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FINAL ENG 101 due DEC 11 2018 ( Descriptive Essay )Picture attached

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PART 4. Ms. Sirirat Yoocharoen   (FINAL DRAFT)

Topic : Thank you for all kindness to hold this world and turn up my light

We come to earth with different identities seems nothing in this world is fair some people born with a good luck but some are not because this world is wondering and infinite questions to get an answer. We are happy we are sorrow we are success we are failed we are clever we are dumb. People is different and could not control which is the only one right you can control is designing your.Remember you are greatest artist one time born and die

Time change people change almost of half life I spend in this world the truth is no one can escape suffering even mountain is big but the sorrow is can not move . When we change the way we look at things the things we look at change too . Many lessons come to my life and teach me to grow. I learned from people around me it was a miracle of my life that make change my attitude to living in this world. One widow woman, she lost her husband moreover her daughter was raped she was exhausted and try to suicide but finally she choose to be a good person she met the priest and after she read bible she found the ordinary of life is “ Why bad things could not happen to our life? ”we are just ordinary people. This word turns the light up to her and me. I found too much suffer while I finished from University I like my first job but people in my work place they are not sincere all they jealous they like to gossip and never want to be a good friend to anyone even themselves after I was conscious “ I gotta let it pass be passed”. Life is precious and the reason for wake up should be use as worthy. Another lesson from young man he has a relationship with dead after he get an accident he lost left arm and both limbs were gone until he found his nurse his life was changed by his nurse came out and smuggled snow to him and said today is Christmas Day he feel good at that moment the healing time was happened to lift up sights on well-being so life can become about making life more wonderful rather than just horrible or cruel. When life going to the edge we just need chance , hope and good friend to beside us and grow together.Believe in faith God will turn the light to you this world still have some beautiful around us .I can’t imagine if this world doesn’t have light. If we all sick no vaccine to protect us. If this world don’t have sun.If this world doesn’t have music. If we live without love and if we all are hunger what is a reason we born till we know God, He keeps this whole operation in place and go on. he gives us an answer what is reason why we born and what we have to waiting for.When we believe our life is worthy we are good enough don’t be sad because God love you and we are a part of God. How many million times I have to say you. He send wise guys to help world such as Thomas Alva Edison who I invented incandescent light bulb, Albert Einstein who found greatest physic of world, Louis Pasteur who discovered the principles of vaccination, Mahatama Gandhi who inspired movement for civil rights and freedom across the world.

God have a plenty of stars and beautiful mountain and flowers and love for us. The kindness is the powerful weapon against hatred.God never needs anythings more than people to appreciate what he give and enjoy it. Love has the power to change the world and change us to be a better person “ Merry Christmas 2018 “

 

1. Technology expand world :Thomas Alva Edison who invented the indicandescent light bulb his effort to help us have light for living we no longer stay in cold and darkness we have more time to learn to talk to decorate and all street are bright and beautiful nowadays every house and city be shining like stars from the ground.

2. Cleary a spirit of gratitude :Gratitude promotes optimism and helps us to develop a more positive outlook. Say thank to yourself and for world to people around you “ Better to have Love”

