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Relationship between Goat and Roman

Rome, when we talk about the Rome empire you might think about Philosopher, Gladiator Warrior, Battle and The Power. But the true, Rome has many wired stories that our generation never know it before because The Rome Empire is the first generation that created innovation and something that we are use until in the present. But someone going to know people live in Rome believe that the best energy drink is something that you can find in easy way and it is still be natural

In the past, Roman always use urine extensively but it is not the only one popular thing on that time.From the record of the most important writers and naturalists said they going to bring goat’s feces mix with some ingredient to use it for treat injury like emergency and in the record, they said the best goat’s feces is kept on spring and they will dry it and use it in next time that is the best way to make the best power drink but another way they will sue it in the fresh one also because they said the both of them is very good way to use.

In addition, history show Trigarius or racer that is the most famous sport for Roman. They will use something before they do competition for make their power to get win. They always use energy drink from goat’s feces mix with vinegar before competition because they believe that it will increase the power and decrease weakness also. The Roman on that time always use energy drink and very popular also, it is not except Emperor Nero, he always uses energy drink when he need to do competition in racecourse for increase his power

In my opinion, i believe in that this story because Roman is the Empire that always use the power. So, it is not wired if someone going to try to find or created something to increase their power. But I am not understanding why it have to be goat’s feces. If we use with injury it is not safe for cleanness.

In my friend’s opinion, it is a little bit weird story for her but it might be true because in the goat’s feces might have something to make the body can get more power kind of like make body active and can increase some energy in the body also. Especially, the important person drink it too.

 

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In my opinion, it is a little bit weird story for me but it might be true because in the goat’s feces might have something to make the body can get more power and can increase some energy in the body also

 

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Relationship between Goat and Roman

Rome, when we talk about the Rome empire you might think about Philosopher, Gladiator Warrior, Battle and The Power. But the true, Rome has many wired stories that our generation never know it before because The Rome Empire is the first generation that created innovation and something that we are use until in the present. But someone going to know people live in Rome believe that the best energy drink is something that you can find in easy way and it is still be natural

In the past, Roman always use urine extensively but it is not the only one popular thing on that time. From the record of the most important writers and naturalists said they going to bring goat’s feces mix with some ingredient to use it for treat injury like emergency and in the record, they said the best goat’s feces is kept on spring and they will dry it and use it in next time that is the best way to make the best power drink but another way they will sue it in the fresh one also because they said the both of them is very good way to use.

In addition, history show Trigarius or racer that is the most famous sport for Roman. They will use something before they do competition for make their power to get win. They always use energy drink from goat’s feces mix with vinegar before competition because they believe that it will increase the power and decrease weakness also. The Roman on that time always use energy drink and very popular also, it is not except Emperor Nero, he always uses energy drink when he need to do competition in racecourse for increase his power

In my opinion, i believe in that this story because Roman is the Empire that always use the power. So, it is not wired if someone going to try to find or created something to increase their power. But I am not understanding why it have to be goat’s feces. If we use with injury it is not safe for cleanness.

 

First draft

Relationship between Goat and Roman

Rome, when we talk about the Rome empire you might think about Philosopher, Gladiator Warrior, Battle and The Power. But the true, Rome has many wired stories that our generation never know it before because The Rome Empire is the first generation that created innovation and something that we are use until in the present. But someone going to know people live in Rome believe that the best energy drink is something that you can find in easy way and it is still be natural. It is the goat’s feces. Right, it is the true history they created the power drink from goat and it is very popular on that time.

In the past, Roman always use urine extensively but it is not the only one popular thing on that time. From the record of the most important writers and naturalists said they going to bring goat’s feces mix with some ingredient to use it for treat injury like emergency and in the record, they said the best goat’s feces is kept on spring and they will dry it and use it in next time that is the best way to make the best power drink but another way they will sue it in the fresh one also because they said the both of them is very good way to use.

In addition, history show Trigarius or racer that is the most famous sport for Roman. They will use something before they do competition for make their power to get win. They always use energy drink from goat’s feces mix with vinegar before competition because they believe that it will increase the power and decrease weakness also. The Roman on that time always use energy drink and very popular also, it is not except Emperor Nero, he always uses energy drink when he need to do competition in racecourse for increase his power

In my opinion, i believe in that this story because Roman is the Empire that always use the power. So, it is not wired if someone going to try to find or created something to increase their power and it doesn’t matter that power for empire or the power for individual. But I am not understanding why it have to be goat’s feces. I think, it might  have something in goat’s feces that can increase the energy in the body but I think, If we use with injury I just worry about cleanness.