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           Every moment always make me nervous. I started to learn about how to controls the car first. Once I got behind the wheel and put my feet on the pedal, the process become very nervous because I started the basics of driving stick-shift. Learning how to drive is was not easier than it looks. My ex-boyfriend taught me. He try to made in easy way. I used his car to practise. He didn’t seem to worry about his car, but feel know that I have to be careful. I began to feel more nervous. I was learning step by step that make me less nervous. Here is one lessons I learn from Jesus. Be clear with what you want to achieve and know how much you worth.

         

Jut love the place to go.

            The place is more important to practice. We started to learn how to control the car at the field because we need more area and don’t want to hurt somebody. Then  learned how to park in the parking. Generally, manual cars will have three pedals: clutch, brake and accelerator. Many time I confused with the pedals because I didn’t know about the step, but the more you practice, the more you know. We were going into not too much detail. Many time I feel frustrated what I did and want to give up. One thing that I learned from Jesus is be persistent. The stick-shift is not difficult that automatic, but I always shake myself up by becoming clearer with what I really want. Keep moving forward no matter how many times I have to practice.

       

Save time with the car.

          Save time, before I had a car I always used public transport to go to work for  five days a week. Many times can be extremely stressful with people in the public and sometimes waste my time with traffic. The only things that frustrating is carrying those heavy things bags on the bus. After I had a car I can save my time. I came home early. This is the one reason why I chose to have a car. I have more time to go exercise after work. I decided to do something new. I plan to volunteer and serve on my community. I need to help others people without expecting anything in return, just as Jesus did in the Bible.

           So, I already know driving a motor vehicle is dangerous in our life. There are a lot of things that can affect in our life and what is actually happen on the road everyday. Many people involved in accidents. I try to be a good at driving and safety first based on the laws.

           Study with new things It might be difficult to find a good way to learn all the time. Sometime learning by falling it is a good way too. I hit the big truck and destroy my car before I can drive that made me careful all the time when I touch steering wheel to go somewhere. It is important to be honest about what I did. As long as I still keep doing. I will successful someday.

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           Learning something new in your life can be a scary. I have many things that I have ever learned. I have ever learn how to drive. I was always afraid of driving a car, but I made a decision to drive it was an important high skill on my life that I should learn. I also think it would be a good experience and make me to become more confidence. Just for some reason I don’t want to count on to somebody and I want to make more interesting to others and an expression of freedom to go anywhere, anytime I choose. Thailand was packed with public. There are Uber and Lyft service,Taxis, and public transportation, but just in a big city that more convenient,but in the countryside it wasn’t good for transport. I lived in a big city cars was cost and painful to park, but I really need one. I learn from Jesus that know what you want. Jesus knew that clarity was one of the keys to success and prove your worth through actions, not the word. On my process to start to drive. I had too many things hit me.

          Every moment always make me nervous. I started to learn about how to controls the car first. Once I got behind the wheel and put my feet on the pedal, the process become very nervous because I started the basics of driving stick-shift. Learning how to drive is was not easier than it looks. My ex-boyfriend taught me. He try to made in easy way. I used his car to practise. He didn’t seem to worry about his car, but feel know that I have to be careful. I began to feel more nervous. I was learning step by step that make me less nervous. Here is one lessons I learn from Jesus. Be clear with what you want to achieve and know how much you worth.

           The place is more important to practice. We started to learn how to control the car at the field because we need more area and don’t want to hurt somebody. Then  learned how to park in the parking. Generally, manual cars will have three pedals: clutch, brake and accelerator. Many time I confused with the pedals because I didn’t know about the step, but the more you practice, the more you know. We were going into not too much detail. Many time I feel frustrated what I did and want to give up. One thing that I learned from Jesus is be persistent. The stick-shift is not difficult that automatic, but I always shake myself up by becoming clearer with what I really want. Keep moving forward no matter how many times I have to practice.

            Save time, before I had a car I always used public transport to go to work for  five days a week. Many times can be extremely stressful with people in the public and sometimes waste my time with traffic. The only things that frustrating is carrying those heavy things bags on the bus. After I had a car I can save my time. I came home early. This is the one reason why I chose to have a car. I have more time to go exercise after work. I decided to do something new. I plan to volunteer and serve on my community. I need to help others people without expecting anything in return, just as Jesus did in the Bible.

           Study with new things It might be difficult to find a good way to learn all the time. Sometime learning by falling it is a good way too. I hit the big truck and destroy my car before I can drive that made me careful all the time when I touch steering wheel to go somewhere. It is important to be honest about what I did. As long as I still keep doing. I will successful someday.

 

Second draft

           Learning something new in your life can be a scary. I have many things that I have ever learned. I have ever learn how to drive. I was always afraid of driving a car, but I made a decision to drive it was an important high skill on my life that I should learn. I also think it would be a good experience and make me to become more confidence person in my family. Just for some reason I don’t want to count on to somebody and I want to make more interesting to others and an expression of freedom to go anywhere, anytime I choose. Thailand was packed with public. There are Uber and Lyft service,Taxis, and public transportation, but just in a big city that more convenient,but in the countryside it wasn’t good for transport. I lived in a big city cars was cost and painful to park, but I really need one. I learn from Jesus that know what you want. Jesus knew that clarity was one of the keys to success and prove your worth through actions, not the word. On my process to start to drive. I had too many things hit me.

