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My lovely pet as cats

          

            We all know that pets are remarkable for their capacity to love and I believe that most people have a pet at home. Pets for me is not just an animal but there are means a lot to me. My pets is my friend, Pets can enhance my mood, A dosage of Entertainment and help me control my blood pressure.

           The cat is my favorite pet but I have never had a chance to have a party because my mother does not allow pets in the house except for the fish and hamster that I do not like. One day I graduated and got a job. I have my own money so I thought it was the time for me to be able to feed the cat because I can take care of the costs and everything. I already have a cat in my heart. My cat is a Thai cat. I do not like Persian cat It is not cute and I think Thai cat looks more beautiful. Especially Wichien Maat That is the cat I dreamed of being the first. It is a beautiful Thai cat. From the day I decided to find a cat. I started looking for kittens on the internet and also on website about cats too. I took a little bit time to find it and Finally!!! I found some things that I’m looking for I found the cats that l want and I can’t wait to see them I went to the place sale cats. The place is not far from my house. I went to see the cat at his house and I think I fall in love with male cat because I think it is easy to take care of them I don’t have to worry about belly cat. And then after I choose the cat I like  I think I need to prepare a lot of things for my cat such as bowls of food, sand cat and cat food etc. And finally, I got these two cats with me. When it comes to home at the first day. It looks awesome. Today it has been with me for almost 6 years. I love them so much and I believe they loves me so much too. Getting cats is easy but take care of the cat is more harder. Today I wanna share some tips for taking care of our cats.

          

             

 

At First Feed them right because food is the most important factor for the cat then you should choosing the right food for each age and special needs for your cat. Our simple guideline is to read the label next to the bag and see what is suitable for your cat by the way we can just find something that you think it is good for your cat but in the end about the taste your cat is a judge.

               Second Find a veterinarian because kittens need more veterinarian care. They were need regular vaccinations and regular check up. For all pet please Do not wait for health problems before you go to the clinic.

              Third Tag for safety it is said that take care of the cat is more harder than take care of dog because the cat they can go out on a date by returning just only when they are hungry. So if there lifestyle is not home what will help us. to make sure our cat is safe when they are outside? My recommendation is the collar and the badge. You should put on your cat since childhood. In order if your cat get out of the house , people will know where they are from. In addition, it should be clearly labeled the name of the owner and contact the owner for the emergency will be followed.

              My cats are not just an animal but they are my friend my best friend my family. I love my cat so much and I know my self that I will always take care of them because all animals have feeling and also they have a heart like human too. Most of the people have best friend I know it is not easy to find a good person that can be your best friend like Jesus and Peter. I know that Peter is best friend of Jesus ,His always said that Jesus is the best! Sometime your best friend can be a human and for some people best friend come like an animal same as me and my lovely cats.

  

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      My lovely pet as cats

          

            We all know that pets are remarkable for their capacity to love and I believe that most people have a pet at home. Pets for me is not just an animal but there are means a lot [ of things ] to me. My pets is my friend, [ My ] Pets can enhance my mood, A dosage of Entertainment and help me control my blood pressure.

           The cat is my favorite pet but I have never had a chance to have a party [ of cat ] because of [ should be remove ] my mother does not allow pets in the house except for the fish and hamster that I do not like. One day I graduated and got a job. I have my own money so I thought it was the time for me to be able to feed the cat because I can take care of the costs and everything. I already have a cat in my heart. My cat is a Thai cat. I do not like Persian cat It is not cute and I think Thai cat looks more beautiful. Especially Wichien Maat That is the cat I dreamed of being the first. It is a beautiful Thai cat. From the day I decided to find a cat. I started looking for kittens on the internet and also on website about cats too. And [ and should be remove ] I took a little bit time to find it and Finally!!! I found some things that I’m looking for I found the cats that l want and I can’t wait to see them I went to the place sale cats. The place is not far from my house. I went to see the cat at his house and I think I fall in love with male cat because I think it is easy to take care of them I don’t have to worry about belly cat. And then after I choose the cat. that I like I think I need to prepare a lot of things for my cat such as bowls of food, sand cat and cat food etc. And finally, I got these two cats with me. When it comes to home at the first day. It looks awesome. Today it has been with me for almost 6 years. I love them so much and I believe they loves me so much too. Getting cats is easy but take care of the cat is more harder. Today I wanna share some tips for taking care of our cats.

           At First Feed them right because food is the most important factor for the cat then you should choosing the right food for each age and special needs for your cat. Our simple guideline is to read the label next to the bag and see what is suitable for your cat by the way we can just find something that you think it is good for your cat but in the end about the taste your cat is a judge. 

          Second Find a veterinarian because kittens need more veterinarian care. They were need regular vaccinations and regular check up. For all pet please Do not wait for health problems before you go to the clinic.

        Third Tag for safety it is said that take care of the cat is more harder than take care of dog because the cat they can go out on a date by returning just only when they are hungry. So if there lifestyle is not home what will help us. to make sure our cat is safe when they are outside? My recommendation is the collar and the badge. You should put on your cat since childhood. In order if your cat get out of the house , people will know where they are from. In addition, it should be clearly labeled the name of the owner and contact the owner for the emergency will be followed.

        My cats are not just an animal but they are my friend my best friend my family. I love my cat so much and I know my self that I will always take care of them because all animals have feeling and also they have a heart like human too. Most of the people have best friend I know it is not easy to find a good person that can be your best friend like Jesus and Peter. I know that Peter is best friend of Jesus ,His always said that Jesus is the best! Sometime your best friend can be a human and for some people best friend come like an animal same as me and my lovely cats.

