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What do you do when you are feeling discouraged?

Darkness in my heart

In the past moments of life many people will pass through the lessons of life countless. The lesson of disappointment. A lesson of discouragement, loss of life, lessons of success, frustration, boredom with everything around you, happened to you? It is unmanned to continue living. May be disappointed with something or disappointed with some people. The job does not grow as desired. And with the changing society. Social media has become more important in life.People turn to phones. Less talk Everything that is mentioned above is a major factor in the mental decline causes discouragement. If this symptom occurs to you. What to do? Back to normal as before.

Depression often happens to me. Because I’m the only child of the family. My parents separated. I have never seen a mother before and then,my mother pass away. And the one who raised me since childhood is uncle and aunt. I never been to a real family once. When growing up and getting to know their own story. I sad that the world was so cruel to me. I saw my friends, there parents were watching them, and I look at myself getting more upset. I’m not happy with life. Having worked for myself since childhood. No time to have fun with friends. As a child, I was very angry parents. Why did they leave me? I always asked myself, angry and hated their selfishness.

Life is not problem to be solved, but a reality to be experienced

When I grew up and learned more, thanks to the social environment of my childhood. Have a good life. This is considered to be my lucky, which the world was not bad for me all. I’ve learned something good. A good school that the family gave me on Children’s Day. When I was child, I was a bad person because it was very indulgent. Maybe because I did not have parents that was I thought. I have a bad habit when I was a kid. I was impatient, I have no patience with anything. When I grow up learn more real life. Read more books, understand many things, and gradually change myself. Because I get old and know what is wrong.

One that I always do when I’m discouraged. I would go to the sea. The sea is where I like the best. I feel happy every time when I go to the sea. I do not like swimming because it is salty, but like the atmosphere of the sea. I like listening to the waves of the sea. It made my mind calm down. Looking back everything that I used to do in the past. Considering what we find, how hard it made me sad.Why do I get more discouraged like this. I think of Jesus Christ, who made everything for the people and sacrificed himself to be tormented by a group of people hated by a crucifixion on his head wearing a crown of thorns. He must suffer tremendous torment not know much. But he did not deny it. Accept the punishment that the people denounce him. Can not compared with our painful anymore. He did not ask for life. If they want to put him to death. I learned about the history of Jesus Christ. Because of I interested. Know that my story very small, there are others who are more troubled than us. It is encouraging and will bring his teachings as a way to live.

What ever you are, be a good one

We may come to a point of discouragement for whatever reason. Do not want to go to the destination and we stopped walking and turned back. We forget that we may not finish first. While everyone else ran into the finish line, but finally, if we did not stop running. “We got to the finish line as well”. Finally, if discouraged in life. Try to think, do not believe that we can not do if not done. Do not be discouraged as long as we have not tried. Do not despair, as long as we still have the spirit of life, as long as our hearts still have hope. Do not destroy hope. Because of self-indulgence, “do not”, no matter what the lesson. When we are disappointed in life, we must try to adjust. Trust me with the way to think. Our lives keep on fighting.

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3nd Draft

What do you do when you are feeling discouraged?

In the past moments of life Many people will pass through the lessons of life countless. The lesson of disappointment. A lesson of discouragement, loss of life, lessons of success, frustration, boredom with everything around you, happened to you? It is unmanned to continue living. May be disappointed with something or disappointed with some people. The job does not grow as desired. And with the changing society. Social media has become more important in life.People turn to phones. Less talk Everything that is mentioned above is a major factor in the mental decline causes discouragement. If this symptom occurs to you. What to do? Back to normal as before.

Depression often happens to me. Because I’m the only child of the family. My parents separated. I have never seen a mother before and then,my mother pass away. And the one who raised me since childhood is uncle and aunt. I never been to a real family once. When growing up and getting to know their own story. I sad that the world was so cruel to me. I saw my friends, there parents were watching them, and I look at myself getting more upset. I’m not happy with life. Having worked for myself since childhood. No time to have fun with friends. As a child, I was very angry parents. Why did they leave me? I always asked myself, angry and hated their selfishness.

When I grew up and learned more, thanks to the social environment of my childhood. Have a good life. This is considered to be my lucky, which the world was not bad for me all. I’ve learned something good. A good school that the family gave me on Children’s Day. When I was child, I was a bad person because it was very indulgent. Maybe because I did not have parents that was I thought. I have a bad habit when I was a kid. I was impatient, I have no patience with anything. When I grow up learn more real life. Read more books, understand many things, and gradually change myself. Because I get old and know what is wrong.

