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Good teeth in Roman

When you think about the first impression, people might think about the face. But how many people will know that the beauty in Rome doesn’t come with easy way. If you look at the face, the first sign that people might impression on the face is smile but you cannot have a good smile without beautiful teeth. Do you believe in this word “clean mouth, white teeth with pee”? That is the way you may get from Rome.

The people that live in The Roman Empire used the urine extensively such as Animal tanning, wash the cloth, wash corral or washing animal, build the tree use it like a compost and the most important thing that roman use it they used it for scrub the teeth

The urine, it is the important thing for the state they release the law and the tax about trading the urine. When Roman urinate into the pot and then they going to rest at the puddle. Then someone going to bring it and keep it all for sell to groceries or some business that want to use urine to be ingredient and they have to pay for Urine Tax.

Archaeologist discover some picture on the old pottery. The slave holds the pot to keep their lord’s urine, then they going to bring it to sell. The unique product that a little bit weird for us and Roman always use it. It is mouthwash that make from urine. The Roman always believe that urine can clean and scrub mouth and teeth because urine have ammonia, it has good cleaning, especially the teeth. it doesn’t matter it is human’s urine or animal’s urine, it always good.

In my part of view, I believe in this story because it doesn’t mean only the story but it has the prove and it has the prove from scientist also. Although, this story is so wired in now but I think it might not wired in the past because in the past they don’t have so many things to clean and do something for beauty and it is a natural also.

In my friend opinion when she read this essay, she think this essay make her surprise because she never think the powerful empire and the empire that created the important thing in the world will use urine for make their own teeth to turn white in the past. But when you read you will know that the urine has ammonia, it has property for make your teeth turn white and cleaning also. It is a new knowledge for her

Friend’s revise

In my opinion when I read this essay, I think this essay make me surprise because I never think the powerful empire and the empire that created the important thing in the world will use urine for make their own teeth to turn white in the past. But when you read you will know that the urine has ammonia, it has property for make your teeth turn white and cleaning also. It is a new knowledge for me.

 

Second draft

Good teeth in Roman

When you think about the first impression, people might think about the face. But how many people will know that the beauty in Rome doesn’t come with easy way. If you look at the face, the first sign that people might impression on the face is smile but you cannot have a good smile without beautiful teeth. Do you believe in this word “clean mouth, white teeth with pee”? That is the way you may get from Rome.

The people that live in The Roman Empire used the urine extensively such as Animal tanning, wash the cloth, wash corral or washing animal, build the tree use it like a compost and the most important thing that roman use it they used it for scrub the teeth

The urine, it is the important thing for the state they release the law and the tax about trading the urine. When Roman urinate into the pot and then they going to rest at the puddle. Then someone going to bring it and keep it all for sell to groceries or some business that want to use urine to be ingredient and they have to pay for Urine Tax.

Archaeologist discover some picture on the old pottery. The slave holds the pot to keep their lord’s urine, then they going to bring it to sell. The unique product that a little bit weird for us and Roman always use it. It is mouthwash that make from urine. The Roman always believe that urine can clean and scrub mouth and teeth because urine have ammonia, it has good cleaning, especially the teeth. it doesn’t matter it is human’s urine or animal’s urine, it always good.

In my part of view, I believe in this story because it doesn’t mean only the story but it has the prove and it has the prove from scientist also. Although, this story is so wired in now but I think it might not wired in the past because in the past they don’t have so many things to clean and do something for beauty and it is a natural also.

First draft

Good teeth in Roman

When you think about the first impression, people might think about the face. But how many people will know that the beauty in Rome doesn’t come with easy way. If you look at the face, the first sign that people might impression on the face is smile but you cannot have a good smile without beautiful teeth. Do you believe in this word “clean mouth, white teeth with pee”? That is the way you may get from Rome.

The people that live in The Roman Empire used the urine extensively such as Animal tanning, wash the cloth, wash corral or washing animal, build the tree use it like a compost and the most important thing that roman use it they used it for scrub the teeth

The urine, it is the important thing for the state they release the law and the tax about trading the urine. When Roman urinate into the pot and then they going to rest at the puddle. Then someone going to bring it and keep it all for sell to groceries or some business that want to use urine to be ingredient and they have to pay for Urine Tax. So, animal tan factory will put the big pot or the big puddle at the in front of the factory for the people that go around the factory release and urinate in the pot like a donation for avoid to pay the tax.

Archaeologist discover some picture on the old pottery. The slave holds the pot to keep their lord’s urine, then they going to bring it to sell. The unique product that a little bit weird for us and Roman always use it. It is mouthwash that make from urine. The Roman always believe that urine can clean and scrub mouth and teeth because urine have ammonia, it has good cleaning, especially the teeth. Cuttulus, Roman writer verify that it doesn’t matter it is human’s urine or animal’s urine, it always good.

In my part of view, I believe in this story because it doesn’t mean only the story but it has the prove and it has the prove from scientist also. Although, this story is so wired in now but I think it might not wired in the past because in the past they don’t have so many things to clean and do something for beauty and it is a natural also.