I was a child before my mother went to work at the farm at 1am, she always looks at the sky and she knows what the weather is. If the sky does not have stars and everything is so dark that means there might be rain or wind. She said the stars can predict the weather and the stars do not give much light to the earth, like the sun or even the moon does, but they do give enough. Another purpose for the stars are metaphor. If you look up at the night sky, there are many stars. If you used a telescope, you will see more stars.

The reason why stars are there because the stars can tell us the time and what month it is. Stars help people in many different kinds of ways. One way is to find direction and made when dust and gases combine and stars can help us to travel overnight on land or on sea. Example If we are the fisherman we need to look at the stars they can used to guide the directions and also they check the color of the clouds. If they guess a storm is coming, they will look at the stars. If stars more than ten means that any coming storms should be light, while fewer than ten visible stars means that the storm will be heavy     

     I think I agree that God created such amazing and powerful Universe, and how thankful I am to be part of it. I feel love and peace. It gives me hope that one day someone will love me much as the stars. It also makes me think about God and how he is so much bigger than we could ever imagine, and how he made.

     

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Review from Ratsameedara

  1. I think you should tell me about the reason why you agree about God created the stars.
  2. I think it is if you tell where you get the information.
  3. I like when you give the example from your experience.

Second draft

What is the purpose of the stars? The video I watched  about the purpose of the stars said that there are some purposes given for the stars to mark time, the way we measure time is based on our relationship with the sun, moon, and stars.

 Another  the purpose the stars give the light on the earth. When I was a child before my mother went to work at the farm at 1am, she always looks at the sky and she knows what the weather is. If the sky does not have stars and everything is so dark that means there might be rain or wind. She said the stars can predict the weather and the stars do not give much light to the earth, like the sun or even the moon does, but they do give enough. Another purpose for the stars are metaphor.

   The reason why stars are there because the stars can tell us the time and what month it is. Stars help people in many different kinds of ways. One way is to find direction and made when dust and gases combine and stars can help us to travel overnight on land or on sea. Example If we are the fisherman we need to look at the stars they can used to guide the directions and also they check the color of the clouds. If they guess a storm is coming, they will look at the stars. If stars more than ten means that any coming storms should be light, while fewer than ten visible stars means that the storm will be heavy

I usually look at the star, “we had people up there, damn we are awesome. I like to go camping at the top of mountain. At night I can see the stars I think they are beautiful to look at and provide inspiration for the arts.


Rough draft

What is the purpose of the stars? The video I watched  about the purpose of the stars said that there are some purposes given for the stars to mark time, the way we measure time is based on our relationship with the sun, moon, and stars.

Another  the purpose the stars give the light on the earth. When I was a child before my mother went to work at the farm at 1am, she always looks at the sky and she knows what the weather is. If the sky does not have stars and everything is so dark that means there might be rain or wind. She said the stars can predict the weather and the stars do not give much light to the earth, like the sun or even the moon does, but they do give enough. Another purpose for the stars are metaphor.

The reason why stars are there because the stars can tell us the time and what month it is. Stars help people in many different kinds of ways. One way is to find direction and made when dust and gases combine and stars can help us to travel overnight on land or on sea. Example If we are the fisherman we need to look at the stars they can used to guide the directions and also they check the color of the clouds. If they guess a storm is coming, they will look at the stars. If stars more than ten means that any coming storms should be light, while fewer than ten visible stars means that the storm will be heavy

I usually look at the star, “we had people up there, damn we are awesome. When I’m free on weekend I like to go camping at the top of mountain. At night I can see the stars I think they are beautiful to look at and provide inspiration for the arts and also I always take walks behind my house. My mother see me do it and ask me why, so I just tell her that I’m not feeling well. What I’m really doing is staring up at the sky looking at the stars and moon. I wonder if the future love of my life is looking at the same stars and moon.