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Shhh .. When do you keep a secret ?

Mark

Final Draft

Them : How to be like Jesus

Typed of essay : process essay

Topic :  When do you keep a secret?

 Shhh .. “ I have the secret to tell you ” Have you ever heard there are no secret in world ? In my opinion, Before you will tell the secret to someone that should to know who is listening to you and result after you telling. So you can check a person who you can telling or how to keeping secrets in below.

  1. Looking someone to tell.

 If you are looking for someone who you can tell the secret that can be both side. If you tell with the good person that will be lucky for you. In other hand, if anyone know your seco that it will make you stressful. As like Jesus, When Jesus told secret about “The Parable of the Sower”. Jesus Jesus said, “Whoever has ears to hear, let them hear.” (Mark 4:9) If you must tell to someone, be sure you choose the right person. You should thinking about your past experiences with that person. Have they been trustworthy and thoughtful in the past?

A person who you telling

2. How much value of your secrets.

Before you going to telling to your friend and family. You should know the proposed of your secret. For example, to find the answer, figure out the problem or just telling the emotional. You should to know how important of your secret. If your secret is serious then you should tell the listener to pay more attention and give them the opportunity to help you.

Shouldn’t think too much

3. Keep it.

if you can’t tell anyone about your secrets then you should to learn how to manage your problem. For Instance, Push the secret out of your mind, stay busy with other thing.Such as, Do exercise, listening music, Do your favorite hobby (Drawing and Writing) and you shouldn’t thinking too much.

4. Share experience.

I have some idea to telling you. You can write down on social media when people searching about this. It’s will be a good information to them. Because Social media is world wide. Your secret will be same with someone then you can find the answer and fix it. However before you give information on social media that you should be careful about your identity. Such as, address, phone numbers, age etc. Don’t let people know about yourself because trouble. After You are sharing to outside then you can ask people how to solve problems or you can give them idea about how understanding.

Sharing your problem

In the end, The secret are bad or good that It is depend on you. You should to know how important of your secret. The secret is difficult to keep. You can be a good listener, helper or you can be teller. So you should to trust yourself and a person you will telling. As Jesus ( Mark 4:21) He said to them, “Do you bring in a lamp to put it under a bowl or a bed? Instead, don’t you put it on its stand? For whatever is hidden is meant to be disclosed, and whatever is concealed is meant to be brought out into the open.You should avoid often to telling secret. Don’t expectation people can keep your secret forever because you already tell them. So make sure if you want to keep the secret that you shouldn’t tell anyone.

Mark

Feedback Draft

Them : How to be like Jesus

Typed of essay : process essay

Topic :  When do you keep a secret?

Shhh .. “ I have the secret to tell you ” Have you ever heard that no secret in world ? In my opinion, Before you will tell the secret to someone that should to know value of secret and know about result after you telling, to be conscious and to be providence. So i have a process to check a person who you can tell a secret or how to keeping by yourself.

First, If you are looking for someone who you can tell the secret that can be both side. If you get the good person that will be positive for you. In other hand,if person tell your secret to another people that it will make you stressful. As like Jesus, When Jesus told secret about “The Parable of the Sower”. Jesus Jesus said, “Whoever has ears to hear, let them hear.” (Mark 4:9) If you must tell to someone, be sure you choose the right person. You should thinking about your past experiences with that person. Have they been trustworthy and thoughtful in the past?

Second, Before you going to telling to your friend and family. You should know the proposed of your secret. For example, to find the answer, figure out the problem or just telling the emotional. You should to know how important of your secret. If your secret is so serious then you should tell the listener to pay attention to you. and let’s give them the opportunity to help you.

Third, if you can’t tell anyone about your secrets then you should to learn how to manage your problem. For Instance, Push the secret out of your mind, stay busy with other thing.Such as, Do exercise, listening music, Do your favorite hobby (Drawing,Writing or Crafts) and you shouldn’t thinking too much.

Before the end, I have some one idea to telling you, if you want to sharing the secret on your mind. So you can write to social media when people searching about this which it might be a good information to them. Because The social media have a lot of people use in the world. Your secret might be same a problem with someone then you can find the answer and fix it. However before you give information on social media that you should be careful that you protect your identity. Such as, address, phone numbers, age etc. Don’t let people know about yourself because it’s might be not be secret. After You are sharing to outside then you can ask people how to solve your problem or you can give them idea about how understanding of problem.

In the end, The secret are bad or good that It is depend on you. You should to know how important of your secret. The secret is difficult to keep. You should be a good listener, helper or you can be teller then you should to trust yourself and a person you will telling. As Jesus ( Mark 4:21) He said to them, “Do you bring in a lamp to put it under a bowl or a bed? Instead, don’t you put it on its stand? For whatever is hidden is meant to be disclosed, and whatever is concealed is meant to be brought out into the open.You should avoid often to telling secret. It is easy people understand you. Don’t expectation people can keep your secret forever because you already tell them. So make sure if you want to keep the secret that you shouldn’t tell anyone.

Mark

Review by Phirinya

Them : How to be like Jesus

Typed of essay : process essay

Topic :  When do you keep a secret?

  • Title is too long.
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Shhhhh .. “ I have the secret to tell you ” Have you ever heard that no secret in world ? In my opinion, Before you will tell the secret to someone that should to know value of secret, know about consequences after you telling, to be conscious and to be providence. You should to know the person  who you will telling. Did they can keep your secret or not ? If not, then you have to keep on your mind. But how do you can know about this. So i have a process to check a person who you can tell a secret or how to keeping by yourself.

