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Who is the best Leader in my mind?

Persuasive Essay

The Army defines a leader as, “anyone who by virtue of assumed role or assigned responsibility inspires and influences people to accomplish organizational goals.”

A leader who knows his or her personality type can be better prepare themselves for future assignments, likewise, knowing the personality type of subordinates allows the leader to mold and guide them to be better than develop their careers.

In my mind the best leader is King Bhumibol Adulyadej.He was the ninth monarch of Thailand.

When I was young, I never knew what the king was.Just know that everyone in the country loves him but I do not know why everyone loves him so much.When I grow up I have know him more.

His Majesty has travelled to every nook and cranny in the country to listen to his subjects’ problems and to restore the poor’s livelihood with his simple yet visionary and pragmatic philosophy of self – sufficiency. Some of His Majesty’s royal initiatives that guide the country to the sustainable path include the rice development project, royal rain, new agricultural theory, Chaipattana aerator, use of vetiver grass to prevent soil degradation and erosion, royal projects, iodine deficiency control project, lung disease and Tuberculosis prevention campaign, and development of alternative energy.

His Majesty the King is very concerned and caring for the welfare of the people seriously and also has a religious mission. He presided over the opening ceremonies on various occasions such as charity ceremonies. He supported the creation of religious places. More than 3,000 royal innovations initiated by His Majesty the King in the areas of water and forest management, agriculture, and innovation are highly acclaimed by many international organizations worldwide. On top of that, United Nations also first presented the UNDP’s Human Development Lifetime Achievement Award to His Majesty the King  Thailand’s most loved guiding light. His Majesty the King, the praiseworthy idol for many people around the world, is the first person in the world who receives such an honorable award.

“Sufficiency Economy” is a philosophy conceived and developed by His MajestyKing Bhumibol Adulyadej of Thailand over 60 years of tireless development work to improve the lives of the Thai people and bring them a genuine and lasting happiness.

In my opinion King Bhumibol has guided us in living and doing good deeds like Jesus send us to the world and give us the way to live and love each other.

 

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Who is the best Leader in my mind?

Persuasive Essay

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The Army defines a leader as, “anyone who by virtue of assumed role or assigned responsibility inspires and influences people to accomplish organizational goals.”

A leader who knows his or her personality type can be better prepare themselves for future assignments, likewise, knowing the personality type of subordinates allows the leader to mold and guide them to be better than develop their careers.

In my mind the best leader is King Bhumibol Adulyadej.He was the ninth monarch of Thailand from Chakri dynasty.

When I was young, I never knew what the king was. What must he do? Just know that everyone in the country loves him but I do not know why everyone loves him so much.When I grow up I have know him more.

His Majesty has travelled to every nook and cranny in the country to listen to his subjects’ problems and to restore the poor’s livelihood with his simple yet visionary and pragmatic philosophy of self – sufficiency. Some of His Majesty’s royal initiatives that guide the country to the sustainable path include the rice development project, royal rain, new agricultural theory, Chaipattana aerator, use of vetiver grass to prevent soil degradation and erosion, royal projects, iodine deficiency control project, lung disease and Tuberculosis (TB) prevention campaign, and development of alternative energy.

His Majesty the King is very concerned and caring for the welfare of the people seriously and also has a religious mission. He presided over the opening ceremonies on various occasions such as charity ceremonies. He supported the creation of religious places. More than 3,000 royal innovations initiated by His Majesty the King in the areas of water and forest management, agriculture, and innovation are highly acclaimed by many international organizations worldwide. On top of that, United Nations (UN) also first presented the UNDP’s Human Development Lifetime Achievement Award to His Majesty the King  Thailand’s most loved guiding light. His Majesty the King, the praiseworthy idol for many people around the world, is the first person in the world who receives such an honorable award.

“Sufficiency Economy” is a philosophy conceived and developed by His MajestyKing Bhumibol Adulyadej of Thailand over 60 years of tireless development work to improve the lives of the Thai people and bring them a genuine and lasting happiness.

He taught me to love and to be proud of being a Thai in Thailand with peace and peace with his graciously.60-year reign His mercy is very powerful.

In my opinion King Bhumibol has guided us in living and doing good deeds like Jesus send us to the world and give us the way to live and love each other.

Review by Panudda Nampradit

 

Second draft

Who is the best Leader in my mind?

