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The Purpose of my life

I am in the USA now. Sometimes I don’t believe it even though I am in California, USA. I think that I feel like dreaming I mean it is not real my life but when I am
walking on the street, I can see many kinds of people from another countries and talking english and different languages so I can realize I am in the USA now.
I am often thinking about my life,dream,vision,family and future.
I wanted to live ordinary life in Korea.I am Christain. I believe in Jesus and God and heaven. one of my dream is getting marrige with Christain guy and going to church every Sunday, going to work and having babies as a God’s gift also
I want to preach the gospel through my life and experience.That is my dream.
However I haven’t met my the one and quit the job because I used to work very hard until midnight and got a lot of stress in my workplace.
It made me getting weak and sick day by day. I went to see a doctor “You need to take a break and change your job or you are very sick and serious problem”
I had to make a decision at that time so I was thinking about my life and what’s going on my future life. I was so sad and depressed sometimes I was crying out when I was praying to God. “I don’t know what’s happening in my life? I am really doing my job hard and I have a wonderful dreams in Jesus but why do I suffer this time and feel very lonely? I am so afraid of my condition and life. Please help me! Please lead me to your good will and make a way for me! I only trust you!”
I have stopped all of my work and went to church to worship and pray to God.
I got some part time jobs like bakery cafe and Japanese restaurant etc. I never had experience in this fields. I was an elementary school teacher and kindergarten teacher. I just knew about teaching and students before. I have got new experience at that time.I think Service job is one of hardest work but I have learned how to serve customer, how to calculate the money also how to respect other people etc.
I was interested in coffee and bakery like baking bread,cookies and dessert so
I went to the bakery & coffee school to learn about that. It was really exciting for me. After baking class, I used to share what I made bread,cookies and dessert for my friends and church paster and Sunday school students.
Even though it was small things but it made them very please and happy.
I have realized that I would like to share something for the people expecially poor and weak people like children and elders.
I went to mission trip a few times with my church members in Philippines
we have worshiped in the deep mountain church with native people.
They were very poor and skinny but they were smiling all the time and listened to
about Gospel and Jesus and God. It was so impressed for me and then I have change my thought and life plan at that time. I really wanted to live for God and follow his good will and helped the poor and weak people.
For a while I was taking break and learning new things and working part time job,
I have heard the news about one of church member sister is going to open the carehome in California,USA. She has left Korea 15 years ago to work in the hospital in USA as a nurse. She has bought a house a few years ago because
she wanted to run own carehome for elders to help and preach Gospel.
Finally she was opening that carehome in March,2018 this year.
My church paster said to me “I always pray for you, I think you are loved special
love from God. He wants you help poor people so why don’t you pray for helping elders in Jinyoung’s carehome in America? What do you think about that?”
I have prayed several months about that because I was not sure God’s will and afraid of my life in other country. However when I was praying, I felt more comfortabe and hopeful about that decision. I just believe Jesus and I was sure for that God will make a way for me and lead me in his good way.
” In all your ways acknowledge him, and he will make your paths straight-
Provers 3:6″