First, If you are looking for someone who you can tell the secret that can be both side. If you get the good person that will be nice for you but if you get the person who can’t keep your secret then it will make you stressful. As like Jesus, When Jesus told secret about “The Parable of the Sower”. Jesus Jesus said, “Whoever has ears to hear, let them hear.” (Mark 4:9) who understand the parable that will be good for them but if they don’t get it. They will throw away the word of Jesus. And If you absolutely must tell to someone, be sure you choose the right person. You should thinking about your past experiences with that person. Have they been trustworthy and thoughtful in the past?

Second, You should to thinking before you going to tell secret to your friend and family. You should know the proposed of your secret. For example, to find the answer, figure out the problem or just telling the emotional. You should to know how important of your secret. If your secret is so serious then you should tell the listener to pay attention to you. and find out your problem and may give them the opportunity to help you.

Third, if you can’t tell anyone about your secrets then you should to learn how to manage your problem. For Instance, Push the secret out of your mind, stay busy with other thing.Such as, Do exercise, listening music, Do your favorite hobby (Drawing,Writing or Crafts). If you always thinking it will be much more difficult to keep yourself from telling someone. So you shouldn’t thinking about the secret too much.

Before the end, I have some one idea to telling you, if you want to sharing the secret on your mind. So you can write to social media that like a experience when people searching about it that it might be a good information to them. Because There are many people using social media in the world. It is too many way to using For example ; for finding work, studying and researching, for doing and sharing information of business and for dating with someone etc. Your case might be same a problem with someone. However before you give information on social media that you should be private that you should to protect your identity. You should be careful about your real information. Such as your address, your phone numbers, your age and your negative opinion etc. Don’t let people know about yourself than might be not be secate. After You should to sharing to outside then you can ask people how to solve your problem or you can give them idea about how stand it after you undo it. It might a good idea for someone who are the issue about secret thing.

In the end, It is not all secret are bad or good. It is depend on you. You should to know how important of your secret. The secret is difficult to keep. You can be good listener, helper or you can be teller then you should to trust yourself and a person you will telling. As Jesus ( Mark 4:21) He said to them, “Do you bring in a lamp to put it under a bowl or a bed? Instead, don’t you put it on its stand? For whatever is hidden is meant to be disclosed, and whatever is concealed is meant to be brought out into the open.If anyone has ears to hear, let them hear.” You should avoid often to telling secret to anyone. It is easy people understand your easily. Don’t expectation people can keep your secret forever because you already tell them that it is not secret anymore. So make sure if you want to keep the secret that you shouldn’t tell anyone.

Mark

Frist Draft

Them : How to be like Jesus

Typed of essay : process essay

Topic :  When do you keep a secret?

Shhhhh .. “ I have the secret to tell you ” Have you ever heard that no secret in world ? In my opinion, Before you will tell the secret to someone that should to know value of secret, know about consequences after you telling, to be conscious and to be providence. You should to know the person  who you will telling. Did they can keep your secret or not ? If not, then you have to keep on your mind. But how do you can know about this. So i have a process to check a person who you can tell a secret or how to keeping by yourself.

First, If you are looking for someone who you can tell the secret that can be both side. If you get the good person that will be nice for you but if you get the person who can’t keep your secret then it will make you stressful. As like Jesus, When Jesus told secret about “The Parable of the Sower”. Jesus Jesus said, “Whoever has ears to hear, let them hear.” (Mark 4:9) who understand the parable that will be good for them but if they don’t get it. They will throw away the word of Jesus. And If you absolutely must tell to someone, be sure you choose the right person. You should thinking about your past experiences with that person. Have they been trustworthy and thoughtful in the past?

Second, You should to thinking before you going to tell secret to your friend and family. You should know the proposed of your secret. For example, to find the answer, figure out the problem or just telling the emotional. You should to know how important of your secret. If your secret is so serious then you should tell the listener to pay attention to you. and find out your problem and may give them the opportunity to help you.

Third, if you can’t tell anyone about your secrets then you should to learn how to manage your problem. For Instance, Push the secret out of your mind, stay busy with other thing.Such as, Do exercise, listening music, Do your favorite hobby (Drawing,Writing or Crafts). If you always thinking it will be much more difficult to keep yourself from telling someone. So you shouldn’t thinking about the secret too much.

Before the end, I have some one idea to telling you, if you want to sharing the secret on your mind. So you can write to social media that like a experience when people searching about it that it might be a good information to them. Because There are many people using social media in the world. It is too many way to using For example ; for finding work, studying and researching, for doing and sharing information of business and for dating with someone etc. Your case might be same a problem with someone. However before you give information on social media that you should be private that you should to protect your identity. You should be careful about your real information. Such as your address, your phone numbers, your age and your negative opinion etc. Don’t let people know about yourself than might be not be secate. After You should to sharing to outside then you can ask people how to solve your problem or you can give them idea about how stand it after you undo it. It might a good idea for someone who are the issue about secret thing.

In the end, It is not all secret are bad or good. It is depend on you. You should to know how important of your secret. The secret is difficult to keep. You can be good listener, helper or you can be teller then you should to trust yourself and a person you will telling. As Jesus ( Mark 4:21) He said to them, “Do you bring in a lamp to put it under a bowl or a bed? Instead, don’t you put it on its stand? For whatever is hidden is meant to be disclosed, and whatever is concealed is meant to be brought out into the open.If anyone has ears to hear, let them hear.” You should avoid often to telling secret to anyone. It is easy people understand your easily. Don’t expectation people can keep your secret forever because you already tell them that it is not secret anymore. So make sure if you want to keep the secret that you shouldn’t tell anyone.