           Every moment always make me nervous. I started to learn about how to controls the car first. Once I got behind the wheel and put my feet on the pedal, the process become very nervous because I started the basics of driving stick-shift. Learning how to drive is was not easier than it looks. My ex-boyfriend taught me. He try to made in easy way. I used his car to practise. He didn’t seem to worry about his car, but feel know that I have to be careful. I began to feel more nervous. I was learning step by step that make me less nervous. Here is one lessons I learn from Jesus. Be clear with what you want to achieve and know how much you worth.

            The place is more important to practice. We started to learn how to control the car at the field because we need more area and don’t want to hurt somebody. Then  learned how to park in the parking. Generally, manual cars will have three pedals: clutch, brake and accelerator. Many time I confused with the pedals because I didn’t know about the step, but the more you practice, the more you know. We were going into not too much detail. Many time I feel frustrated what I did and want to give up. One thing that I learned from Jesus is be persistent. The stick-shift is not difficult that automatic, but I always shake myself up by becoming clearer with what I really want. Keep moving forward no matter how many times I have to practice.

            Save time, before I had a car I always used public transport to go to work for  five days a week. Many times can be extremely stressful with people in the public and sometimes waste my time with traffic. The only things that frustrating is carrying those heavy things bags on the bus. After I had a car I can save my time. I came home early. This is the one reason why I chose to have a car. I have more time to go exercise after work. I decided to do something new. I plan to volunteer and serve on my community. I need to help others people without expecting anything in return, just as Jesus did in the Bible.

            Study with new things It might be difficult to find a good way to learn all the time. Sometime learning by falling it is a good way too. I hit the big truck and destroy my car before I can drive that made me careful all the time when I touch steering wheel to go somewhere. It is important to be honest about what I did. As long as I still keep doing. I will successful someday.

First draft

           Learning something new in your life can be a scary. I have many things that I have ever learned. I have ever learn how to drive. I was always afraid of driving a car, but I made a decision to drive it was an important high skill on my life that I should learn. I also think it would be a good experience and make me to become more confidence person in my family because In my family just only me that couldn’t drive a car. This is not surprise everyone can do that, just for some reason I don’t want to count on to somebody and I want to make more interesting to others and an expression of freedom to go anywhere, anytime I choose. Thailand was packed with public. There are Uber and Lyft service,Taxis, and public transportation, but just in a big city that more convenient,but in the countryside it wasn’t good for transport. I lived in a big city cars was cost and painful to park, but I really need one. I learn from Jesus that know what you want. Jesus knew that clarity was one of the keys to success and prove your worth through actions, not the word. On my process to start to drive. I had too many things hit me.

           Every moment always make me nervous. I started to learn about how to controls the car first. Once I got behind the wheel and put my feet on the pedal, the process become very nervous because I started the basics of driving stick-shift. Learning how to drive is was not easier than it looks. My ex-boyfriend taught me. He try to made in easy way. I used his car to practise. He didn’t seem to worry about his car, but feel know that I have to be careful. I began to feel more nervous. I was learning step by step that make me less nervous. Here is one lessons I learn from Jesus. Be clear with what you want to achieve and know how much you worth.

           The place is more important to practice. We started to learn how to control the car at the field because we need more area and don’t want to hurt somebody. Then  learned how to park in the parking. Generally, manual cars will have three pedals: clutch, brake and accelerator. Many time I confused with the pedals because i didn’t know about the step, but the more you practice, the more you know. We were going into not too much detail. Many time I feel frustrated what I did and want to give up. One thing that I learned from Jesus is be persistent. The stick-shift is not difficult that automatic, but I always shake myself up by becoming clearer with what I really want. Keep moving forward no matter how many times I have to practice.

           Save time, before I had a car I always used public transport to go to work for  five days a week. Many times can be extremely stressful with people in the public and sometimes waste my time with traffic. The only things that frustrating is carrying those heavy things bags on the bus. After I had a car I can save my time. I came home early and did many things at home and I have more time with my family. This is the one reason why I chose to have a car. I have more time to go exercise after work. When I have more free time in my life. I decided to do something new. I plan to volunteer and serve on my community. I need to help others people without expecting anything in return, just as Jesus did in the Bible.

           Study with new things It might be difficult to find a good way to learn all the time. Sometime learning by falling it is a good way too. I hit the big truck and destroy my car before I can drive that made me careful all the time when I touch steering wheel to go somewhere. It is important to be honest about what I did. As long as I still keep doing. I will successful someday.

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Final Exam Possible Score Sunthratharathon, Parisa
Formatting 10 5
Writing Process 20 20
Topic Choice 10 8
Grammar 10 5
Total 38