3. Sacrifice Thank God for the sacrifice of Jesus( Mark 10:21) . He died for our sins, taking the punishment that we deserve. His sacrifice with sympathy and compassion. For faith receiving Jesus as your savior.FINAL ENG 101 due DEC 11 2018 ( Descriptive Essay ) Ms. Sirirat Yoocharoen
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TOPIC:Thank you for all kindness to hold this world and turn up my light
We come to earth with different identity nothing in this world fair some born with a good luck some are not because this world is too big and wondering and infinity of questions to get an answer. We are happy we are sorrow we are success we are failed we are clever we are dumb we have our life which is the only one right we can process and design life could be everything because you are the greatest artist to design your life remember one time born and die.
Time change people change almost of half life I spend in this world the truth is even the sorrow of mountain can not move . When we change the way we look at things the things we look at change . Many lesson come to my life and teach me to growing I have one lesson to tell you what is miracle of my life I read magazine that make me change attitude to living to this world. Matron she lost her husband moreover her daughter was raped she was exhausted and try to suicide but at least she choose to be a good person she met the priest and after she read bible she found the ordinary of life why bad things could not happen to our life we are just ordinary people. This word turn light to me I found too much suffer while I finished in university my first job is the one type of job I like but people in my work place they are not sincere all they jealous they like to gossip and never want to be a good friend to anyone even themselves after I realizes this all type of this bad people I gotta let it pass be passed. And another how much life is precious and the reason for wake up young man in teenage he has a relationship with dead after he get an accident he lost left arm and limb were gone and now his life change his nurse come out and smuggle snow to him and said this is snow time he feel good at that moment the healing time was happen to lift up sights to set up sights on well-being so life can become about making life more wonderful rather than just horrible ,beneficiece. When life going to the edge we just need a someone and chance to make us space adjust grow and believe to faith. Beside all hurtful this world still have some beauty around us can’t imagine is this world doesn’t have light I f we all sick no vaccine to protect us if this world don’t have sun if his world don’t have music if we live with revenge no religious no love no food how we are we come born to help each other one do another things one do they good at a and we are all apart of us to keep it on Thank you for all wise man to help us you Thomas Alva Edison who creat light bulb Albert Einstein who found greatest physic of world grateful to LouisPasteur you developed a cure for infection disease thank you Mahayana Khantee you teach us to be good tolerance not hurt all mankind and thank you our my God thank you my Buddha you hold this world with love you teach us to be a Oœd person
this world was created by god have a plenty of stars and beautiful mountain and flowers and kindness is the powerful weapon against hatred.. God never needs anythings more only people to a appriate and enjoy it.
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Topic:  Thank you for all kindness to hold this world and turn up my light
We come to earth with different identification nothing in this world fair some born with a good luck some are not because this world is too big and wondering and infinity of questions to get an answer. We are happy we are sorrow we are success we are failed we are clever we are dumb we have our life which is the only one right we can process and design life could be everything because you are the greatest artist to design your life remember one time born and die.
Time change people change almost of half life I spend in this world the truth is no one can escape suffering even mountain is big but the sorrow is can not move . When we change the way we look at things the things we look at change too . Many lesson come to my life and teach me to growing I have learned from people around me it was a miracle of my life which make change my attitude to living to this world. The widow woman she lost her husband moreover her daughter was raped she was exhausted and try to suicide but at least she choose to be a good person she met the priest and after she read bible she found the ordinary of life is “ Why bad things could not happen to our life? ”we are just ordinary people. This word turns the light up to me I found too much suffer while I finished in university my first job is the one type of job I like but people in my work place they are not sincere all they jealous they like to gossip and never want to be a good friend to anyone even themselves after I realizes this all type of this bad peopleI realize “ I gotta let it pass be passed”. Life is precious and the reason for wake up of us should be use as benefit another story is one of young man in teenage he has a relationship with dead after he get an accident he lost left arm and both limbs were gone and now his life change by his nurse come out and smuggle snow to him and said today is Christmas Day he feel good at that moment the healing time was happen to lift up sights to set up sights on well-being so life can become about making life more wonderful rather than just horrible or cruel. When life going to the edge we just need chance , hope and good friend to make us space adjust grow and believe to faith. Beside all hurtful this world still have some beauty around us .I can’t imagine is this world doesn’t have light I if we all sick no vaccine to protect us if this world don’t have sun if his world don’t have music if we live with revenge no religious no love no food. What is a reason we born till we know lovers what keeps this whole operation going and in place it gives us something to do, something to hope for, something to believe in, something to invest in that make life worth living this.Thank you for all wise man to help us such as Thomas Alva Edison who invent light bulb, Albert Einstein who found greatest physic of world,LouisPasteur who develop a cure for infection disease,Mahatama Khantee you teach us to be a good tolerance not hurt all mankind and graceful to our God thank who hold this world with love you teach us and change us to be a better person
God have a plenty of stars and beautiful mountain and flowers and love for us. The kindness is the powerful weapon against hatred.God never needs anythings more than people to a appriate what he give and enjoy it. “ Merry X’Mas “

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PART 3. Commented  By Ms. Parisa Sunthratharathon

Your topic is great related the positive things to people around you live life to the fullest and enjoy every moment so a few simple practice can improve people ability to enjoy life.You can STOP thinking when an undesirable thought enters to your head a word STOP will take you to a different thought Life can be quite complicated and we simply have to meet the challenges as we go along.Could I add some an idea to your work such as strategy of happy life is Stop complaining because no one never make mistake instead of complaining to them laugh with them you stop the suffer of yourself and others to continue after that you will feel more empowered and in charge and you will feel more content and peaceful in every aspect of your life.
In the bottom line his sentence you talk about grateful it is enhance time of life is easier when you are thinking about how lucky you are.

Final Exam Possible Score Yoocharoen, Sirirat
Formatting 10 5
Writing Process 20 20
Topic Choice 10 10
Grammar 10 5
Total 40