One that I always do when I’m discouraged. I would go to the sea. The sea is where I like the best. I feel happy every time when I go to the sea. I do not like swimming because it is salty, but like the atmosphere of the sea. I like listening to the waves of the sea. It made my mind calm down. Looking back everything that I used to do in the past. Considering what we find, how hard it made me sad.Why do I get more discouraged like this. I think of Jesus Christ, who made everything for the people and sacrificed himself to be tormented by a group of people hated by a crucifixion on his head wearing a crown of thorns. He must suffer tremendous torment not know much. But he did not deny it. Accept the punishment that the people denounce him. Can not compared with our painful anymore. He did not ask for life. If they want to put him to death. I learned about the history of Jesus Christ. Because of I interested. Know that my story very small, there are others who are more troubled than us. It is encouraging and will bring His teachings as a way to live.

We may come to a point of discouragement for whatever reason. Do not want to go to the destination and we stopped walking and turned back. We forget that we may not finish first. While everyone else ran into the finish line, but finally, if we did not stop running. “We got to the finish line as well”. Finally, if discouraged in life. Try to think, do not believe that we can not do if not done. Do not be discouraged as long as we have not tried. Do not despair, as long as we still have the spirit of life, as long as our hearts still have hope. Do not destroy hope. Because of self-indulgence, “do not”, no matter what the lesson. When we are disappointed in life, we must try to adjust. Trust me with the way to think. Our lives keep on fighting.

Review : Thippawan

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2rd Draft

What do you do when you are feeling discouraged?

In the past moments of life Many people will pass through the lessons of life countless. The lesson of disappointment. A lesson of discouragement, loss of life, lessons of success, frustration, boredom with everything around you, happened to you? It is unmanned to continue living. May be disappointed with something or disappointed with some people. The job does not grow as desired. And with the changing society. Social media has become more important in life.People turn to phones. Less talk Everything that is mentioned above is a major factor in the mental decline causes discouragement. If this symptom occurs to you. What to do? Back to normal as before.

Depression often happens to me. Because I’m the only child of the family. My parents separated. I have never seen a mother before and then,my mother pass away. And the one who raised me since childhood is uncle and aunt. I never been to a real family once. When growing up and getting to know their own story. I sad that the world was so cruel to me. I saw my friends, there parents were watching them, and I look at myself getting more upset. I’m not happy with life. Having worked for myself since childhood. No time to have fun with friends. As a child, I was very angry parents. Why did they leave me? I always asked myself, angry and hated their selfishness.

When I grew up and learned more, thanks to the social environment of my childhood. Have a good life. This is considered to be my lucky, which the world was not bad for me all. I’ve learned something good. A good school that the family gave me on Children’s Day. When I was child, I was a bad person because it was very indulgent. Maybe because I did not have parents that was I thought. I have a bad habit when I was a kid. I was impatient, I have no patience with anything. When I grow up learn more real life. Read more books, understand many things, and gradually change myself. Because I get old and know what is wrong.

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1st Draft

What do you do when you are feeling discouraged?

In the past moments of life Many people will pass through the lessons of life countless. The lesson of disappointment. A lesson of discouragement, loss of life, lessons of success, frustration, boredom with everything around you, happened to you? It is unmanned to continue living. May be disappointed with something or disappointed with some people. The job does not grow as desired. And with the changing society. Social media has become more important in life.People turn to phones. Less talk Everything that is mentioned above is a major factor in the mental decline causes discouragement. If this symptom occurs to you. What to do? Back to normal as before.

Depression often happens to me. Because I’m the only child of the family. My parents separated. I have never seen a mother before and then,my mother pass away. And the one who raised me since childhood is uncle and aunt. I never been to a real family once. When growing up and getting to know their own story. I sad that the world was so cruel to me. I saw my friends, there parents were watching them, and I look at myself getting more upset. I’m not happy with life. Having worked for myself since childhood. No time to have fun with friends. As a child, I was very angry parents. Why did they leave me? I always asked myself, angry and hated their selfishness.

Final Exam Possible Score Metthanapapha, Janista
Formatting 10 10
Writing Process 20 20
Topic Choice 10 10
Grammar 10 8
Total 48