Persuasive Essay

The Army defines a leader as, “anyone who by virtue of assumed role or assigned responsibility inspires and influences people to accomplish organizational goals.”

A leader who knows his or her personality type can better prepare themselves for future assignments, likewise, knowing the personality type of subordinates allows the leader to mold and guide them to better develop their careers.

In my mind the best leader is King Bhumibol Adulyadej.He was the ninth monarch of Thailand from Chakri dynasty.

When I was young, I never knew what the king was. What must he do? Just know that everyone in the country loves him but I do not know why everyone loves him so much.When I grow up I have know him more.

His Majesty has travelled to every nook and cranny in the country to listen to his subjects’ problems and to restore the poor’s livelihood with his simple yet visionary and pragmatic philosophy of self – sufficiency. Some of His Majesty’s royal initiatives that guide the country to the sustainable path include the rice development project, royal rain, new agricultural theory, Chaipattana aerator, use of vetiver grass to prevent soil degradation and erosion, royal projects, iodine deficiency control project, lung disease and Tuberculosis prevention campaign, and development of alternative energy.

His Majesty the King is very concerned and caring for the welfare of the people seriously and also has a religious mission. He presided over the opening ceremonies on various occasions such as charity ceremonies. He supported the creation of religious places. Because every religion teaches everyone to be good.

More than 3,000 royal innovations initiated by His Majesty the King in the areas of water and forest management, agriculture, and innovation are highly acclaimed by many international organizations worldwide. On top of that, United Nations  also first presented the UNDP’s Human Development Lifetime Achievement Award to His Majesty the King  Thailand’s most loved guiding light. His Majesty the King, the praiseworthy idol for many people around the world, is the first person in the world who receives such an honorable award.

“Sufficiency Economy” is a philosophy conceived and developed by His MajestyKing Bhumibol Adulyadej of Thailand over 60 years of tireless development work to improve the lives of the Thai people and bring them a genuine and lasting happiness.

He taught me to love and to be proud of being a Thai in Thailand with peace and peace with his graciously.

In my opinion King Bhumibol has guided us in living and doing good deeds.Like Jesus send us to the world and give us the way to live and love each other.

First draft

Who is the best Leader in my mind?

Persuasive Essay

The Army defines a leader as, “anyone who by virtue of assumed role or assigned responsibility inspires and influences people to accomplish organizational goals.”

A leader who knows his or her personality type can better prepare themselves for future assignments, likewise, knowing the personality type of subordinates allows the leader to mold and guide them to better develop their careers.

In my mind the best leader is King Bhumibol Adulyadej.He was the ninth monarch of Thailand from Chakri dynasty.

When I was young, I never knew what the king was. What must he do? Just know that everyone in the country loves him but I do not know why everyone loves him so much.When I grow up I have know him more.

His Majesty has travelled to every nook and cranny in the country to listen to his subjects’ problems and to restore the poor’s livelihood with his simple yet visionary and pragmatic philosophy of self – sufficiency. Some of His Majesty’s royal initiatives that guide the country to the sustainable path include the rice development project, royal rain, new agricultural theory, Chaipattana aerator, use of vetiver grass to prevent soil degradation and erosion, royal projects, iodine deficiency control project, lung disease and Tuberculosis (TB) prevention campaign, and development of alternative energy.

His Majesty the King is very concerned and caring for the welfare of the people seriously and also has a religious mission. He presided over the opening ceremonies on various occasions such as charity ceremonies. He supported the creation of religious places. Because every religion teaches everyone to be good.

More than 3,000 royal innovations initiated by His Majesty the King in the areas of water and forest management, agriculture, and innovation are highly acclaimed by many international organizations worldwide. On top of that, United Nations (UN) also first presented the UNDP’s Human Development Lifetime Achievement Award to His Majesty the King  Thailand’s most loved guiding light. His Majesty the King, the praiseworthy idol for many people around the world, is the first person in the world who receives such an honorable award.

“Sufficiency Economy” is a philosophy conceived and developed by His MajestyKing Bhumibol Adulyadej of Thailand over 60 years of tireless development work to improve the lives of the Thai people and bring them a genuine and lasting happiness.

He taught me to love and to be proud of being a Thai in Thailand with peace and peace with his graciously.60-year reign His mercy is very powerful.

In my opinion King Bhumibol has guided us in living and doing good deeds.Like Jesus send us to the world and give us the way to live and love each other.