Final writing

The Purpose of my life

I am in the USA now. Sometimes I don’t believe it even though I am in California, USA. I think that I feel like dreaming I mean it is not real my life but when I am
walking on the street, I can see many kinds of people from another countries and talking english and different languages so I can realize I am in the USA now.
I am often thinking about my life,dream,vision,family and future.
I wanted to live ordinary life in Korea.I am Christain. I believe in Jesus and God and heaven. one of my dream is getting marrige with Christain guy and going to church every Sunday, going to work and having babies as a God’s gift also
I want to preach the gospel through my life and experience.That is my dream.
However I haven’t met my the one and quit the job because I used to work very hard until midnight and got a lot of stress in my workplace.
It made me getting weak and sick day by day. I went to see a doctor “You need to take a break and change your job or you are very sick and serious problem”
I had to make a decision at that time so I was thinking about my life and what’s going on my future life. I was so sad and depressed sometimes I was crying out when I was praying to God. “I don’t know what’s happening in my life? I am really doing my job hard and I have a wonderful dreams in Jesus but why do I suffer this time and feel very lonely? I am so afraid of my condition and life. Please help me! Please lead me to your good will and make a way for me! I only trust you!”
I have stopped all of my work and went to church to worship and pray to God.
I got some part time jobs like bakery cafe and Japanese restaurant etc. I never had experience in this fields. I was an elementary school teacher and kindergarten teacher. I just knew about teaching and students before. I have got new experience at that time.I think Service job is one of hardest work but I have learned how to serve customer, how to calculate the money also how to respect other people etc.
I was interested in coffee and bakery like baking bread,cookies and dessert so
I went to the bakery & coffee school to learn about that. It was really exciting for me. After baking class, I used to share what I made bread,cookies and dessert for my friends and church paster and Sunday school students.
Even though it was small things but it made them very please and happy.
I have realized that I would like to share something for the people expecially poor and weak people like children and elders.
I went to mission trip a few times with my church members in Philippines
we have worshiped in the deep mountain church with native people.
They were very poor and skinny but they were smiling all the time and listened to
about Gospel and Jesus and God. It was so impressed for me and then I have change my thought and life plan at that time. I really wanted to live for God and follow his good will and helped the poor and weak people.
For a while I was taking break and learning new things and working part time job,
I have heard the news about one of church member sister is going to open the carehome in California,USA. She has left Korea 15 years ago to work in the hospital in USA as a nurse. She has bought a house a few years ago because
she wanted to run own carehome for elders to help and preach Gospel.
Finally she was opening that carehome in March,2018 this year.
My church paster said to me “I always pray for you, I think you are loved special
love from God. He wants you help poor people so why don’t you pray for helping elders in Jinyoung’s carehome in America? What do you think about that?”
I have prayed several months about that because I was not sure God’s will and afraid of my life in other country. However when I was praying, I felt more comfortabe and hopeful about that decision. I just believe Jesus and I was sure for that God will make a way for me and lead me in his good way.
” In all your ways acknowledge him, and he will make your paths straight-
Provers 3:6″
I sometimes remind this verse from God.
In March.30.2018, I just have left everything like my family.my friends.my job.my chuch members etc. I was starting new American life from in April.2018.
I have worked in carehome for grandmothers as a volunteer for 6 months after school. I have met one Korean grandmother. two American old people. Even though I am not good at speaking English, I was nice to people and wanted to help. They are over 90s but they can walk and eat well,love to talk with people. Every Sunday we worshiped God and pray together. They really wish to go to heaven as soon as possible.
Whenever I served for them I often said “God loves you! We confess our sin! by Bood of Jesus, we are saved. so we are going to meet in the heaven someday!”
They always nodded and smiled.I was so thankful to say Gospel these people.
One of amazing God’s will is I entered Oikos University fall semester in this year.
I could learned Bible and Gospel in English.Also I was trying to write become like Jesus though my life and experience
as a homework. I am not good at writing English but it was a challenge to improve my English ability. I am interested in psycology as well. I have met lots of great international friends in Oikos school.
I am really excited next semester and learning Bible and University life in America. I am ogarnized person it means I always make plans what to do today.a week.a month.a year but I don’t make any plan and decision in USA.However I believe Jesus and God’s will. I always pray for my mission and life. Nobody knows what happening in this time. I just rely on only God and follow his words and will.Because That is my purpose of life
I am loved and saved byJesus and God.
I will give thanks to God and love God
and sharing his endless love forever.
Thank you Lord, Jesus You are my savior and Messaih. I will worship you all of my life.

Final Exam Possible Score Sangtaweep, Songtai
Formatting 10 5
Writing Process 20 10
Topic Choice 10 5
Grammar 10 5
Total 25