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Where do you relax? By Kanrawee (Nan)

 

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Relaxing meaning is tending to clam the emotions and relieve stress. When I would like to relax some where, island and beach there are the first choice I through. In Thailand it famous in island and beautiful beach. I had gone the island at Trat in Thailand. The island name “Ko Kut” it’s still in a nature condition, with mountain and ridge forming the headwaters of many steams from which originate various waterfall. My vacation in Ko Kut are relaxing my brain and body. Whatever from your travel will open up new perspective on life. You will see the world in defferent perspective that you never touched. This make your world view wider. Sometimes these exotic perspectives help to create a far reaching vision of the workplace.

In the world that is spinning against time all is money. People are tired of doing their jobs and sometimes they can ignore the rest of the trip. Many reasons you should refer to take your time to get away from stressful work and keep your luggage out of the way relax once. Just some place that you like and let go. There are reasons why you have to take your time to relax.

Relax tension, to change the gestures different from the original life. It helps you forget the stress that is accumulated. Stress make thing lock unclear, but when you go to relax. You will understand where the balance between work and life.

Improve your performance, tourism is the best solution because it make you feel relax. You will return to work with more positive outlook, which improves your work efficiency.

Enchance creativity, going out for a vacation helps you recover and restore your own brain, this is why many creative ideas travel, which may not be possible if you sit in front of a work table.

More happy, of course going out to relax makes you happier, sometimes it may not be good. But that is a new experience that make life colorful.

In general, the value of life depends on the level of satisfaction in yourself, your family and your friends, getting away from chaos of work to go out and relax give your time to rest. As same God, when he’s in a fishing boat at sea and caught in life-threatening storm he naps (Mark 4:37-38)

 

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Second Draft

 

Relaxing meaning is tending to clam the emotions and relieve stress. When I would like to relax some where , island and beach there are the first choice I through. In Thailand it famous in island and beautiful beach. I had gone the island at Trat in Thailand. The island name “Ko Kut” it’s still in a nature condition, with mountain and ridge forming the headwaters of many steams from which originate various waterfall. My vacation in Ko Kut are relaxing my brain and body.

In the world that is spinning against time all is money. People are tired of doing their jobs and sometimes they can ignore the rest of the trip. Many reasons you should refer to take your time to get away from stressful work and keep your luggage out of the way relax once. Just some place that you like and let go. There are reasons why you have to take your time to relax.

Relax tension, to change the gestures different from the original life. It helps you forget the stress that is accumulated. Stress make thing lock unclear, but when you go to relax. You will understand where the balance between work and life.

Improve your performance, tourism is the best solution because it make you feel relax. You will return to work with more positive outlook, which improves your work efficiency.

Enchance creativity, going out for a vacation helps you recover and restore your own brain, this is why many creative ideas travel, which may not be possible if you sit in front of a work table.

More happy, of course going out to relax makes you happier, sometimes it may not be good. But that is a new experience that make life colorful.

In general, the value of life depends on the level of satisfaction in yourself, your family and your friends, getting away from chaos of work to go out and relax give your time to rest. As same God, when he’s in a fishing boat at sea and caught in life-threatening storm he naps (Mark 4:37-38)

 

First Draft

Relaxing meaning is tending to clam the emotions and relieve stress. When I would like to relax some where , island and beach there are the first choice I through. In Thailand it famous in island and beautiful beach. I had gone the island at Trat in Thailand. The island name “Ko Kut” it’s still in a nature condition, with mountain and ridge forming the headwaters of many steams from which originate various waterfall. My vacation in Ko Kut are relaxing my brain and body.

In the world that is spinning against time all is money. People are tired of doing their jobs and sometimes they can ignore the rest of the trip. Many reasons you should refer to take your time to get away from stressful work and keep your luggage out of the way relax once. Just some place that you like and let go. There are reasons why you have to take your time to relax.

Relax tension, to change the gestures different from the original life. It helps you forget the stress that is accumulated.

Improve your performance, tourism is the best solution because it make you feel relax. You will return to work with more positive outlook, which improves your work efficiency.

Enchance creativity, going out for a vacation helps you recover and restore your own brain, this is why many creative ideas travel, which may not be possible if you sit in front of a work table.

More happy, of course going out to relax makes you happier, sometimes it may not be good. But that is a new experience that make life colorful.

In general, the value of life depends on the level of satisfaction in yourself, your family and your friends, getting away from chaos of work to go out and relax give your time to rest. As same God, when he’s in a fishing boat at sea and caught in life-threatening storm he naps (Mark 4:37-38)