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What is important to you? By Kanrawee (Nan)

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The important in my life is my family. My family is my blood and only my family members can accept me for who I am. My family can do anything to see my smile and love me unconditional. My family is the one and only place where my life begins and love never ends.

Why family is important in my life because I’m not here without my mom and my dad, even though now my dad pass away but I always think about him for remain myself Bible verse about death of a family member “For everything there is a reason, and a time foe every matter under heaven: a time to be born, and a time to be died: a time to plant, and a time to pluck up what is planted” (Ecclesiastes 3:1-2) I may have a lot of people in my life as friends, relatives or colleague but I won’t find a single person who cares me exactly same as my family.

When I’m in Thailand, my mom always take care and support me in everything I would like to do. When my heart is broken or I need someone to talk, my mom is always one call away and she will never leave. And when I live in San Francisco I have my older sister. She always take care and concern everything I do here. When I got a problem she is the consultant to help me. My family stays with me in situation, I may have a lot of friends. They will definitely be with me in my happy times or any successful achievement. But my parent, sister and brother are the only ones will stay with me in my hard and difficult time. My member family will always stand with me.

“Honor your father and your mother, that your days maybe long in the land that the lord your God is giving you” (Exodus 20:21). The first in my life is my family. Although I have a lot of friends. But the family will stand with me in any situation. They love me no matte what, no matter what mistakes I make. Poor judgments that are made or now many times screw up family is the people that will love me no matter what.

 

 

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Second Draft

The important in my life is my family. My family is my blood and only my family members can accept me for who I am. My family can do anything to see my smile and love me unconditional. My family is the one and only place where my life begins and love never ends.

Why family is important in my life because I’m not here without my mom and my dad, even though now my dad pass away but I always think about him for remain myself Bible verse about death of a family member “For everything there is a reason, and a time foe every matter under heaven: a time to be born, and a time to be died: a time to plant, and a time to pluck up what is planted” (Ecclesiastes 3:1-2) I may have a lot of people in my life as friends, relatives or colleague but I won’t find a single person who cares me exactly same as my family.

When I’m in Thailand, my mom always take care and support me in everything I would like to do. When my heart is broken or I need someone to talk, my mom is always one call away and she will never leave. And when I live in San Francisco I have my older sister. She always take care and concern everything I do here. When I got a problem she is the consultant to help me. My family stays with me in situation, I may have a lot of friends. They will definitely be with me in my happy times or any successful achievement. But my parent, sister and brother are the only ones will stay with me in my hard and difficult time. My member family will always stand with me.

“Honor your father and your mother, that your days maybe long in the land that the lord your God is giving you” (Exodus 20:21). The first in my life is my family. Although I have a lot of friends. But the family will stand with me in any situation.

 

 

First draft

The important in my life is my family. My family is my blood and only my family members can accept me for who I am. My family can do anything to see my smile and love me unconditional. My family is the one and only place where my life begins and love never ends.

Why family is important in my life because I’m not here without my mom and my dad, even though now my dad pass away but I always think about him for remain myself Bible verse about death of a family member “For everything there is a reason, and a time foe every matter under heaven: a time to be born, and a time to be died: a time to plant, and a time to pluck up what is planted” (Ecclesiastes 3:1-2) I may have a lot of people in my life as friends, relatives or colleague but I won’t find a single person who cares me exactly same as my family.

When I’m in Thailand, my mom always take care and support me in everything I would like to do. And when I live in San Francisco I have my older sister. She always take care and concern everything I do here. When I got a problem she is the consultant to help me. My family stays with me in situation, I may have a lot of friends. They will definitely be with me in my happy times or any successful achievement. But my parent, sister and brother are the only ones will stay with me in my hard and difficult time. My member family will always stand with me.

“Honor your father and your mother, that your days maybe long in the land that the lord your God is giving you” (Exodus 20:21). The first in my life is my family. Although I have a lot of friends. But the family will stand with me in any situation.