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Mark 4

Final Draft

Them : How to be like Jesus

Typed of essay : critical essay

Topic : What’s idea do you wish everyone can know ?

           Some people even say that language is what separates us from animals and make us human. The english is very important for me and to be a common language in the world. When i visited the United state. I have to use and speaking everyday. In that time I wasn’t know in english very well. Sometime people didn’t understand when i talked. It was hard time for me then i was thinking i have to prove my english.

            In 2015, I came in the United state in the first time. I was shy and nervous because of my language. In that time I was working at the Macdonald. All my coworking are international student from many country and my manager is American. I was working in the kitchen. Some of my friends were working in the cashier. One day, My manager took me to work on front of cashier. I was very excited. When customer came on front of me. I wasn’t understand what did their order. I was trying use my body language but It was spending long time. I told to manager to work in the kitchen because it made me relax. As like Jesus (Mark 4:13) Jesus said to them, “Don’t you understand this parable? How then will you understand any parable?” If people didn’t understand you then you should to ask and learning from them. After that i made new friend with international student in resident. I was practice English a lot with them. When i didn’t understand them. We always ask them and used the translate by smartphone. It was a good time and we were learning each other.

         When people don’t understand about you. Don’t be worry about it. You should be relax now and think what you want to explain to them. The english has to many way to say. You can use the easy word to talk. The way to learning that I suggest watching as much TV as you can, in English with English subtitles, and you will pick up conversation or you  can make American friend. It will be better for you. You can talking and learning with native language. I think you should be confident yourself that you can do it.

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Mark 4

 Frist Draft

Them : How to be like Jesus

Typed of essay : critical essay

Topic : What’s idea do you wish everyone can know ?

    The english is very important and to be a common language in the community. When i decided to visits the United state. I have to use and speaking English. In that time I wasn’t know in english very well. I was misunderstand to contact with people. It was make me sad and shy to speaking. It was my hard time. And i was thinking that the english is important to learn because you can talk and contact with many people in the world.

In 2015, I came in the United state in the first time. I was excited and nervous because of my language. I afraid to speaking because people won’t understand to me. In that time I was working at the Macdonald. All my coworking were international student from many country. My manager was American. I was working in the kitchen because i can’t speak English perfectly. Some my friends were working on the cashier. I was shy person and scared to speak with the native people. One day, My manager took me to work on front of cashier. I was very excited. When customer came on front of me. I wasn’t understand what did their order. I was try to told them to show up on the picture of order and use my body language but It was spending long time. My manager saw that and they moved me to work inside instead of desk front. I was fine to work in the kitchen cause it made me more relax. As like Jesus (Mark 4:13) Jesus said to them, “Don’t you understand this parable? How then will you understand any parable?” After that i made new friend with international student in resident. I was practice English a lot with them and hang out. When i didn’t understand them were talking. We always used the translate by smartphone. Sometime we used body language to made a funny. It was a good time and we were learning each other.

When people don’t understand about you. Don’t be worry about it. You should be calm and think what you want to explain to them. The english has to many way to say. You can use the easy word to talk. People are understand cause we are not native speaking. If you have American friend. It will be better for you. You can listening and learning from them. Sometime they will talk other way, for example slang word. You should be confident yourself then you can do it.

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Review by Phirinya

Them : How to be like Jesus

Typed of essay : critical essay

Topic : What’s idea do you wish everyone can know ?

  • it does connect very well
  • It’s a lot same sentence in the essay

    The english is very important and to be a common language in the community. When i decided to visits the United state. I have to use and speaking English. In that time I wasn’t know in english very well. I was misunderstand to contact with people. It was make me sad and shy to speaking. It was my hard time. And i was thinking that the english is important to learn because you can talk and contact with many people in the world.

In 2015, I came in the United state in the first time. I was excited and nervous because of my language. I afraid to speaking because people won’t understand to me. In that time I was working at the Macdonald. All my coworking were international student from many country. My manager was American. I was working in the kitchen because i can’t speak English perfectly. Some my friends were working on the cashier. I was shy person and scared to speak with the native people. One day, My manager took me to work on front of cashier. I was very excited. When customer came on front of me. I wasn’t understand what did their order. I was try to told them to show up on the picture of order and use my body language but It was spending long time. My manager saw that and they moved me to work inside instead of desk front. I was fine to work in the kitchen cause it made me more relax. As like Jesus (Mark 4:13) Jesus said to them, “Don’t you understand this parable? How then will you understand any parable?” After that i made new friend with international student in resident. I was practice English a lot with them and hang out. When i didn’t understand them were talking. We always used the translate by smartphone. Sometime we used body language to made a funny. It was a good time and we were learning each other.

When people don’t understand about you. Don’t be worry about it. You should be calm and think what you want to explain to them. The english has to many way to say. You can use the easy word to talk. People are understand cause we are not native speaking. If you have American friend. It will be better for you. You can listening and learning from them. Sometime they will talk other way, for example slang word. You should be confident yourself then you can do it.

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