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      My lovely pet as cats

          

            We all know that pets are remarkable for their capacity to love and I believe that most people have a pet at home. Pets for me is not just an animal but there are means a lot to me. My pets is my friend, Pets can enhance my mood, A dosage of Entertainment and help me control my blood pressure.

           The cat is my favorite pet but I have never had a chance to have a party because of my mother does not allow pets in the house, except for the fish and hamster that I do not like. One day I graduated and got a job. I have my own money so I thought it was the time for me to be able to feed the cat because I can take care of the costs and everything. I already have a cat in my heart. My cat is a Thai cat. I do not like Persian cat It is not cute and I think Thai cat looks more beautiful. Especially Wichien Maat That is the cat I dreamed of being the first. It is a beautiful Thai cat. From the day I decided to find a cat. I started looking for kittens on the internet and also on website about cats too. And  I took a little bit time to find it! Finally!!! I found some things that I’m looking for I found the cats that l want and I can’t wait to see them I went to the place sale cats. The place is not far from my house. I went to see the cat at his house and I think I fall in love with male cat because I think it is easy to take care of them I don’t have to worry about belly cat. And then after I choose the cat that I like I think I need to prepare a lot of things for my cat such as bowls of food, sand cat and cat food etc. And finally, I got these two cats with me. When it comes to home at the first day. It looks awesome. Today it has been with me for almost 6 years. I love them so much and I believe they loves me so much too. Getting cats is easy but take care of the cat is more harder. Today I wanna share some tips for taking care of our cats and I think the difficulty things will become easy for us.

           At First Feed them right because food is the most important factor for the cat then you should choosing the right food for each age and special needs for your cat. Our simple guideline is to read the label next to the bag and see what is suitable for your cat by the way we can just find something that you think it is good for your cat but in the end about the taste your cat is a judge. 

           

          Second Find a veterinarian kittens need more veterinarian care. that is because of they need regular vaccinations and regular check up. For all pet please Do not wait for health problems before you go to the clinic.

       Third Tag for safety it is said that take care of the cat is more harder than take care of dog because the cat they can go out on a date by returning just only when they are hungry. So if there lifestyle is not home what will help us. to make sure our cat is safe when they are outside? My recommendation is the collar and the badge. You should put on your cat since childhood. In order if your cat get out of the house , people will know where they are from. In addition, it should be clearly labeled the name of the owner and contact the owner for the emergency will be followed.

       My cats are not just an animal but they are my friend my best friend my family. I love my cat so much and I know my self that I will always take care of them because all animals have feeling and also they have a heart like human too. Most of the people have best friend I know it is not easy to find a good person that can be your best friend like Jesus and Peter. I know that Peter is best friend of Jesus ,His always said that Jesus is the best! Sometime your best friend can be a human and for some people best friend come like an animal same as me and my lovely cats.

         

 

First draft 

      

My lovely pet as cats

          

            We all know that pets are remarkable for their capacity to love and I believe that most people have a pet at home. Pets for me is not just an animal but there are means a lot to me. My pets is my friend, Pets can enhance my mood, A dosage of Entertainment and help me control my blood pressure.

           The cat is my favorite pet. I like cats for a long time already but I have never had a chance to have a party because of my mother does not allow pets in the house, except for the fish and rabbit or hamster that I do not like. One day I graduated and got a job. Have my own income so I thought it was the time for me to be able to feed the cat because I can take care of the costs that will arise from the farming it self. I already have a cat in my heart. My cat is a Thai cat. If it is a genuine cat, it would be good. I do not like Persian cat It is not cute and I think Thai cat looks more beautiful. Especially Wichien Maat That is the cat I dreamed of being the first. It is a beautiful Thai cat. Really fascinated. From the day I decided to find a cat. I started looking for kittens on the internet and also on website about cats too. And  I took a short time to find it! Finally!!! I found some things that I’m looking for I found the cats that l want and I can’t wait to see them I went to the place sale cats. The place is not far from my house. I went to see the cat at his house and I think I fall in love with male cat because I think it is easy to take care of them I don’t have to worry about belly cat. And then after I choose the cat that I like I think I need to prepare a lot of things for my cat such as bowls of food, sand cat and cat food etc. And finally, I got these two cats with me. When it comes to home at the first day. It looks awesome. Today it has been with me for almost 6 years. I love them so much and I believe they loves me so much too. Getting cats is easy but take care of the cat is more harder. Today I wanna share some tips for taking care of our cats and I think the difficulty things will become easy for us.

           At First Feed them right because food is the most important factor for the cat then you should choosing the right food for each age and special needs for your cat. Our simple guideline is to read the label next to the bag and see what is suitable for your cat by the way we can just find something that you think it is good for your cat but in the end about the taste your cat is a judge. 

           

          Second Find a veterinarian kittens need more veterinarian care. that is because of they need regular vaccinations and regular check up. For all pet please Do not wait for health problems before you go to the clinic.

       Third Tag for safety it is said that take care of the cat is more harder than take care of dog because the cat they can go out on a date by returning just only when they are hungry. So if there lifestyle is not home what will help us. to make sure our cat is safe when they are outside? My recommendation is the collar and the badge. You should put on your cat since childhood. In order if your cat get out of the house , people will know where they are from. In addition, it should be clearly labeled the name of the owner and contact the owner for the emergency will be followed.

       My cats are not just an animal but they are my friend my best friend my family. I love my cat so much and I know my self that I will always take care of them because all animals have feeling and also they have a heart like human too. Most of the people have best friend I know it is not easy to find a good person that can be your best friend like Jesus and Peter. I know that Peter is best friend of Jesus ,His always said that Jesus is the best! Sometime your best friend can be a human and for some people best friend come like an animal same as me and my lovely cats.